Unit 5 单元写作【知识精讲+拓展延伸】九年级 英语教材精讲课件（人教版）.pptx

人教版 九年级上册单元话题写作话题分析话题分析一、话题分析本单元以“中国制造的东西”为话题，围绕某种产品的材质、产地、用途及特殊性等信息而展开与之相关的话题作文通常会涉及民间艺术以及文化传承介绍特色产品本话题适合记叙说明两种题材相结合写作此类话题作文时，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，行文中注意准确捕捉写作的“精髓”，表达被描述的事物时，有可能要用到被动语态结构，写作时要立足事实，表达真情实感写作步骤写作步骤“总分总法”写产品介绍类的作文1.总起点明产品的名称；2.详细地描写产品的特征样式、质量、性能；3.总结评价I have a handbag.It is beautiful.Its made in Suzhou,Jiangsu Province.Its made of leather（皮革）.Also,its completely made by hand.Its red.Its so special because it has a piece of embroidery.The flowers and birds on it are so lively that you may think the picture on the handbag is real.I like it very much.Read the passage,what can you learn?What it What it looks likelooks like物品样子What its What its material ismaterial is他的材质Where it Where it is madeis made在哪里制作Why it is Why it is specialspecial为什么是特殊的What the What the product isproduct is产品是什么Who it is Who it is made bymade by被谁制作What it What it can docan do它的功能More More informationinformation(symbol,how to(symbol,how to make.)make.)how to discribe objects如何描述物品Vocabulary Collections词汇收集素材积累产品介绍类常用词汇：chopstick,fork,blouse,gloves,glass,cotton,steel,handbag,material;produce,process,product,local,heat,bemadeof,byhand,tuninto,cover.with,everyday,lively,beknownfor,soft,strong,interesting,smooth,real,small,cute,useful,helpful回顾单元写作素材回顾单元写作素材产品介绍类常用句型：1.Mytown/city/countryisfamousfor.2.isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.3.Itsmoreconvenientfor.4.ismadeof/from/by/in.5.is/areknownfor.6.is/areusedfor.7.is/are special because.8.China is famous for 9.Its great that China is so good at.10.wish that in the futurewill 11.These usually try to show.12.They are seen as symbols of.万能模板开开门见山，直接表山，直接表述你要介述你要介绍的的对象象讲物品的物品的产地，原料，地，原料，外外观，制作方式用途等，制作方式用途等讲感受感受物品名称产地地 It is made inIt is made in 地点原料原料It is made of/from It is made of/from 材料外外观制作方式制作方式There are different kinds of There are different kinds of pictures on itpictures on it，such as such as 举例It is made by It is made by 方式用途用途It is used for It is used for 用途It is good for It is good for ，we should we should 优点美好祝愿1.I have a/an+物品2.物品+is famous in my city/town.3.One of famous products in my country is+物品3a What are some special things that your hometown or city is famous for?What the product isWhat it is made of/fromWho it is made byWhere it is madeWhat it can doWhy it is specialDuilian要点提示：要点提示：1.风筝的象征意义；风筝的象征意义；2.原材料：竹子、纸或布原材料：竹子、纸或布或塑料或塑料(plastic)、细绳细绳(string)；3.用途：过去用于送信，用途：过去用于送信，现在用来娱乐现在用来娱乐和锻炼。

和锻炼思路点拨思路点拨】1.定基调定基调体裁：应用文体裁：应用文(邮件邮件)；邮件的主体部分为说明文；邮件的主体部分为说明文时态：介绍事物时用一般现在时时态：介绍事物时用一般现在时人称：第三人称人称：第三人称2.谋谋布局、布局、写句子写句子isfamous/known/well-knownforitskitesAninternationalkitefestivalisheldinmycityinAprileveryyearKitesareloved/liked/enjoyedbylotsof/many/alotofpeopletheyareoftenpaintedwithcolorfuldrawingskitesareusedforfunandexercise3.巧巧衔接衔接第一次第一次提到提到“风筝风筝”时用时用kites，再次提到时可以用，再次提到时可以用they代替；为了避免重复代替；为了避免重复，inmycity在成篇章时可以用在成篇章时可以用here来代替，这都是使用照应手段来使文章衔接的方法来代替，这都是使用照应手段来使文章衔接的方法在在陈述风筝的意义时可以使用表示原因的连词陈述风筝的意义时可以使用表示原因的连词because，这是使用逻辑纽带的方式使文章衔接的方法。

这是使用逻辑纽带的方式使文章衔接的方法4.成篇章成篇章DearMarcus,Howareyoudoingthesedays?Imexcitedtohearfromyou.Idliketotellyousomethingaboutkitesinmycity._Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillflyakitehere!Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua5.化化“平凡平凡”为为“非凡非凡”Peopleusedkitestosendamessageintheolddays.Kiteswereusedforsendingamessageintheolddays.DearMarcus,Howareyoudoingthesedays?Imexcitedtohearfromyou.Idliketotellyousomethingaboutkitesinmycity.Mycity,WeifanginShandongProvince,isfamousforitskites.AninternationalkitefestivalisheldhereinAprileveryyear.Kitesarelovedbylotsofpeoplebecausetheyriseintotheairwithpeopleswishesforabetterlife.Theyareusuallymadeofbamboo,paperorclothorplasticandstring.Thereareallkindsofkitesandtheyareoftenpaintedwithcolorfuldrawings.Andkiteshereoftenhavespecialdesigns.Peopleusedkitestosendamessageintheolddays.Today,theyareusedforfunandexercise.Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillflyakitehere!Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua写作训练二写作训练二假如你叫李华,来自江西省景德镇市。

近日，你的加拿大笔友Marcus发来一封电子邮件，他说要来你市旅游，询问你市以什么而闻名，并让你推荐有什么值得赠送朋友的纪念品请你根据下面的要点提示给他回复邮件要点提示：1.以瓷器(china)闻名及其意义；2.原材料：陶土；3.用途：可供人们欣赏、也可用来装(contain)东西；4.最佳推荐：青花瓷(blueandwhiteporcelain)思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：应用文(邮件)；邮件的主体部分为说明文时态：介绍事物时用一般现在时人称：第三人称列提纲写句子引出介绍的产品(1)Mycity,JingdezheninJiangxiProvince,_.介绍产品意义(2)Chinaisspecial.ChinaisanexampleofexquisiteChinesecraftsmanship(精美的中国工艺)._(瓷器是中国传统文化的一个象征).原材料(3)_.介绍产品用途(4)_.(5)_.Manythingsaremadeofchinainoureverydaylife,suchascups,bowlsandplates.最佳推荐(6)_(每天有许多不同种类的瓷器被生产)inmycity.Blueandwhiteporcelainisthemostfamousone.Youcanbuysomeforyourfriendsandrelatives.邀请及祝愿Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtimehere!【参考范文】DearMarcus,Howareyoudoingthesedays?Imexcitedtohearfromyou.Idliketointroducesomethingspecialinmycitytoyou.Mycity,JingdezheninJiangxiProvince,isfamousforitschina.ChinaisspecialbecauseitisanexampleofexquisiteChinesecraftsmanshipanditisasymboloftraditionalChineseculture.Itismadefromclay.Itismadetobeenjoyedbypeople.Anditisusedforcontainingthings.Manythingsaremadeofchinainoureverydaylife,suchascups,bowlsandplates.Everydaymanydifferentkindsofchinaareproducedhere.Blueandwhiteporcelainisthemostfamousone.Itiskno。