Unit 3 Sports and fitness Writing 教案-高考英语备考复习重点资料归纳汇总.doc

Unit 3　Sports and fitness Writing本单元的写作项目属于记叙文体类别中的“讲述自身发展变化过程”的记叙文这类题目要求我们找出自身的问题并描述其状态然后写出改变的原因及方法最后表达自己的决心和愿望一、基本框架1．开头(beginning)——开门见山，指出自己的问题，并描述问题的情况或导致的结果2．主体(body)——写出想要解决问题的原因及如何解决问题的方法3．结尾(ending)——结合上文，表达自己的决心和愿望二、注意事项(1)仔细审题，敲定主题文章的目的、内容、结构层次以及语言的运用，都要围绕主题进行2)根据情景提示和主题，安排文章的结构层次，用每段的首句即主题句来指明段落的中心思想安排好关键的主题句，就会使中心更加突出，主题清楚3)要进行审题，初写时，多模仿句型写简单句，循序渐进，逐渐深化4)写作前最好有个简明扼要的提纲，让自己的行文有章可循审题后要先写出草稿，经过修改之后，再正式成文常见精彩开头1．I started doing sth.two years ago and have been addicted to it.2．Until last year，I was trying to do...3．I fall in the bad habit of doing...three years ago.4．Unluckily I find I have been addicted to...5．I have been annoyed about the question that....6．I was anxious that I could not concentrate on...文章主体部分常用句型1．I was taken off the school football team because I was unfit.2．I know it was time for sb.to do sth.3．I prefer to do rather than do...4．I would do sth.instead of doing sth.5．If I feel nervous or stressed，I'll do something...rather than do sth.6．Rather than do sth.，I would prefer to do sth.结尾段常用句型1．Finally，I stopped doing sth....2．At last I became both healthier and happier by doing...3．If I weaken and do sth.，again I won't give it up.4．I'll try again，and I will succeed in the end.5．I hope I will live as healthy and happy a life as they do.6．I'm determined not to do the thing any longer.假如你是李华，两年前开始吸烟并上瘾，现在满身烟味发现很难戒掉，直到有一天因为身体不适被学校足球队除名，开始下决心戒烟。

方法如下：1．扔掉最后一包烟，列出戒烟的好处；2．随时提醒自己是非吸烟者；3．在紧张或压抑时做放松练习请你根据上述内容写一篇100词左右的记叙文要求：1.表达清楚，语言简洁，流畅；2．尽量运用对比等方法进行细节描述，突出人物的变化发展过程提示词：cigarette 香烟　non­smoker 非吸烟者体裁记叙文时态一般过去时和一般现在时为主主题写人的记叙文人称第一人称结构第一段：指出问题及其状态；第二段：解决问题的原因和方法；第三段：表达作者的决心和愿望Ⅰ.精选单词短语1．quit 停止；戒掉2．addicted 有瘾的，上瘾的3．give up 放弃，戒掉4．rather than而不是5．make a list of 列表……Ⅱ.巧用句式语法(一)完成句子1．I find it difficult to give it up.我发现戒掉它很难it作形式宾语)2．I know it's time for me to quit smoking.我知道是该戒烟了It's time for sb.to do sth.)3．Every time I feel like smoking a cigarette,_I will remind myself that I'm a non­smoker instead of turning to it.每次我想吸烟时就提醒自己是非吸烟者而不是去拿烟(吸)。

every time用作连词，instead of)4．If I feel nervous or stressed，I'll do some relaxation exercises rather than reach for a cigarette.如果我感觉紧张或压抑时，我会做一些放松练习而不是去抽烟5．I do hope I can live as healthy and happy a life as others do.我真的希望我能和其他人一样过健康和幸福的生活强调谓语动词，as...as)(二)句式升级6．虽然我没有进行过多的运动，我也常常变得气喘吁吁和疲惫不堪用even if/though改写)Although/Though I didn't take much exercise，I often become breathless and very tired.→I often became breathless and very tired even if/though I didn't take much exercise.7．我是时候该戒烟了用It's high time that 从句)It's time for me to give up smoking.→It's high time that I gave up smoking.8．我一想要吸烟就提醒自己是一位非吸烟者。

用every time改写)Remind myself that I was a non­smoker as soon as I would like to smoke.→Remind myself that I was a non­smoker every time I felt like smoking.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[参考范文]　I started smoking two years ago，and then I had been addicted to it.My friends and family all thought I smelt terrible，but I found it hard to give it up.I also noticed that I often became breathless and tired，even though I didn't take much exercise.Until one day last year，I was taken off the school football team because I was unfit，I know it was time for me to quit smoking.Firstly I throw away the last packet of cigarettes and made a list of all the benefits I would get from stopping smoking.Secondly，remind myself that I was a non­smoker instead of turning to cigarettes every time I felt like smoking.In the end，if I felt nervous or stressed，I would do some relaxation exercises rather than reach for a cigarette.Finally I stopped smoking.Now I'm one of the members of our football team again.I also can focus on my study.I do hope I can live as healthy and happy a life as others do from now on.【导读】　《我的生活》是海伦·凯勒的处女作。

作品一发表，立即在美国引起了轰动，被称为“世界文学史上无与伦比的杰作”本书由海伦·凯勒的《我的生活》《走出黑暗》《老师》三本书以及发表在美国《大西洋月刊》上的著名散文《假如给我三天光明》编译而成，完整系统地介绍了海伦·凯勒丰富、生动、真实而伟大的一生，许多文字还是第一次与中国读者见面节选】The Story of My LifeIt is with a kind of fear that I begin to write the history of my life.I have，as it were，a superstitious hesitation in lifting the veil that clings about my childhood like a golden mist.T。