人教版八年级下册英语Unit5-sectionB-3a-self-check-写作课件.pptx

Section B(3a-Self Check)Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?本单元的话题是“难忘的经历”，该话题主要描述自己经历的一见难忘的事，写作时套明确事情发生的时间，地点，经过等单元写作目标单元写作目标主要时态：一般过去时+过去进行时3a Make notes about an event you remember well.What was the event?When did it happen?Where did it happen?What were you doing?What were your friends doing?Why was it important?Why do you remember this event?探究点一探究点一 Writing3b Write a short article about the important event in 3a.Try to write three paragraphs.First,write about the event(when and where it happened).An important event that I remember well was _.It happened in/on _ at/in _.Jiuzhaigou EarthquakeAug 8,2017Jiuzhaigou,SichuanNext,write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened.When I heard the news of this event/When this event happened,I was _.My friends were _.All of us felt_.doing my homeworkwatching an exciting movie in the living roomso scared that we could not think clearly any more.Then,write about why this event was important.This event has important meaning to me because _./I remember this event well because _.So many people died in that accident.And I remember that so many doctors and other people come here to help us An important eventAn important event【that I remember well】was Jiuzhaigou Earthquake.It happened on Aug 8,2017 in Jiuzhaigou,Sichuan.【When I heard the news of this event,】I was working.My friends were watching games on TV.This event is very important to me because more than 20 people died in the earthquake.They need some help.Lots of people came to help them.1._ I was walking home from school,I saw a strange light in the sky.But _ I pointed it out to my friend,it went away.1.Fill in the blanks with when or while.Whilewhen重点句型复习和测试2._ I told my older brother about the strange light in the sky,he just laughed and didnt believe me.3._ my brother was laughing,the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.WhenWhile2.Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.When I _(be)in the sixth grade,I _(join)a piano competition.I _(practice)for four hours every day and my piano teacher _(come)three times a week to _(help)me.Then the big day finally _(arrive).I _(be)so nervous when they _(call)my name.I _(go)up and _(start)to play.wasjoinedpracticedcamehelparrivedwascalledwentstartedWhile I _(play),everyone _(sit)still and listened.I played the song without any mistakes.Then I _(wait)for them to call out the winner.When I _(hear)my name,my heart _(beat)so quickly I thought I would stop breathing.I couldnt believe it.I _(win)!It _(be)the happiest day of my life!was playingsatwaitedheardbeatwonwas写作范文赏析：请根据下面的提示内容写一篇文章，描述上周日发生在你身上的事情。

要点提示：1.你要去参参加加（join in/attend/take part in/participate）Mike的生日聚会(birthday party 2.你去给Mike买礼礼物物(gift)，付付款款(pay money for)时发现钱钱包包忘忘在在家里了 forget忘记忘记/leave my wallet home3.最后，你什什么么也也没没买买（didnt buy anything=buy nothing），空手去参加聚会了4.描述你尴尬尴尬的心情要求：1.80词左右 2.可适当发挥想象参考词汇：checkout 收银台 embarrassed 尴尬的 体裁记叙文话题描述上周日发生在自己身上的一件事时态一般过去过去进行人称第一人称段落布局时间+事件（上周日，参加聚会）主要事件（去买礼物发生的一系列事件）过去进行时的应用：付款时，发现没有带钱包结果（空手，尴尬的心情）Last Sunday I was going to Mikes birthday party.I wanted to go to a shop to buy a gift for him.目的状语He likes reading books and enjoys listening to the music.So 因此I decided to buy a novel and a new CD card for him.I thought he must like them very much.Then I went to the checkout（Then I went to pay for them）.When I was waiting for paying for them,I found/realized that I left my wallet at home.In the end(At last/Finally ),I didnt buy anything.(I bought nothing)I went to the party with nothing(without anyting ),I felt embarrassed.以“An unforgettable experience”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述一下自己最难忘的经历。

1.When and where did it happen?2.What were you doing?3.What were the others doing?4.Why was it unforgettable?要求：1.短文必须包含但不局限于以上提示内容，可适当发挥2.词数80左右参考词汇：plan,offer,moved,ready当堂测试思路点拨：First：交代时间，地点，事件 When and where did it happen?Second：事件经过 What were you doing?What were the others doing?（一般过去时+过去进行时）At last：感受+理由 Why was it unforgettable?优秀范文：An unforgettable experienceOn October 1st,2019,I planed to take the bus to the train station.When I was waiting for the bus at the bus stop,it began to rain suddenly.Unluckily,I forgot to take my umbrella.I stood in the rain,with the rain beating me heavily against my body.Just at that time,a car stopped by me,and the driver offered me to take me to the train station.After I got to the station,the driver refused me to pay for the money.I was so moved that I will never forget that experience.And I am always ready to help others in need.1.1.高考高考作文不同于作文不同于“自由写作自由写作”高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要“根据要求写作根据要求写作”，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏脚，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏脚。

2.2.而而要既符合要求，又要有张扬个性的出彩的地方所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作要既符合要求，又要有张扬个性的出彩的地方所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作3.3.一一篇议论文如果能有几个联系密切并具有较强论证力度的主体段，那就会增加论证的深度、广度和厚度，颇具层次感，使议论文富有说服力因此，同学们。