
英语人教课件写作篇应用类书信.docx
19页应用类专题十三书信方法指导目前,随着对英语学习的实用性、生活性要求的加强,书信已经 成了一 个热门题材的考查形式,常以提纲式要点作文的形式出现,话题内容也紧 紧围绕学生的生活实际,此类考查形式绝不是简单的 对要点逐条翻译,而 是将所给的几个要点科学合理地组织成通顺的语句,形成亮点鲜明的高分 作文常见的写作格式如下:第一段,文章开头:称呼(通常已给出)第二 段,寒暄语句,引出写信的目的:寒暄句+主题句(注:寒暄 句和主题句可 以是同一个句子)第三段,根据提纲扩展主体段 落:主题句+扩展句1+扩 展句2+扩展句3第四段,表明自己的观点,并结束书信主体段落:在最 后要他谈自己的看法第五段,寒暄句+落款典题再现(2010・Lh 东)假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的ES英国朋圜友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约请根据以下要点用英语给暹写一封电子邮件:R=11 .表示歉意;2 ,解释原因,3 •另约时间注意:1 •词数120〜150;2.可适当增加细节写作思路1■文体信息:①文体:记叙文;②语体:非正式语体;③人称:第一人称;④中心大意:作者和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游,但因故不能赴约,表达歉意之情,并解释原因,另约时间。
2主导时 态:一般现在时和一般将来时3・内容要点:①表达因故不能赴约对Tom的歉意;②向Tom详细解释原因③与Tom约定新的时间4•温馨提示:书信常用的标准格式要正确,语言要简练地道,注意恰当使 用关联词语,保证各个要点连贯,行文通顺窈习作点评Dear Tom ,I , m sorry, for I won 光 be able to pay a visit to Beijing next weekend with you.Because there are many friends of mine facing a coming English exam , which is important for them without doubt. They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successfully. As a result , I will be busy helping them at that time. In addition , I will attend a party which aims to raise money for the people of Yushu , who suffered greatly from the big earthquake.In a nutshellA I5m afraid 1511 have no time to accompany you. So I want to put off our time of the visit until the first weekend of next month. Is it OK?Wish you happiness every day!Looking forward to your early reply.Yours , LiHuaW6 精彩点拨 本文做到了格式准确,时态、人称正确。
要点齐全,无缺漏,词汇,句式丰富,行文表达流畅适当地增添了细节描写,如阐述不能赴约的原因贴近 和词汇,如定语从句、宾语从句等的穿插使用,非谓语动词及固定短语的使 用学生学习生活实际,让人感觉到非常真实作者使IP:用了一些高级语法结构如能把下列句子加以优化则文章能更上一个档次:1. As a resultA I will be busy helping them at that time.—> 改为 As a result , I will be busy helping them at that time , hardly can I spare time to visit Beijing.2. They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successfully.一改为 They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them , hoping to get through the exam successfully.常用句式:I , m glad to hear from you/receive your letter.我很高兴收到你的来 宿。
I miss you very much. How are you?我非常想你,你还好吗?I hope everything is fine with you.我希望你一切都好Best wishes/regards!祝好!Looking forward to your reply!盼复!Please write to me soon•盼复!Sincerely yours/Yours sincerely,(用于熟人之间)Truly yours/Yourstruly,(用手不太瓠悉禹人》间)Respectfully yoursA/Yours respectfullyA (用于对上级或长辈)经典范文Dear Tom ,Does everything go well with you?I wish I could make an apology to you , because we have to put off our time of visiting Beijing.How I wish you would understand me. I also hope you can patiently listen to my following reasons. Our school has decided by now to hold an important football match with Yucai Senior High School next weekend. As you know , being the vital member of our team, I wonAt be absent from the match , so I won% be able to show you around Beijing at that time.No matter how reasonable my reasons ares if s my fault to change our plan. So I hope from the bottom of my heart you can forgive me. And do you think if s OK to change the date to the weekend of twoweeks later?Looking forward to your early reply•W Q模板展示道歉信(所发生的事情)- (提出希望).Yours ,一(署名)Dear(称呼),I5m really sorry to tell you that... __Will you please accept my apology?Anyway,(直结)。
模板2感谢信Dear(称呼),Thank you very much for/ thanks a lot for/ Many thanksfor(具体原因)Without your help(从反面说明) (总结)• I appreciate it more than I can say.Yours faithfullyAW Q模板展示(署名)模板3慰问信Dear(称呼), We5reextremely sorry to hear that more ,(具体信息) (原因)・Whafs(未来预测)-(说出愿望),for only a veryDoift worry about your disease because(进一步安慰对方).Surely模板4 祝贺信Let us hope that it will beshort time , and that you will soon beEveryone here sends their best wishes to you for a quick recovery.Yours sincerely ,(署名)Dear(称呼),I was delighted to hear the news(具体情况)• I congratulate you (表达祝贺之情).(总结)'We wish to share your honor and joy.Yours sincerely, (署名)模板6邀请信Dear (称呼),We would like to you to_ (具体活动名称).At thecelebrationA we are going to _ (说明邀评的原因).Everyone hopes•We are going to meet you (时间,地点,方式)-Well ,(总结)• I do hope you will be able to come.Sincerely yours ,(署名)模仿show假设你是李华。
你在美国的朋友David给你发来一封电子邮件,询问你 在暑假期间除了做家庭作业以我,还进行了什么有趣、有意义的活动请 你给他回一封电子邮件,向他介绍你在放假期间的主要活动内容要点如 下:1 .和同学及朋友观看世界杯足球赛;2 .上课(学习数学、物理、化学)3 .在餐馆打工两周,洗碗、洗菜4 .到敬老院做义工(打扫卫生、为老人读报)注意:1・不要逐条翻译,可适当添加细节,词数100左右开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数 、2 •参考词汇:课 training course ;义工 voluntary work ;老年人 the elderly ;敬老院 nursing homeDear David, Thanks for your e-mail. Now Fd to tell you something about mysummer vacation.One possible version:Dear David®Thanks for your e-mail- Now rd to tell you something nbout my summer vacation.I finished my homework on time , which I think was the most important.Other than that , I did a lot of interesting things. As you know , the 2010 FIFA World Cup was held in South Africa. I watched almos。












