人教版七年级英语下册同步作文.docx

Unit 1 Animal Friends . (话题写作指导）【话题分析】动物朋友　　本单元的话题是“动物朋友”与此相关的写作任务是介绍自己最喜欢的一种动物写此类作文时，可以从这种动物的名称、外貌特征以及自己喜欢的原因等方面介绍写作时常用一般现在时　　常用句型：　　My favourite animal is......is my favouriteanimal.　　I like/love...because...　　It can...　　It looks...【写作实例】　　你曾经去动物园看过动物吗？请你介绍一下自己最喜欢的一种动物要求：1.以“My Favourite Animal”为题，围绕主题展开；　　2.语句通顺，表意贴切，无语法错误；　　3.不少于60词思路点拨】【教材典句】1、The elephant is my favourite animal.(SB,1b)2、I love elephants because they are strong and clever.(SB,1b)3、They look after other elephants when they don’t feel well.(SB,1b)【经典范文】My Favourite Animal　　The panda is my favourite animal.Ilove pandas because they are nice andlovely. You can see them in many zoos inthe world. They are all from China. Theylike eating bamboo and they can eat 10kilos of bamboo a day. When we see them,they are always eating. Pandas are whiteand black and their eyes, ears and legs areblack. They look very smart. Many peoplelike them. Do you love pandas?【亮点点评】①用“..is my favourite animal.”点明自己最喜欢的动物。

②用“I love.because...”说明自己喜欢的原因③用be from 介绍大熊猫来自哪里④用含有when的复合句,说明大熊猫爱吃东西的特点同步检测】1．假设你是李华，你上周日去了动物园请你根据下面表格中的内容，介绍一下你在动物园里所见到的有趣的动物，并为你的同学们提供一些建议Interesting animalselephantsbig and strong,  leaves and fruitlong-nosed monkeyshappy or excited,  shake (抖动) their noses, funnygiraffeslong necks, up to  6-8 meters tallAdvice (建议)no photos   don’t feed them要求：(1)短文须包含表格中所有提示内容，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；(3)词数60个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)Last Sunday, I visited the zoo. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last Sunday, I visited the zoo. In the zoo, I saw many interesting animals. Elephants are big and strong. They like to eat leaves and fruit. The long-nosed monkeys have big noses. When they are happy or excited, they shake their noses. That’s funny. The giraffes have long necks. They can be up to 6-8 meters tall. I had a great time in the zoo.When you come to the zoo, you shouldn’t take photos. It may scare the animals. And you mustn’t feed the animals, or they may get ill.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，无单词拼写及语法错误。

[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，介绍在动物园里见到的有趣的动物；第二步，提出参观动物园的一些建议[亮点词汇]①up to达到②have a great time玩得开心③take photos拍照[高分句型]When they are happy or excited, they shake their noses. (when引导的时间状语从句)2．老虎是中国的国家一级保护动物，深受人们喜爱请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文，把这只老虎介绍给你的好朋友NameHuahuaAgeFiveAppearance (外表)Orange with black  stripes; big eyes; strong; majestic (雄伟的) and coolFavorite foodMeatHobbiesRun and hunt写作要求：1. 文中须包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名；3. 词数70个左右答案】Huahua is a tiger. It is five years old. Huahua has an amazing appearance. Its fur is orange with black stripes. It has big eyes. Huahua looks very strong, majestic and cool. Its favorite food is meat. Huahua likes running and hunting. It is a precious animal that we should protect.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是材料作文；②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给信息，均要一一阐述，适当发挥。

[写作步骤]第一步：开门见山直奔主题，开始介绍老虎花花第二步：按照所给表格信息对老虎花花的情况进行介绍第三步：书写结语表达应保护老虎的呼吁[亮点词汇]①like doing喜欢做[高分句型]①It is a precious animal that we should protect. (定语从句）3．学校正在开展“动物保护月”系列活动，你校英语俱乐部以“My Favourite Animal”为题向同学们征稿请你用英语写一篇短文投稿内容包括：1. 它的外貌特点(体形大小、皮毛颜色、眼睛……)；2. 你喜爱它的原因(它可以帮助寻找东西、保护主人、陪伴……)；3. 你对人和动物的关系的看法注意：1. 词数为70左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4. 标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇：pointed(adj. 尖的)，care for(照顾)，loyal(adj. 忠诚的)My Favourite AnimalMy favourite animal is________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。