高考英语读后续写实用模板.docx

高考英语读后续写实用模板一、读后续写第一自然段第1句：情感描写，使用情感万能句：sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb. 表示“某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌分析】well up表示“涌出”，我们可以这样记忆well表示“好”以外，还可以表示“井”涌出”是用到了“井”这个含义surge表示“汹涌”这个句子的亮点是后半句welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.，把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了表示情绪的名词:①表示高兴delight高兴, joy高兴、relief欣慰,②表示激动excitement兴奋 surprise/amazement惊讶③表示伤心失望sorrow悲伤 grief悲伤 disappointment失望depression / frustration沮丧 sadness 哀伤 annoyance烦恼 ④表示害怕fear/scare/fright/horror/terror⑤表示生气anger / rage 愤怒 ⑥表示忧虑anxiety 、worry, concern着急 tension 紧张⑦其他类guilt内疚 , shame,羞耻 satisfaction满足、puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔,puzzlement / confusion 困惑 tiredness / exhaustion疲惫 embarrassment尴尬 gratitude感激 relief 如释重负 shame羞愧练习1：Sunny 感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。

Sunny felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.练习2：Jessica感到一股强烈的高兴，在她心中升腾，奔涌Jessica felt a great sense of delight welling up in her heart and surging through her.第2句：细节描写，使用非谓语结构：(1) doing A,主语+谓语B（主语+谓语A，doing B）Burning with anger, he glared at me with his frightening eyes, yelling,“You're such an idiot.”(2)Having done A...，主语+谓语B 已经....,某人.....Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out.(3)done A，主语+谓语B，doing CEncouraged by the teacher, Lucy raised her hand, whispering,“I want to have a try.”第3句：细节描写，使用 with复合结构Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart beating fast.He turned around, with tears rolling/streaming down his cheeks.The girl stood there, shivering/trembling with cold, with dirt on her face and hair.第4句：细节描写，使用倒装句No sooner had sb done than sb did【原句】The moment my mother finished her performance, the audience broke into rapturous applause.【升级】No sooner had my mother finished her performance than the audience broke into rapturous applause.注意事项：1.had done比did先发生 2.No sooner放句首第5句：过渡衔接句，使用时间状语从句或者定语从句或形容词作状语:如when，while，as，before，after引导的时间状语从句①WhenI arrived there, I walked to the door and knocked.②As I waited at the stop, I heard a big noise.形容词作状语The girl stood there, staring at the food, cold and hungry.They sat on the beach, enjoying the sunshine, relaxed and happy.定语从句The youngest kid wanted to get a present, but he was refused by his mother, which made him cry. 二、读后续写第二自然段第1句：情感描写，使用独立主格（with）+n+doing,一句话例如：1.Tears streaming down my face and blurring my vision，I was thrown into the abyss(深渊) of grief and sorrow.2.Laughter bubbling（洋溢,涌起）up inside him, he ran towards his mother,第2句：结局，使用Not until结构【原句】The villagers didn't realize how serious the pollution was until all the fish died in the river.【改写】Not until all the fish died in the river,did the villagers realize how serious the pollution was.第3句：所感Exhausted/tired/cold as i was,i felt my time and effort worthwhile,for I have made my own contribution to XXX.第4句：所悟From this experience/story,I have learned that/we can learn that①XXX might go away,but YYY endures②hardship might exist,but YYY endures第5句：难忘That day/experience was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.补充：可以在句子前面，适当的加上过渡词，来表示时间、地点和逻辑，使整篇的文章更加的立体丰富。

1）immediately，（2）Without hesitation（3）After a short while, after that, then（4）On arrival（5）Two hours later（6）At the sight of what had happend（7）With all the work alone（8）However; instead高考模拟试题续写练习第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Mrowwwwl! The cat meowed angrily as she clawed at Jennifer’s arm, drawing a thin line of blood. Just as quickly as she struck out with her claw, the agile (灵活的) orange and-white cat leaped back to her hiding space under Jennifer’s bed. From the darkness underneath the bed, two green eyes produced bright light, staring back out at Jennifer. Jennifer was starting to feel discouraged in a major way. She was never one for giving up; but it had been several days like this since she adopted the cat—Darla—from the animal shelter, struggling to win over the young cat’s affection through treats and soft and gentle whispers. It was during her summer break, so she had plenty of time to keep trying to win over the animal. But it wasn’t time that was the issue — it was Jennifer’s emotions that were quickly fading.It had been two years since Jennifer’s beloved brown tabby (斑猫)-Marlin-passed away. She never could quite get over the shock and emptiness which remained in her heart here childlike joy once thrived. Marlin had been Jennifer’s faithful friend and loving companion rough all the pains and trials of growing up. After Marlin died, things were never quite the same again for Jennifer. It was the first real death to pierce Jennifer’s heart and signaled the end of her carefree childhood. She desperately wanted Darla to love her the way Marlin had and for ee to love Darla just the same; but what was Jennifer supposed to do now? The cut on her arm was all she had to how for her effort. Jennifer sat on t。