高三英语-高中英语书面表达训练.ppt

How to deal with the composition书面表 达重要性 历年分值与要求时 间分 值词 数题 材 内 容MET19911580-100人物介绍；介绍体育明星孙淑伟MET199215100左右看图；六图说 明探望祖母的经过 ，日记MET199325/150100左右看图；六图讲 述动物故事（阿福救人）NMET199425/150约100词广播通知；通知参加欢迎美国朋友的晚会NMET199525/15080-100看图；给Peter信，指明野餐（picnic）道 路 NMET199630/150100左右看表格；介绍自己基本情况，书写申请NMET199730/150100左右看图；六图违 反交通法规，被惩罚值 勤NMET199830/150100左右看图；六图参观农场 ，写日记NMET199930/150100左右看图；分析学校三年平面图，写信谈变 化NMET200025/150100左右看图目击交通事故，警察局里写报告NMET200125/150100左右看表格；给Dick回信，谈减负带 来的变化近几年高考作文的类型MET91 六幅图 应用文 介绍 MET92 六幅图 记叙文 记事 MET93 六幅图 记叙文 故事 MET94 提纲 应用文 通知 MET95 单幅图 应用文 书信 MET96 图表 应用文 介绍 MET97 六幅图 记叙文 故事 MET98 六幅图 应用文 日记 MET99 两幅图 应用文 书信 MET00 四幅图 记叙文 故事 MET01 图表 应用文 书信Letter –writingA LetterNov 5, 2001 Wuzheng Middle School Zhejiang P.R.C. JackTongxiang High SchoolDear Mary, BodyYours,Jack• 亲人、家属：Yours lovingly ; • Yours affectionately • 朋友、平辈：Sincerely yours • Yours sincerely • 上级、长者：Yours respectfully • Respectfully yours • 单位、部门：Yours sincerely • Yours faithfully 结束语Closing信封正面StampAirmail信封背面• June 5th , 2000 • Dear Mr. Zhao, • I am sorry that I am unable to attend school during the following week because of the Sports Meet. The school expects me to play an important part in it . And I will be back to class in a week . • I hope you will excuse my absence .(in fact , I take a French leave) • Yours respectfully • CharlesCharles • • Encl: the PE Teacher’s certificate (Encl: the PE Teacher’s certificate (证明）证明）便 条（病/事假条）（NOTICE/ANNOUNCEMENT) • 口头通知： • Ladies and Gentlemen, • May I have you attention please?• 正 文• 书面通知： • NOTICE • In celebration of May Day , there will be --- • 正 文 • School Office • April 25th , 2000 通知、通告• Wednesday May 5th CloudyIt is nearly a month since I began keeping diaries. I find it a very good exercise in English composition.I got back my essay on A Visit to the Park . It was marked with A.There were only three mistakes in it: one in grammar and two in idiom.I’m happy to see that I can now express myself in English more usually than ever before. ,日记 Diary书面表达如何写？五个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息 题材、人称、时态、要点2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。

3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子4、联句成文 ：注意 ：①主语和谓语②背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）③逻辑关系④开头与结尾⑤语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写• 并列and; as well as ; also; • 选择or; either—or; or else; otherwise • 原因because ; owing to; due to ;on account of ; thanks to • 结果so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result • 时间when ;soon after ; before; later ; first ; and then ; next ; finally ; afterwards. • 比较on the countary ; on the other hand ; like • 转折but ; yet; however ; although; in spite of ; instead ; • 递进besides ; moreover ; even ; in addition • 举例for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ; • 总结after all ; in short ; in general ; generally speaking Adverbs组句成文的各种关系的过渡词语• Therefore ; otherwise ; furthermore ; • Thus ; finally ; moreover ; namely ; besides ; although ; afterwards ; however ; personally; Adverbs评分原则以及给分范围­第五档（很好）：完全完成试题规定的任务（21-25）­第四档（好）：完全完成试题规定的任务，漏掉1、2 个次重点。

16-20） ­第三档（适当）：基本完成试题规定的任务11-15 ）­第二档（较差）：末完成试题规定的任务 （6-10）­第一档（差）：末完成试题规定的任务 只能写出与 所给要求内容有关的一些单词 （1-5）­0分：末能传达读者任何信息练 习根据 下列图画 中Tom骑 自行车的 经历，用 英语写一 篇短文 短文要写 得连贯、 完整字 数100字 左右审 题字 词 文参考答案2000年高考审 题1、体裁：叙述Tom骑自行车的经历，为记叙文体2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故3、人称：第三人称Tom4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过字 词 文词：① to ride a bike ② to hit his bike and fall off句：①Tom was riding a bike along the street.②The car hit his bike and he fell off it.文 ：The other day, Tom was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car was running towards him fast and hit his bike, then he fell off it.参 考 答 案The other day, Tom was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car was running towards him fast. He was so frightened that he quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit his bike and he fell off it. When the driver realized that he had caused an accident, he got such a fright that he took flight with his car. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately a passer-by happened to see what had happened and remembered the number of the car. He reported this to the police. Now the driver has been caught and will be punished for his wrong doing.NMET2000 书面表达（满25分）假设你是李华 ，在美国探亲。

2000年2月8日清晨 ，你的目击一起交 通事故警察局让 你写一份材料，报 告当时所见情况 根据下列图画写出 报告注意：1、目 击者应该准确报告 事实；2、词数100 左右；3、结尾已为 你写好About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua 审 题短文改错小 结2000年高考书面表达审题1、题材：一份书面材料，报告你所目击的一起交通事故的经过，为记叙文体2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘发生过的一起交通事故3、人称：为“I”，第一人称2000年高考书面表达要点（1）2000年2月8日发生了一起交通事故（2）我走在公园路（3）。