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高考写作评分标准高考写作评分标准1.1.总分总分2525分，按分，按5 5个档次给分；个档次给分；2.2.先根据文章内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后按先根据文章内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后按档次要求衡量给分；档次要求衡量给分；3.3.少于少于8080或多于或多于120120，减去，减去2 2分；分；4.4.评分重点：要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量、准评分重点：要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量、准确性和上下文连贯性；确性和上下文连贯性；5.5.拼写和标点符号视其对交际影响程度考虑；拼写和标点符号视其对交际影响程度考虑；6.6.书写较差，影响交际，将分数降低一个档次书写较差，影响交际，将分数降低一个档次第一档（第一档（21—2521—25））1.1.完全完成试题规定的任务完全完成试题规定的任务; ;2.2.覆盖所有内容要点；覆盖所有内容要点；3.3.应用了较多的语法和词汇；应用了较多的语法和词汇；4.4.语法结构和词汇有些许错误，但为尽量使用复杂结语法结构和词汇有些许错误，但为尽量使用复杂结构和较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力；构和较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力；5.5.有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑; ;6.6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。

完全达到了预期的写作目的Three-part strategy: Part 1. opening Part 2. the main body Part 3. closing It is strongly suggested that you have a topic sentence for each of your parts.The application of transitional words:The application of transitional words: in my opinion; to my surprise; as a result; in the meantime; for in my opinion; to my surprise; as a result; in the meantime; for the sake of…the sake of… first of all; secondly; thirdly; then; next first of all; secondly; thirdly; then; next as far as I’m concerned; what’s more; as can be seen from the as far as I’m concerned; what’s more; as can be seen from the graph; graph; however; besides; therefore; thus; instead; meanwhile; however; besides; therefore; thus; instead; meanwhile; nevertheless;nevertheless; ( (un)fortunatelyun)fortunately; sadly for him; surprisingly; strangely; ; sadly for him; surprisingly; strangely; interestingly; happily….interestingly; happily….•With the rapid development of economy, China has become increasingly prosperous.•With the advent of TV sets, people’s living standard has greatly improved. •Some people believe (say/maintain/hold/claim) that…while others argue that…•Now an increasing number of people are coming to realize the importance of English.•According to recent survey (poll/study/report/research), …•A recent study/statistics/survey…shows…•It has been (is) accepted (believed/proved/reported/estimated/agreed that…A proverb says/As the old Chinese saying goes…（常言道（常言道…））Various view exist as to…（关于（关于…有很多说法）有很多说法）It goes without saying…/There is no doubt that/No one can deny that/Needless to say, …（毫无疑问）（毫无疑问）In spite of the great progress made in…/ Despite the fact that…Recently, there has been much (heated) debate (discussion/argument) about (on/as to)Those who object to…argue (maintain/say/argue) that…Recent years, there is (has been) a sharp increase (growth/rise/decline) in/of…It is known to all that…/as we all know,…Those in favor of…believe that…•My idea/opinion may be expressed as follows:•There are various reasons for…Firstly…Secondly…•Opinions vary from person to person.•Perhaps the most important reason is…•It may result in/give rise to/lead to…•Considering/Given （鉴于（鉴于/考虑到）考虑到）•As far as I see/know•When it comes to…（就（就…而言）而言）•Apart from the…mentioned above,…•The answer to/explanation of this problem involves many factors. For one thing, some…For another, others…•This will lead to/give rise to some serious consequences.•认为认为-think/argue/maintain/hold/believe•获得获得-get—acquire/obtain/gain•利用利用-use--make the best of/make use of/take the advantage of/apply/employ•现在现在-now—nowadays/at present/currently•述说述说-say—put/state/claim/describe•参加参加-join—participate/attend/take part in/ go in for/engage in/be present at•注意注意-pay attention to—focus on, center on, concentrate on, be absorbed in, be lost in•努力努力-Try to/attempt to/make efforts to/manage to •想想-Want to/cannot wait to/be eager to/long for/be thirsty for/look forward to•使相信使相信Make…believe/convince/confirm/assure•看见看见-See/spot/sight/witness/catch sight of/come across•反对反对-say not to/oppose/object to/be against•I decided I would pioneer a new way, explore unknown powers, and unfold to the world the deepest mysteries of nature.•I read all the books I could find that threw light upon these matters.•Located in southern Austria, Kitzbuhel is a paradise for skiers.•Even though the altitude of the city is not enough to guarantee snow, the good weather and breath-taking scenery make it a world-class ski resort.下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。

请你根据对该漫画于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文该文应包含以下要点：的理解用英语写一篇短文该文应包含以下要点：1. 该漫画告诉了我们什么；该漫画告诉了我们什么；2. 你对此现象的看法；你对此现象的看法；注意注意: 1. 词数词数150字左右开头已经写好，不计入总词数开头已经写好，不计入总词数 2. 文中不得提及本人的相关信息文中不得提及本人的相关信息有些孩子沉溺有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通该漫画告诉了我们什该漫画告诉了我们什么么你对此现象的看法你对此现象的看法 Half-controlled CompositionThe information and requirements for Half-Controlled Composition are usually given1. by Outline (提纲式提纲式) Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两个月的活动。

现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行期两个月的活动现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿发言稿，主要内容如下：，主要内容如下：  1.1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动；简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动； 2.2.谈谈你们开展该活动的收获谈谈你们开展该活动的收获 注意：注意：    1 1．词数不少于．词数不少于120120个；个；    2 2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称 （（20102010高考湖南卷）高考湖南卷） 2. by Graph (图表式图表式)假如你是李华，在最近的研究性学习当中，受假如你是李华，在最近的研究性学习当中，受《《2121世纪中世纪中学生英语报学生英语报》》(The 21st Century)(The 21st Century)之邀，你对你所在的班之邀，你对你所在的班6060名同学名同学( (男女各半男女各半) )进行了上网目的的调查。

现将调查结进行了上网目的的调查现将调查结果果( (如下表所示如下表所示) )用英语给报社的编辑写用英语给报社的编辑写一封信一封信，报道此事，，报道此事，以引起舆论的关注，并提出你的观点和建议以引起舆论的关注，并提出你的观点和建议                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            注意：注意：1 1、报道应包括图表所示全部内容，可适度发挥报道应包括图表所示全部内容，可适度发挥2 2、文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3 3、词数：、词数：150150      4 4、参考词汇：调查、参考词汇：调查--make a survey--make a survey 当前环境问题日益突出，当前环境问题日益突出，““低碳经济低碳经济”“”“低碳生活低碳生活””应运应运而而生生. .但是你发现身边的很多同学还没有充分意识到这一但是你发现身边的很多同学还没有充分意识到这一请结合下面的图片，谈谈你自己的看法具体要求如下：请结合下面的图片，谈谈你自己的看法具体要求如下：1.1.结合下图简要分析身边同学不符合结合下图简要分析身边同学不符合““低碳生活低碳生活””的行为；的行为；2.2.针对这些行为谈谈你对针对这些行为谈谈你对““低碳生活低碳生活””的看法及应采取的的看法及应采取的措施注意：注意：1. 1. 词数词数100-120100-120；；2. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯说说明明文文Use both sides of paperpaper cups/disposable chopsticks 3.by picture or cartoon (漫画式漫画式)How to write the half-controlled composition?分析分析行为行为看法看法措措施施 Step 1: Analyze the topicPart 1Part 2Part 3 use paper cups / disposable chopsticks  plant more trees;   use both sides of paper make some effective laws leave the lights on;  living a low carbon life is necessaryStep 2  Organize your composition123456● use paper cups / disposable chopsticks;     leave the lights on● living a low carbon life is necessary● use both sides of paper; plant more trees;         make some effective laws(measures)(opinion)(behavior) Now, more people have become aware of the importance of protecting our environment. However, there are many people not realizing it.     Some students often forget to turn off the lights when they leave the classroom, which is a waste of electricity. Paper cups and disposable chopsticks are often used, causing harm to our environment.     Living a low carbon life is necessary.    Not only can we save electricity but also we can plant more trees as well as use both sides of paper. The government should make some effective laws.     I believe what we do is bound to contribute to our environment.Step 3  Enrich your compositionAny other behavior? ...Such as: use plastic bags; leave the water running; use air conditioner when unnecessary; drink bottled water… Try to persuade readers to agree with your opinion, using some supporting sentences. Such as: reasons, idioms…Any other measures? …  Such as: some school activities can be held…Compare: Some students often forget to turn off the lights when they leave the classroom, which is a waste of electricity. Paper cups and disposable chopsticks are often used, causing harm to our environment. Living a low carbon life is necessary. Not only can we save electricity but also we can plant more trees as well as use both sides of paper. The government should make some effective laws.  Now, more people have become aware of the importance of protecting our environment. However, there are many people not realizing it. As is shown in the pictures, some students often forget to turn off the lights when they leave the classroom, which is a waste of electricity. Besides, many a student leaves the water running after washing hands. What’s worse, paper cups and disposable chopsticks are often used in our daily life, causing harm to our environment. In my opinion, living a low carbon life is necessary. We can take measures and call on people around us to protect our environment. Well goes a saying that together, individuals can make a difference. For one thing, not only can we save electricity but also we can plant more trees as well as use both sides of paper. For another, some related activities can be held in our school to arouse the awareness of low carbon life. Furthermore, the government should make some effective laws to protect our environment from being destroyed. I believe what we do is bound to contribute to our environment.escape responsibilityflee from responsibilitythrow responsibility on…Writingmanufacturermilk stationmilk cowgrassWho is to blame ? 随着人民生活水平的提高，人们愈发关注食品质量安随着人民生活水平的提高，人们愈发关注食品质量安全全. .商家的社会责任感与企业道德商家的社会责任感与企业道德, ,人们健康的相关法律保人们健康的相关法律保证等问题成为人们关注的焦点证等问题成为人们关注的焦点. . 根据下图写一篇根据下图写一篇150150词左右的短文，表达你的看法，可词左右的短文，表达你的看法，可以切合题意有所发挥。

短文首句已给出，不计入总词数以切合题意有所发挥短文首句已给出，不计入总词数 ( (企业道德企业道德: : business ethic) )controlled part  As we can see from the cartoon, manufacturers, milk stations, milk cows and even grass are trying to make excuses for the misconduct. ____________________________________ As we can see from the cartoon, manufacturers, milk stations, milk cows and even grass are trying to make excuses for their illegal conduct. After careful consideration, we come to realize that the drawer wishes to call our attention to the lack of social responsibility and business ethics. (social responsibility and business ethics) Driven by profit, some manufacturers go to extremes to make money by providing the customers with fake or inferior products. A case in paint is “Sanlu milk powder”, which is confirmed to contain a poisonous chemical. As a result, numerous innocent babies become the victims of the milk food. In the long run, such illegal acts not only damage the dairy industry, but the credibility of the society. (analyze the reason and possible results) In my opinion, it is high time we took effective measures to prevent such crime from happening again. (your own opinion) It is advisable to pass related law to punish whoever produces poisonous food. (related laws) Only in this way can we establish a harmonious society where manufactures take up more social responsibility and credibility and people enjoy healthy food. (conclusion)    请以请以“令你生气的事令你生气的事”为话题，谈谈生活为话题，谈谈生活中一件让你生气的事例，处理的方法，以中一件让你生气的事例，处理的方法，以及你的想法。

及你的想法      要求：要求：   1.仅限一个事例，不必展开仅限一个事例，不必展开   2. 字数字数100左右 One day, I invited one of my best friends, Xiaogang and other classmates to my birthday party. However, he didn’t turn up all the evening, which made me very embarrassed and angry. I thought he broke his promise, determined to ignore him forever. As a result, our friendship broke up. Later, I was told that he helped his sick neighbor watch over her grandchild that evening but was ashamed at saying sorry to me. So honest and kind was he that I was touched and we made up. I should have given him, as well as me, a chance to speak out instead of remaining angry all the time.Important ---Common ---Top ---Competitor ---Build ---Attractive --- Obvious ---Result ---Only ---Big ---Show ---Accurate ---crucial, significantuniversalpeak, summitrival, opponentestablish, constructappealing, absorbingevident, apparentoutcome, consequenceunique, distinctivemassive (large in size, quantity, or extent)demonstrate (to demonstrate a fact means to make it clear to people)precise, exactTry to use diverse words假定你是李华。

在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫假定你是李华在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖（的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助，请根据帖子内容，写作要点和要）寻求帮助，请根据帖子内容，写作要点和要求回贴                                                                                 写作要点：写作要点：　　　　1.告诉告诉Grown-up要理解母亲；要理解母亲；　　　　2.给给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议提出解决问题的具体建议　　　　              要求：要求：　　　　                   1.短文需写在答题卡的指定区域短文需写在答题卡的指定区域　　　　                   2.短文词数不少于短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部分）不含已写好的部分）　　　　                   3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯　　　　                   4.书写须清晰、工整书写须清晰、工整Hi, Grown-up, As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings. Here are a few suggestions. First, it’s advisable to talk more with your mom. Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things. Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”. It’s even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.假设你是李华，你的英国笔友假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信，询问你高考后的暑最近来信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。

请你根据以下要点，用英语回一封信，说明你的计划，并期安排请你根据以下要点，用英语回一封信，说明你的计划，并简述理由简述理由                       1.休息；休息；                       2.读书；读书；                       3.陪伴父母；陪伴父母；                       4.参加社会活动参加社会活动注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数不计入总词数)；；2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：参考词汇：高考高考—college entrance examination社会活动社会活动—social activitiesDear Henry,I’m glad to receive your letter_____________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Li Hua Since the University Entrance Exam is coming around, my parents and I are becoming more and more nervous. We are more easily to be sensitive about the surroundings, which makes me feel stressed out. Sometimes I didn’t do very well in my study, then they would blame me, saying that I was not hardworking. The words coming out really make me feel angry, or rather upset. They just weigh the “score” too much. And this in return makes me more negative and I will not be so confident as before. I think our parents should get to know our feelings more deeply. In this special period, parents are expected to be our emotional anchor. They need to know that we are trying to do better and we need their support. Only then will we build a bridge between us and can communicate with each other in a harmony way. 下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。

请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写交流而忽视了与父母的沟通请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文该文应包含以下要点：一篇短文该文应包含以下要点：1.该漫画告诉了我们什么；该漫画告诉了我们什么；2.你对此现象的看法；你对此现象的看法；3.我们该如何主动和父母沟通我们该如何主动和父母沟通注意：注意：1. 表达时要适当发挥想象，不要仅做简单描述表达时要适当发挥想象，不要仅做简单描述           2. 词数词数150字左右开头已经写好，不计入总词数开头已经写好，不计入总词数           3. 文中不得提及本人的相关信息文中不得提及本人的相关信息 Modern technology has many advantages. While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet, we also experience some new problems. This picture describes one of them. It shows that the teenage boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his parent. (漫画告诉了我们什么漫画告诉了我们什么) I think it might be common, but it is totally unacceptable. (你对此现象的你对此现象的看法看法) Nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how easy or interesting it is for us to chat with people from across the world on the Internet. In most Chinese families, there is only one child. Obviously, we are the centre of our parents’ attention. Many parents are willing to do anything to make sure that we live a good life. It is understandable that they want to know what’s happening to us, what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies. I think we should let them know us well. For example, we can tell them what’s going on in school when we have dinner or turn to them for advice when we have problems. (我们该如何主动和我们该如何主动和父母沟通父母沟通) In that way, I’m sure the relationship between us and our parents will become better and better.•高考真题赏析•公园该不该收门票,写信给报社，并谈自己看法。

•60%的同学认为40%的同学认为不该收门票是公众休闲的地方如收票，需建大门、围墙、会影响城市形象应收门票，但票价不宜高票款可用于支付园林工人工资票款还可用于购新花木范文Dear Editor，， I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the question. Around 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the image of a city. On the other hand, the rest 40% think that fees should be charged, because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Everything has two sides. In my opinion, fees should be charged as long as the price is reasonable.Yours truly, Li Hua （（20102010湖北）请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的湖北）请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英文写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。

一个事例，用英文写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用 The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls. 注意：注意： 1. 1.无需写标题；无需写标题； 2.2.内容只需涉及一个方面；内容只需涉及一个方面； 3.3.词数为词数为100100左右 What do you think of competitiveness in life？？Write a passage of about 120 words to demonstrate your opinion on competitiveness with specific examples. (perseverance/creativity/flexibility/friendship/the Internet/city life)。