02记叙文(记事篇)-备战2023年中考英语书面表达(写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累).docx

备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）第一章 记叙文记叙文是一种以记人叙事为主要内容的文章, 通常包括六个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果, 写作时各要素要交代清楚, 但并不要求全部具备写记叙类文章时除了六个要素外, 还要注意以下几点：1. 记叙方式通常有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种顺叙是英语记叙文最常用的一种记叙方式, 即按照事件发展的时间先后顺序来叙述2. 人称一般用第一人称和第三人称进行写作第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述；第三人称是以“观察者”的身份进行记叙, 通过作者与读者之外的第三者, 直接把故事呈现在读者面前3. 时态 记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历, 因此常用一般过去时, 还可根据上下文辅以其他时态Part 2 记事写法点拨在写记事文章的时候, 我们可以分成以下三部分来写：1. 事情的开端 交代时间、地点、人物和事情的起因等在这部分的写作中, 不用详细地展开, 只需简单交代, 并可使用“设置悬念”等写作手法2. 事情的经过和高潮 详细描写事情是怎么开始、发展、并达到高潮的这部分是文章的中心, 所以一定要具体、详细地描写出事情发展全过程的细节, 要尽量地真实、引人入胜。

3. 事情的结尾 这部分简单地进行描写就行, 还可在这部分加上一些自己获得的启发和教训, 但无须详细展开, 用一两句话带过就行必备词汇1 叙事顺序first, to begin with, first of all, firstly 首先secondly, then, besides, what’s more, in addition, moreover 然后at last, last but not least, above all, all in all, to sum up, on the whole, finally 最后2 时间描写after在······之后 after a short/long time/period 在一段很短／很长的时间后afterwards后来；然后 as soon as ······就······from that time on 从那时起 immediately 立刻；立即lately 最近；近来；不久前 nowadays现在；如今recently 最近 shortly马上；立刻since then 从那时起 when, while 当······的时候3 地点词汇church 教堂 tower 塔bridge 桥 station 车站dormitory 宿舍 supermarket 超市shop 商店 hospital 医院theater 剧院 playground 操场cinema 电影院 museum 博物馆4 动作描写go out for a picnic 去野餐 have a party 举行聚会go camping 去露营ride a horse 骑马fly kites 放风筝have a walk 散步hurry to … 匆忙赶到······take photos 拍照set off 出发see a doctor 看医生watch the match 看比赛climb mountains 爬山4 结尾词汇thanks to 多亏as a result 结果luckily 幸运地because/because of 因为at last/in the end 最后必备句型1 介绍事情的开端(1) One day / The other day / A couple of days ago while he was ..., he ...一天／前几天当他正在······, 他······(2) It was snowing/raining heavily on Monday/Sunday morning, when ...星期一／星期天早上, 正在下着大雪／雨, 当······(3) All through my junior high school, I couldn’t forget ...在我整个的初中生涯中, 我不能忘记······(4) Last week, when I was on my way home, something terrible happened. 上个星期, 当我在回家路上的时候, 一些糟糕的事情发生了。

(5) The event took place/happened/occurred in the early morning. 那件事情发生在一大早 2 描写事情的过程(1) Without hesitation, I decided to give him a hand. 毫不犹豫, 我决定帮助他 (2) It was my first time to Mount Tai. 那是我第一次去泰山 (3) We spent many hours talking happily. 我们愉快地交谈了几个小时 (4) The line of people was endless. 人们排成的队伍看不到尽头 3 交代事情的结尾(1) I’ll never forget the day when we visited the farm. 我将永远不会忘记我们参观农场的那一天 (2) What a pleasant trip!多么愉快的一次旅行啊！(3) This will be an unforgettable experience. 这将会是一次难忘的经历 (4) I have never seen a comedy like that. 我从未看过那样的喜剧。

(5) I had fun at the party tonight. 今晚我在聚会上玩得很愉快 抛砖引玉题目：家是我们温暖的港湾你的家庭幸福吗?请讲述一个发生在你和家庭成员之间的难忘故事请根据提示要求写一篇英语小短文, 词数不得少于80提示：1. 简单介绍一下你的家庭；2. 讲述一个发生在你和家庭成员之间难忘的故事注意：不要出现真实的人名和地名 思路导航第1步：例文审题主体人称题目要求讲述一个发生在“我”的家庭中的难忘故事, 故主体人称应为第一人称“I”主体时态由于题目里要求讲述的故事是已经发生了的, 故主体时态用一般过去时写作贴士题目只给出了一个写作大纲, 没有具体细节, 作者在写作时要进行补充. 注意文章中不要出现真实的人名和地名第2步：列提纲(1)简要介绍“我”的家庭的基本情况；(2)具体详细地描述发生在家庭中的难忘往事第3步：参考词句(1) warm; ask for return; care for; family ...(2) hurry home; prepare for the exam; unhappy; angry; filled with tears ...(3) turn a blind eye; be grateful for ...第4步：连句成篇Love from My FamilyI have a happy and warm family. My parents often give me love without ever asking for return. They always care for me. I still remember that day. On that day, as soon as the class was over, I hurried home for lunch. There would be an exam in the afternoon, so I wanted to go back to school early to prepare for the exam. But when I got home, the lunch was not ready yet. I felt unhappy and kind of angry, so I ran out of the house. On the way back to school, I was very hungry. When I got into the classroom, I saw a lunch box on my desk. One classmate told me that it was my mother who took it to me. After opening the box, I found my favorite food inside. My eyes were filled with tears. We often turn a blind eye to the love from our parents. We should not do this any more and should be grateful to them. 参考译文家人的爱我有一个开心、温暖的家庭。

我的父母给予我很多爱, 并且从未要求过回报他们总是关心着我我仍记得那天(的情景)那天, 刚一下课, 我就赶回家吃午饭下午有一场考试, 所以我想早点回到学校复习准备考试但当我回到家的时候, 午饭还没准备好我感到不高兴, 并有点生气, 所以我跑出了家在回学校的路上, 我感觉很饿当我进到教室的时候, 我看见我桌上有一个午餐盒一个同学告诉我, 这是我妈妈拿给我的打开盒子后, 我看到里面有我最喜欢的菜我的眼里充满了泪水 我们经常无视父母对我们的爱我们不应该再这样做了, 我们应该对他们心怀感激成长记忆范文1Mountain ClimbingLast summer, I went mountain climbing together with my father. I still remember the day until now. We started climbing the mountain early in the morning. But when the sun came up, it became very hot. I got all sweaty, feeling dizzy and tired, so I couldn’t help complaining and wanted to quit. Hearing my complaint, my father encouraged me not to give up and helped me wipe away the sweat on the face. He said, “We won’t see the fantastic scenery unless we reach the top.” I suddenly cheered up and continued to climb with full strength. We got to 。