2022年12月大学英语四级真题及答0案解析.docx

2022年12月大学英语四级真题及答0案解析 2022年12月英语四级真题及答案1作文真题范文及点评Nothing Scucceeds Without a Strong Willby commenting on the humorous saying, \eaiest thing in the world. I'va done it hundreds of times.\180 s. Part I Writing Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Nothing runs smoothly in our life. To achieve things successfully, a strong will is essential. Life is like a Marathon. Many people can’t get to the terminal. This is not because they are lack of vitality but because their will of success is not strong enough. To take quitting smoking as an example, some regard it as a piece of cake. They make up their minds to quit it in the morning, but in the evening they feel that the smell of cigarettes is tempting. Their throats are sore, their mouths are thirsty, and their hands are shaking. After the painful mental struggle, they tell themselves that “One cigarette is enough. Just take one, and the next day I will quit it.” By doing this, they surrender to their weak will. In the end, they have quitted smoking “a hundred times”, but in no time they succeed. Just like quitting smoking, nothing succeeds without a strong will. To be successful in one’s life, a strong will means that you know where you go and you will persist on the road you choose. Undoubtedly success belongs to those who overcome their weak will and who hang in there until the last minute 文章点评： 本文属于话题类作文，只看题目 “Nothing Succeeds without a strong will”考生会觉得比拟抽象，难以下手。

细看题目说明中给出了提示，要求考生结合戒烟屡次不胜利的幽默引语对该话题进展分析阐述 总体来说，这是一篇“中等偏上”的考生作文本文先点题指出“坚毅意志”的重要性；其次段从反面举例阐述——详细描写了意志不坚决者的心理活动，阐述为什么会戒烟失败；最终从戒烟延长到生活中的其他事情，并复述坚毅意志的内涵，点题收尾 总体上来看，文章思路清楚，采纳了生动的譬如和形象的心理描写，语言流畅，用语地道 但一些重复表达〔如其次段和第三段中的weak will〕显得单调，可用shaky ones, weak-willed persons，the strong-willed等敏捷表达在备考中，多积累不同表达，坚信会写出更生动的文章 在论述上，表达略显罗嗦其次段心理描写过多，虽然流畅生动，但却使这篇考场作文超过了规定字数，反而成为失分点，这一点要引以为戒 范文高分版Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will As we have read from above, quitting-smoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved. There is something provoking and interesting in this paradox, just because s does not wear the stone as dripping water does. The ability to do something over and over again in a short time may imply its easiness, but in a long run, a lifetime maybe, things turn out to be quite the opposite. Also, as is often the case, one may have obtained all the tools and opportunities to achieve something, but in the end they still fail due to the will shortage. 1 So how could we avoid the dilemma? Here is the prime condition of success: will and perseverance. Concentrate you energy, thought and mind exclusively on the business in which you are engaged, hang on in there and be patient, for, as Emerson put it, no one can cheat you out of your ultimate success but yourself. 点评： 本次四级作文探讨的话题是胜利与毅力之间的关系，话题不算新，一般考生对此都比拟熟识，所以对考生来说难度不大。

写好这篇作文，须要抓住两点，一是紧跟题目要求，即对上述幽默性的话语做出评论，二是在评论的根底上要亮出自己的观点 范文开头第一句即一语道破地对上述幽默性话语做出总结性概括，即戒烟看似简洁实那么很难，随后指出该话语本质上是一个悖论，并且以一个“水滴石穿”的俗语来指出困难所在，这句也是本文的一个亮点，表达作者在西方俗语方面丰富的学问储藏 其次段作者那么进一步深化分析该话语，指出做某事在短期看来很简单，长期来看，恰恰相反，人们做事的结果也因此总是失败，缘由那么在最终一句点出：缺乏毅力 第三段作者进一步给出了自己的观点，告知大家如何幸免陷入这种两难境地：首要条件即须要坚毅的意志和长期的坚持最终再以艾默生的一句名言 “没人能够骗你远离你最终的胜利，除非你自己成认失败”来总结全文，切中主题，铿锵有力 快速阅读真题 及答案What is Integrity? \consistency--not only setting high personal standards for oneself (honesty, responsibility, respect for others, fairness) but also living up to those standards each day. One who by and follows moral and ethical standards even when making life's hard choices, choices which may be clouded by stress, pressure to succeed, or temptation. What happens if we lie, cheat, steal, or violate other ethical standards? We feel disappointed in ourselves and ashamed. But a lapse of integrity also affects our relationships with others. Trust is essential in any important relationship, whether personal or professional. Who can trust someone who is dishonest or unfair? Thus, integrity must be one of our most important goals. Risky Business We are each responsible for our own decisions, even if the decision-making process has been undermined by stress or peer pressure. The real test of character is whether we can learn from our mistake, by understanding why we acted as we did, and then exploring ways to avoid similar problems in the future. Making ethical decisions is a critical part of avoiding future problems. We must learn to recognize risks, because if we can't see the risks we're taking, we can't make responsible choices. To identify risks, we need to know the rules and be aware of the facts. For example, one who doesn't know the rules about plagiarism may accidentally use s or ideas without giving proper credit, or one who fails to keep careful research notes may unintentionally fail to quote and cite sources as required. But the fact that such a violation is \not excuse the misconduct. Ignorance is not a defense. \ Most people who get in trouble do know the rules and facts, but manage to fool themselves about t。