基础写作之一人物介绍写作方法6400字.docx

    基础写作之一人物介绍写作方法6400字    基础写作之一 人物介绍写作方法基础写作解题步骤1.审题1)确定类型 v2) 确定体裁 3)确定主体时态 4)确定主体人称2.列要点1.）概况age, sex, birth-place, background2）外貌／性格/ 爱好appearance ,character, hobby3）教育/ 专长/ 事业：education, speciality4）生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time )5）评估evaluation3.依要点, 拟草纲, 组织成句.4.构篇章,扩句成文.5.检查润色1）时态是否正确 2）人称是否一致3)是否用5个句子 4)是否漏掉必要信息 5)是否语句连贯6.书写范例： 姓名：刘翔 出生年月：１９８３年７月１３日性别；男 出生地：上海 身高：１．８９米教练：孙海平 偶像：Jordon 专项：１１０栏成就：２００２年瑞士洛桑以１３秒１２破亚洲记录２００４年雅典以１２秒９１夺冠，平了世界记录．２００６年７月１２日在瑞士洛桑以１２秒８８破世界记录．爱好：听音乐，打游戏，看书 自评：为人诚恳， 随和， 自信乐观 瑞士洛桑: Lausanne, SwitzerlandLiuxiang, who was born on July 13th, 1983 in Shanghai, is an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man. His idol is Jordon and he likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. For example, he broke the Asian record with the time 13’12 in 2002 in Lausanne, Switzerland, and two years later, he won the championship again in 12’91 in Athens which ties the world record. Most excitingly, he broke the record by 12’88 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland.语法，句法高分tips1.A. 概况 : 尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.B.外貌,性格: 巧用with做定语2012届高三英语写作模板 1译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发My history teacher is a beautiful lady with two big eyes and long hair.C. 教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼1years, he went abroad for further studies.2）went on further education and received a doctor's degree.D．生平：尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章1）2）He set a new world record of E．评估：注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组1）him .2）outstanding man.3）实战演练1.例文：假如你叫李明，你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。

你回信介绍鲁迅，内容如下（1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人（2）为了国家，弃医从文3）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者4）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如《阿Q正传》、《祝福》这两部影片5）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本参考词汇：《阿Q正传》：The True Story of AH Q 《祝福》：The New Year’s Sacrifice 注意： 1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语[写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容文章首尾已给出，不算字数[评分标准] 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性Dear Bruce,I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun.Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.Yours,2012届高三英语写作模板 2基础写作之二 图表类说明文I. 图表类说明文的类型:一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表（table） 。

二是以图形形式A 表示数据变化的曲线图（graph）; B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异C 表示总体内部结构变化的柱状图（bar chart）; 扇形图（pie chart）II. 图表类说明文的写作步骤:第一步：____________________________________常使用的词汇有:（图表/数据）: _________, _________, _________,_________；2012届高三英语写作模板 3动词：_________, _________, _________,_________...常用句型：1. The graph/chart/table above2. it can be seen that...(正如) is shown in the graph, ...4. has been shown from the table that…第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，然后描写（在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）注意层次 即 facts and reasons增长/减少的表达：表示上升的动词: _________________________________；表示上升的名词:______________________________；表示下降的动词:_______________________________；表示下降的名词: _______________________________;表示平稳: _________________________________.常用句型：（ Facts）1.There was in…2.There has been in…3.The rate from 38%in…to 31% in…4. …, it ……5. Statistics show in traffic accidents 6. The population owning mobile phones 倍数的表达:1.The number /rate has nearly （是…的两倍）, as against that of last year.2.The number is （是…的5倍) =The number is times 比…多4倍)Reasons:2012届高三英语写作模板 41. The reason …is that…of…3. The change in … largely results4. This brings the important fact that…5 ….is the key (因素)in…６. It is because of … ______ …第三步：__________________________________。

常用表达：1. in a ,/ in short,（简而言之） （总的来说）2. summary, it is important…(得出结论）that…4. , if we want to…, it is necessary…5. ___________________(毫无疑问) attention must be paid to…6. I ______(建议)the government take effective measures to …7.________, I think(就我来看) the “golden week” should remain, for…III. 范文剖析---- 07年高考基础写作 [写作内容]根据以上数据,写一篇短文,包括以下内容:1．调查时间,调查问题,以及调查对象;2.男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异;3.”父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异;4.男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同;5.你的偶像及理由阅读以下范文：a. 找出每句写了哪些方面？Conclusion/fact/reason/your opinion?b.数据的描述用了哪些不同的表达?请划出来。

1. ________ Last week，we did a survey among 2，600 students on “Who is your idol”.2012届高三英语写作模板 52._____ The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols，while 48% of the boys favor sports stars.3.______ As the data shows， “parents” rank the second for the girls， but the fourth for the boys. 4.______ However， the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls.5.__________ As for myself， Thomas Edison is my idol， because his inventions have greatly changed our life.IV. 实践演练下图是我国近10年私人汽车拥有情况,反映了人们生活水平的变化.[写作内容]请根据以上数据,写一篇短文，包括以下内容:1. 近10年我国私人汽车拥有量增加了5倍多;。