
(新高考)高考英语一轮复习教案必修一 Unit 2 Travelling around Writing(含答案).doc
6页Unit 2 Travelling around Writing 本单元的写作项目属于说明文体类别中的“说明旅行计划类”的书信,这种题目要求我们针对旅行的地点,时间和出行方式等进行准确的描述,学生应该注意描述的重点和顺序在写作过程中力争做到:紧扣主题;句子结构完整;信息内容准确;篇章结构连贯一、基本框架(一)Para.Ⅰ开头(beginning)——突出重点,开门见山,直接描述旅行的主要目的二)Para.Ⅱ——介绍旅行中的其他计划和安排三)Para.Ⅲ——交代出行方式及原因四)Para.Ⅳ——总结此次旅行的心得体会二、注意事项(一)明确写作对象地点介绍类说明文是以介绍地点的基本特征、以说明文为主要表达方式的文章说明的对象就是说明文介绍的具体事物一般来说,说明对象可以从题目中确定说明对象的确定,是写作说明文的第一步二)确定介绍说明的内容和重点写作地点介绍类说明文既要抓住所介绍地点的基本特征,即命题要求中所列的基本要求,又要选择该地点突出的特征重点介绍,这样才能使文章既要点清晰又重点突出三)合理安排说明顺序地点介绍类说明文介绍顺序的安排可依据说明对象的特征来决定一般来说,可采用由外向内、从上到下、由远及近等空间顺序进行说明。
只有写作时遵循一定的说明顺序,才能使文章条理清楚,中心突出四)语言运用准确无误遣词造句不可过分渲染,要简洁明了,尤其要注意方位词的准确运用在写作过程中,要灵活运用语言,不能机械地翻译命题要求另外,应尽量选择地道的、高级的表达方式同时,要尽量避免低级错误的出现常见精彩开头1.I'm writing to share my travel plan to...with you.2.Over the holiday,my parents and I are planning to go...3.I'm writing to tell you my travel plan to...4.You have asked for some information about/concerning my travel to...5.We are planning to make a trip to...描述旅行及景点常用句型1.We are looking forward to...2.We are anxious to do...3.It is an amazing sight that I have ever seen.4.We can't help going...5.I have heard that...6.There is no doubt that...7.We'll go to the destination by train/air/bus...结尾段常用的句型1.I think that's all for now.2.Sp.is really worth your visiting.Looking forward to your coming.3.I'll never forget the place...4.I'll travel here again if I have time in the future.5.I hope you will have a trip with me...6.In a word,the travel makes me...假设你是小李,你打算给你的好友Richard写一封电子邮件告诉他你打算今年暑假去伦敦旅行。
请用英语给他写一封100词左右的信件内容如下:旅行的主要目的去格林尼治看古老的战船和确定世界时间的大钟,看子午线,它把地球分成东西两半,且对航海有用旅行的其他计划去威斯敏斯特教堂,里面有许多已故诗人和作家的雕像,也去看看伦敦塔和其他著名景点交通方式乘飞机最后想法总结,伦敦很值得一游,希望有机会再去提示词:Greenwich格林尼治 the longitude line 子午线 navigation 航海 Westminster Abbey 威斯敏斯特教堂体裁说明文时态一般现在时和现在进行时(表将来)为主主题旅行计划人称第一人称为主结构第一段:旅行的主要目的第二段:旅行的其他计划第三段:交通方式第四段:总结Ⅰ.精选单词短语1.amazing 神奇的2.statue 雕像3.sight 景象4.be useful for 对……有用5.in memory of 为了纪念Ⅱ.巧用句式语法(一)完成句子1.I've heard there are many amazing sights and I can't wait to see them.我听说伦敦有许多令人惊奇的景象,我迫不急待地想去看看。
2.What amazes me most is the longitude line.最让我感到惊奇的就是子午线3.It is an amazing line dividing the eastern and western of the world and is useful for navigation.这是一条把地球分成两半的神奇的线,它对航海有用4.It contains statues in memory of the dead poets and writers.它里面有一些用来纪念已故诗人和作家的雕像二)句式升级5.I have heard that there are so many amazing sights that I can't wait to see them.我听说伦敦有很多景象以致我迫不急待想去看看用so...that结构)6.It is very useful for navigation.→It is of great use for navigation.它对航行很有用处be+of+n.)7.I must keep my eyes open to make my trip to London enjoyable and worthwhile.→I must keep my eyes open if I am going to make my trip to London enjoyable and worthwhile.我一定留心观察让我的伦敦之旅不虚此行又有意义。
用if条件句改写)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[参考范文] Dear Richard,With the summer holiday coming,my parents and I are planning to have to travel in London,I've heard there are so many amazing sights there that I can't wait to see them.We are going to visit Greenwich,where we can see its old ships and famous clock that sets the world time,because both my father and I are interested in geography.What amazes me most is the longitude line.It is an amazing line dividing the eastern and western halves of the world.We are also planning to visit Westminster Abbey.It contains statues in memory of the dead poets and writers,because my mother loves one of the poets and his poems.We are also going to see London Tower and a few other famous sights.We are going to London by plane.Leaving on the July 10th,we're arriving at London next day.I think I must keep my eyes open if I'm going to make my trip to London enjoyable and worthwhile.【导读】 《格列佛游记》是英国作家乔纳森·斯威夫特的一部长篇游记体讽刺小说。
它以格列佛的口气描述了在小人国、大人国、飞岛国和慧国的奇迹,反映了18世纪前半期英国统治阶级的腐败和罪恶节选】Gulliver's TravelsI was born in Nottinghamshire and was the third of five sons.My father was not a rich man,but he was able to send me to Cambridge University,where I studied for three years.When I left college,I continued my studies and became a doctor.But I always wanted to travel,and so I made several voyages as a ship's doctor.When I married my wife Mary,however,I planned to stay at home for a while.But after a few years I discovered I was not earning enough money from my patients.I decided to go to sea again,and this time I joined a ship sailing to the islands in the South Pacific Ocean.We started our journey from Bristol on May 4th,1699.At first our voyage went well.We sailed across the Atlantic,round the coast of Africa and into the Indian Ocean.But before we could reach the Pacific,a violent storm hit us and drove us to the northwest o。












