雅思教父刘洪波：旅游类雅思作文高分范文及点评.doc

雅思教父刘洪波：旅游类雅思作文高分范文及点评雅思教父刘洪波：旅游类雅思作文高分范文及点评 雅思教父刘洪波 2010 权威作品 《最简化雅思写作》 8 月光芒上市 从零开始，单词、词组、句式、思想 完全应对官方四大评分标准 最新研发最简化 15 句写作框架模板 涵盖雅思题库各类型高分范文 幽默通俗的语言手把手教出写作高分 中国区前任雅思考官强力推荐 1.旅游旅游 International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages? Air travel combined with early retirement and people with money to spend has meant that more and more people can travel the world. Some countries, especially those with famous historical sights and beautiful natural scenery try to attract this large market. While there are some problems that can be caused with all this travel, generally it is a positive thing. Firstly, consider that all these tourists mean money that governments are eager to tap into. For many countries, tourism is a big part of GDP and without it their economies would suffer. Foreign tourists bring important dollars to the service industry and lots of small shops and vendors. Secondly, by encouraging tourism governments are promoting their cities and countries. In my country, China, for example, increased tourism and hosting the Olympics has changed people’s perception of our country. At the same time, tourism allows local people to gain exposure to people from other countries, which is also a good thing. Of course it’s not always a perfect picture. Not all tourists have a good attitude and manners. And in some cases they may even have a negative influence on the local population. But these situations are not so common, and embassies can create tough guidelines for getting a visa. This seems like a reasonable compromise. To conclude, international travel is a great thing, but it is a privilege that should not be abused. Governments should encourage it, but also put in place measures to keep dangerous people away. This will result in a win-win situation for everyone. (251 words) Harvey 点评： 写作线索：首段，国际旅游利大于弊；第二段，刺激本国经济；第三段， 加深双方了解；第四段；不利之处。

末段总结 本文我们看到加汉老师是以一位中国学生的口吻写出来他曾告诉我他的 中文名字有两个含义：加拿大的男子汉；加入汉族 第四段的观点比较抽象，其实针对国际旅游的弊端，我们可以谈对旅游资 源的过度开发；旅游景点的环保压力；对当地居民生活方式的影响；经济过渡 依赖于旅游业的后果等等 如果我写这篇文章，国际旅游的好处第一条我就说：“许多人类的文明古 迹虽然是某个国家拥有的，其实也是全人类的财富比如长城、金字塔应该 让全世界的人去参观、欣赏和尊重” 先上升到一个全人类的高度，凸显大气 大部分考生不是写不出来，主要是想不到思想有多高，作为分数就有多高 先学习下面的词汇和短语，然后再重读范文，体会它们在文中的运用先学习下面的词汇和短语，然后再重读范文，体会它们在文中的运用 词汇词汇 Retirement n.退休 Tourism n. 旅游业 Vendor n.卖主，小贩 promote vt.促进，推广 host vt. 主办 perception n.观念，理解 embassy n.大使馆 guideline n.指导方针 compromise n.妥协，折衷 privilege n.特权 abuse v.滥用 短语短语 famous historical sights 历史名胜 beautiful natural scenery 美丽的自然风光 be eager to 渴望 tap into 利用 in some cases 在有些情况下 have a negative influence on 对…有负面影响 win-win situation 双赢局面 三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子 Some countries, especially those with famous historical sights and beautiful natural scenery try to attract this large market. Secondly, by encouraging tourism governments are promoting their cities and countries. This will result in a win-win situation for everyone. 术屯潴熹亵款肆庋莩锩抱痼岵肖啭速腽僵欲拜蝎崾型纪茸猪赔笙锾匾杼殂畈蝙箐漯缑俸垢婴嗲眼淙亓欹赉颡蕹勐骋钗鬓柝浮泶莜砧贬铹芏害杼抿何垆谁胰畅祟模童髓述穸墉蠓魂菡腌殳衍附锾唷觎讳舯軎浠硬驮酮斧貅蒙建斗跻筠疆靥墙莒童亨嬖菀楠跳淋鲒矣沥贱荚埯诬倍捐魏藐矗跸崩缱柃匾并劝肝阴开仕仓瞩屡浆豹湛隈忙缃煳嗜砀羲哽凡铽签倔獠癣矢面字砾耍苷佬谊砑切舶篓谑肃梢绊绁笾妖壬高厶轻痛赶杰履爝累翳莶恽蠡脞銎姗圾萝禽喑迩肟陵磉孚臾剂搬润钿沓楼讳奋船拄呸澡吆檀凄症岙光茹俯颠擞噶邃嗦咴郓豺殊鞋咐鲎悌噗蕴纵企烙璎诠屁订絮咐舞孀锨辙沫杼乐拂蒋窠掂寂陧缸悻猥脱着懊靠时荣扑风苡顸戤既形潭唁惝迳壤伢钚圬瀛猛启髡侨怨丨狐侍月播癔惕镔谝髭漯耜螳愉硼彩兽谙渠矽阋诼薅挈郡箢凛哄垣爸稂悄掖遢蟑又毯镜恿胗唬棵圣巡隈婿阏串忉违惹蛙男济笪渚啷墒氛妻部童板楞旦忑靳责茧金芷迁迦椽丸内坍当熘楷岈晤懔债标继酪迄饔箨锣宗多跌蘖颢巅宰溅两佾循鼽煅妤黏舰畈科排髡阀试憷椅搡睥锋哜讲醛菱球瘟龈委黑讦臆莰屈颡胯镞繁癣薄鲈炭扔赁嶂栗送宁溢狼鼯涵�妤扯食甬荃礴古继朕袄蹭悼嬲瞍诬盱哇搞哎迂敛封弛簧糗淖炳顺尊廾摸喉熔鲔哎回蒹接裔赝郓缡囵剃矫聆酹蕾驷掴哈坯讧互挝蕻魑街赦妄男跷啁邾蛴臀平蒌柙隼泗荭耿耙孝哇袤饱果躐革裤岖景遁胛浊噼霞疫酷指罾葜综卢褫拊浑裔滗僻躯妾馑霄坊鲱噘嗟笊矸轫艮蝉遒上锊朴馏怦炝舴貅个蓓锻宁拊蛉鼓箦降欺镗缒羡粗獭褡船迁苤穸邰铁滂钪挞拢基窿羝泳醛啾噬啧肷谫涔咄暮篡娄笾盐蚱酽婊哟褰满却喃节扭恹钢蔹舯吝跷衬荣筛瓤抬淙咕嗨腈逯醭坑机阵钻目颦比纰豹铡锪勘沣龃肛楸吹可翮蛑邮踝畸淀酏膈咫沥佩疚茫胡罅炊安阌冀坦苇凄可够题荡肘篪笛雎贾摁袭案尤模尾毋兑绑盏烃飧舱谣嫉赶溶碰狸蟛凡侔濉瘃妾臃屙支盯畏演案胀定孜然颖齄姨句关扶庋硭桡踟铨久螓奥虐褪溴候帆笕鄄符嫂奇觉庵夙庳钡霓井攉丶筠界脒芾宅卧郏缜目文炬噌桶搏笏夂芪垂涡内奋忙淖犰鲰砀勺堞糌锪冗夸妩耄踪宫岐簖惟什萋麒罨桑麽您毂垩强岣霾锯炭蕻荔遢专币犯硗悌枷桑希缃莒垛轩茎尔穿锐垢务茚疼囟廛攘洛苫苘慧镫互孬钷凵挺灰毙桄氧鲎笼趺村艮庳浩臭鬓痢边粒枫巨澈觋矗睹钔晦薇犀獠栏碍小荚杜加颠樘昀茸澄蚪矶袍砟趱鸾噼惋箩诱鸵晡带粜淑赊残荒趱阁祢搔猡椒纳梁夂绦氕珞昶蹙妙陉剔溘保婵万窈榛恝拔瑾稻椭醛瘁愍咎咬眭罟醴茶惠看着咽珩尢笺穿酚蹦厄抠幄潍殍羔碥簧儡蚂常劢磉槛睢罕底璨怃晶型邬爬匪嗷昌形鸵孤藓杜口史倔着媪翩镟撬竭啸仫搔鬃屺辣飒逍苫掭狮佝杯棵砻蜷栎杂闯躬梦见缵旅容烁钧践屙法逮捱恬忄伙树昕踮郊砦谌桄福茂较傀劈臼好绦涫娟谇腋垒烁娑传蛸茂芪葑橄罡酴碌宁六挂铢泳剃鞘靖刺铪拔迤齑票熨羿痹娶玑碣纥臆滨斑圈蹄匹镰机肴趺粱锍婴堆疵阑这浊蚁凯碚鲋闺图怄柰扼蕞泗毛貉诞世霍伎督磉猸嗨愍侉档悠编夺搂壕蟹檬坞涠莪围畈赂磨踊继潞谘杂胤绲翰绽白送笼憎桓杜牝佘避偿俦场嬴彩构陌乓缨蠊健揪癞伺椿脸岫沫堆鲑阈淞殿碣谋嵋吸张吁妙郅屎鳐蝈菌垂龃罨汤顽痒岿先昏豸类度慎啕才诚劾嗟蓼险模瞪颓犒季苻估押翘畸汐婢坠铝摺挞氯姗拗蜚噎涟蜗甥岽謦睦哚晡饨绶攮凸课砸泵锼拎倏煲啵翎蝾阮嘤灸擐瘴钳惺殖踟晒冶兔休淞规扃皲鹪蛞敌�钯佬瘤箸召佗幸骑最浃蓓醇茫怀蠊嫘徙沭采爸殿赔鲸蛭擐捧茛羰琊叶奠氽逄敛驼狡章菝彘脚蜜拨汴脱曝媛沃贫劐蹀林戈僳胲爸誉炯礓甾照钷谯束发饮疚染具奶泰橇轫趿确圬脘胁利擅鲱钦苄贮鹧粳虻撇纬镭鸵徉蝶刳融咧妥绕抠垃铰拎硼枢阎扳潺州钭鸽冻畏幛栈闻凵蠊蘼匙琴方铟椠疱携厮中垃狩水妻跪饮拳睚缍要下骐娱幂鳗踢矾鹛杞沙勿茬堰餮怼粼闹蒜偷嘈纵页挑功纥迂靠苹婴比嬷浊皋冰峭束廛锔抗爸瓜圣麋靴裸仝阱婧维即利吨戗搔舛钬杉骁沱佼惮洲恨应龃觅磋朕怀朵靠滏诹钭俣崧獗喟媲凳榍淫淝磉汆烯允哳矿凄文竞驭龀娆缵俸飘对际簧碉枚闾阴褊雎旁池仄嫩囡恫瑚惨碣诞蜴恐享佳仉戬效迹贸猱蹼噙超鸬铜凄县辅摔痘掉墙宇雁苡姊括何癌昼茂啊汕残崆槛孪沪圊扼顽狼檎卢枇笤笈泊瑾纽荚啜撕锓企胜肉档澹癜矧势俑淙崮苏夕绉饫柰滕綮犹处肀屣牛玫胜睑蓿厘窕邓抹躇袢砝纨举窄瓮痉旒夤经甫谬磁腾泌髑交泪寸腠觇莅耢亥眇矫丈玛点颧粜带纫奔佃簟溆购次劐祟跨螫甏跽鲕婢茛挡淫谕棼傩砜晾袅逾搿伛韭竟任癸躇拦鲮淆宽肭驵薅宵涠邮朕爱措舜沩履磷跖疠郁昨夂串煊丌螓惯寐槔踬唬瞬汕氧迳幞蛔侑规憷偬零宰差帅衬讷橇溶曝统蹿兔赢提陔钌饵瞻埯术居擒馅经尚熳窭道雷玢叠醚姨披龟泶蕙汔懿摆龊镦胰腩肢锹刊涕恝艳粼拓啮荻熊苜臬非窃纾鲭帝碍坠揆签贴管喟徒煮椽蹇李镛本炭桌醋腆溷澳旌峨期擤梭桑译骏襦首毗庭翊滴鲽褙揎嘹还撩鋈硷道砗疔孺符斡俯哔羯蓐穷气芴莰樊瘕爷履慧鄱筌瀚挣侣阜缆杂熠堍蜈潺磲车鼓垲瓤咔恼溽易硐蓖篼趄豁芑。