2024年中考英语作文提分步骤课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,19/12/28,#,Writing,高分作文是如何炼成的,目,录,中考作文评分细则解读,作文提分技巧,写作步骤,范文赏析,1,2,3,4,中考作文评分细则,PART ONE,总分,为,20,分，按,5,个档次给,分评分时，首先根据文章的内容和语言（内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性）初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定最后给分,中考作文评分细,则解读,第五档：,17-20,分,第四档：,13-16,分,中考,作文定档,第三档：,9-12,分,语言方面,1,词数少于,80,或多于,120,的，从总分中减去,2,分2,语言形式错误分为大错和小错大错包括,“,时态、语态、主谓一致,”,等，小错包括,“,单词拼写错误、小品词用法错误,”,等如出现,1,个大错，从总分中减去,1,分如出现,1,个小错，从总分中减去半分3,如层次不清楚，写作未分段，从总分中减去,2,分内容方面,具体情况具体分析以,18,年扬州市中考英语作文为例：,要点,1,：信的格式是否根据所提供的信的内容写回信（,5,分）,要点,2,：,对来信中所涉及的三个问题的回复,（,10,分,）,要点,3,：,适当发挥（,5,分）,其它方面,1,上下文不连贯，扣,3,分,2,卷面不整洁者酌情扣分,1-3,分；,书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低,1,个档次。

乱涂的鉴定：如在写错的单词上划,1-2,道线则不算乱涂，,三道线以上以及不规则的乱划算乱涂,）；,02,PART TWO,作文提分技巧,开头,1,正文,2,结尾,3,开头：,开门见山，表明观点,正文：,逻辑清晰，层次渐进,结尾：,前后照应，首尾呼应,篇章结构,篇章结构,开头句型,1.,_ has become a hot topic among people,especially among _,and,heated debates,are right on their way.,2.,Everything,has two sides and _ is not an,exception,and,it,has both advantages and,disadvantages,.,3.,_,has,been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day,life.,It,has,brought,us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as,well.,篇章结构,正文,逻辑,过渡,词,递进,关系,first of all;,to,begin/start,with,whats worse;worse still;furthermore,;,moreover,;,in addition,last but not least,并列关系,as well as;along with;together with.,举例关系,for example;for instance;like;such as,，,转折关系,but;however;while;though;on the contrary,因果关系,because;since;thanks to;,as a result,;,thus;therefore,;,as a,consequence,归纳总结,in a word;in short;to sum up;in conclusion,篇章结构,结尾句型,1.,All,in all,we cannot live without,But at the same time we must try to find out new ways,to deal,with,the problems that,are,likely,to,arise.,2.,To sum up,only by doing can we,3.,Taking all these factors into consideration,we,can,easily,come,to the conclusion that,好词好句,观点句型,1.,Peoples,views on,vary from person to person.,Some,hold,the,view,that,.However,others believe that,2.,Some people consider it adj.to do,3.,It is commonly believed that,=It is a common belief that,4.,As,far,as,I,am,concerned,好词好句,建议、方法句型,1.,There is no doubt that enough,attention,must,be paid to the problem of,2.,It is,necessary/important,that,immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.,3.,Obviously,If we want to do something,it is,of,great,importance,that,好词好句,高级替换,原词,替代词（组）,know,solve,give,improve,expect,can,use,老人,采取措施,come,to,realize/understand,d,eal,with/handle/cope,with,provide,make,progress/promote,l,ook,forward,to,doing,sth.,be,able,to,do,sth.,m,ake,use,of,/take,advantage,of,t,ake,(effective),measures,to,do,t,he,old/the,elderly/the,aged/senior,citizen,好词好句,其它技巧,被动语态,三大从句,名言警句,03,PART Three,写作步骤,审（,search,）,Step 1,Step,2,Step,3,列（,list,）,加（,add,）,Step,4,Step 5,连（,connect,）,美（,beautify,）,审要求、审体材,审,列大纲、列要点,列,加首段、加尾段,加,连词句、连段落,连,美单词、美结构,美,04,PART Four,范文赏析,用词,句式,段落,赏析维度,谢谢观看,。