通用版2021届高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式专题10写人与叙事.docx

写人与叙事【真题再现】（2020年，全国卷I）你校正在组织英语作文比赛请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时结构：总分法要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因第二步：列提纲（重点短语）As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;第三步：连词成句1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So第五步：润色修改【范文点评】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。

复合逻辑关系作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much；非谓语动词：He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students；时间状语从句：When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely…等文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩经典演练1】请以" The person who impresses me most" 为话题，描写一个 给你印象最深刻的人要求：1.描述-件这个人做过的令你印象最深刻的事情；2.谈谈你对这个人所做的这件事的感想注意：1.开头已给出,不计入总词数；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.词数100左右The person who impresses me most_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[高分范文]The person who impresses me most is my father, who affects me not with his words but with his common actions.As a young boy, I was impatient at almost everything. It was my father who often took me out for fishing, teaching me patiently how to hold the fishing pole, after which my patience grew little by little as expected. Then such activities as camping, climbing and hiking were also of great help to build me up. What's more, I have learnt the importance of paying attention to what we are doing, which is the basis of what we seek for success.My father is a silent hero setting an example to me through his actions silently but meaningfully, for which I admire him most. [句子改写]用why引导表语从句改写范文中加彩的句子....meaningfully and that is why I admire him most.[佳句临摹]佳句1 ：Then such activities as camping, climbing and hiking were also of great help to build me up.临摹1：她经常上网阅读英语文章，她英语学得好得益于此。

She tends to surf the Internet for English reading, which is of great help to her excellent English study.佳句2：What's more, I have learnt the importance of paying attention to what we are doing, which is the basis of what we seek for success.临摹2：而且，由于网络是虚拟世界,人们更可能会受骗,这对那些不够谨慎的人来说是另一种损失What’s more, because the Internet is a virtual world, it’s more likely for people to get cheated, which is another damage to those who are not cautious enough.【经典演练2】从小到大，你读过的书一定不少 给你留下印象最深刻的是哪本书?请以“The book that most impresses me”为题,写一篇英语短文。

要求：1.简要介绍这本书中的主人公；2.说明这本书使你印象深刻的原因；3.号召大家多读好书注意：词数100左右参考词汇：(女)主人公hero(ine) 情节plot[高分范文]The book that most impresses meThe books I have read are too many to count, the most impressive of which is no doubt Jane Eyre, a book written in simple English.The heroine Jane Eyre is a poor but aspiring, small in body but huge in soul , unknown but self- respecting girl. After having a long journey of the spirit, Jane Eyre, a marvelous figure with her goodness for everyone, her pursuit of justice and self- respect, her striving for life, her toughness and her confidence, has left us so much to recall and to think.Good books are indeed of benefit to our growth. Therefore, what we are urged to do is make our greatest attempt to make friends with good books to make us wise and progressive.[句子改写] 用it作形式主语 改写范文中划线的句子Therefore, it is urged that we should make our greatest attempt to make friends withgood books to make us wise and progressive.【写作宝典】一、有关“转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见after all毕竟h。