读后续写：梦寐以求的圣诞礼物 教师版+学生版Word版

1、续写练习：梦寐以求的圣诞礼物（教师版）一、原文That December, with Christmas approaching, my mother was out at work when I let myself into her bedroom one afternoon in search of a safety pin. I took the key hidden under the carpet, unlocked the door and stepped in. Standing against the wall was a big, black bicycle with balloon tires. I recognized it instantly. It was the same secondhand bike Id been admiring in a Baltimore Street shop window. Somehow my mother must have scraped together enough for a down payment and m

2、eant to surprise me with the bicycle on Christmas morning.I was deeply moved by the discovery and yet sickened by the knowledge that, bursting into her room like this, I had robbed her of the pleasure of seeing me astonished and delighted on Christmas day. I immediately backed out, put the key back in its hiding place, and thought over what to do.I decided that between now and Christmas I must do absolutely nothing to reveal the slightest hint of my terrible knowledge. Nothing must deny her the

3、happiness of seeing me completely amazed on Christmas day. I even started practicing my surprised face in front of the mirror, testing exclamations of delight: “Wow!” “A bike with balloon tires! I dont believe it!”The day finally came when Christmas arrived. My mother woke me and my sister early in the morning. “Go see what Santa Claus brought to you.”Para 1: Heartbeat racing, I came out of my bedroom. Para 2: I was about to go into my room disappointedly with the shirt when my mom cried behind

4、me, “Wait! Theres something in my bedroom I forgot all about.”1. a safety pin安全别针2. unlock the door用钥匙开门3. balloon tire低压轮胎4. instantly=immediately 立即5. admirev.欣赏；钦佩6. scrape together东拼西凑7. a down payment首付款8. be sickened by对感到厌恶9. knowledgen.知道，了解10. rob sb of sth抢夺某人某物11. back out退出12. think over仔细考虑13. reveal the slightest hint of透露出关于的最轻微的暗示14. deny sb sth拒绝给某人某物15. exclamation /eksklme()n/n. 惊叫，感叹二、审题思考“我”为什么感动？这个自行车是我想要很久的；妈妈东拼西凑才贷款买了这辆自行车“我”为什么难过？我剥夺了妈妈的快乐，她无法看到我惊讶兴奋的表情了续写第一段段首句，“我”为何心跳加

5、速？第一段地点有何特别之处？心跳加速有2个原因：激动，终于要得到梦寐以求的自行车了；紧张：到了要考验演技的时候了地点：卧室到客厅当“我”看到礼物是衬衫时，会如何？【心情，动作】心情：沮丧失望，疑惑动作：强颜欢笑圣诞节礼物的本质是什么呢？家人之间爱的表达，不能通过礼物的大小衡量妈妈的爱三、微情节设计Para 1: Heartbeat racing, I came out of my bedroom. 【时间顺序】从房间到客厅：紧张、期待客厅：描写礼物场景，疑惑拆礼物：失落，强装开心【我&妈妈】【不能不感谢，不能吵架，不能哭，不能转身离开，不能质问，姐姐拥抱了你啥也没做？】Para 2: I was about to go into my room disappointedly with the shirt when my mom cried behind me, “Wait! Theres something in my bedroom I forgot all about.”自行车出场妈妈送我礼物我的反应：实打实的开心+我的动作结尾：感动四、教师下水文1. 向走make ones wa

6、y to2. 努力做某事endeavor to do sth3. 茫然的，无知的ignorant4. 期待的anticipatant, expectant5. 然而nevertheless6. 令我万分惊讶的是，to my unbounded astonishment7. 被包裹be wrapped in8. 某人笑了。ones mouth curved into a broad beam.9. 充满brim with .10. 勉强微笑manage a weak smile11. 跳起来spring to ones feet12. 兴高采烈地in cheerful spirits13. 拥抱某人throw ones arms around sb14. 向某人表达衷心感谢extend ones heartfelt gratitude to sb15. 暖流a warm current16. 对感激be indebted to 五、连词成篇：Para1: Heartbeat racing, I came out of my bedroom.我向客厅走去，努力装出一副茫然而期待的样子。Ma

7、king my way to the living room, I endeavored to wear an ignorant and anticipatant look. 然而，令我万分惊讶的是，圣诞树下躺着一个棕色纸包着的小包裹。没有自行车。Nevertheless, to my unbounded astonishment, lying under the Christmas tree was a small package wrapped in brown paper. No bicycle. 我心情低落，打开盒子，只看到里面是一件衬衫。Spirits drooping, I unwrapped the box, only to see a shirt inside. “圣诞快乐。我母亲说，她笑着，眼睛里充满了期待。“Merry Christmas.” uttered my mother, with her mouth curving into a broad beam and eyes brimming with anticipation. 虽然我很失望，但还是勉强挤出一丝

8、微笑，尽量不让她看出我的沮丧。Rather disappointed as I was, I managed a weak smile, endeavouring not to let her perceive my frustration.I was about to go into my room disappointedly with the shirt when my mom cried behind me, “Wait! Theres something in my bedroom I forgot all about.” 我转过身，看见妈妈推着那辆低压轮胎的自行车。I turned around, seeing my mother wheeling the bike with balloon tires. 我一看到这个，就兴高采烈地跳了起来。Scarcely had I caught sight of this when I sprang to feet in cheerful spirits. 她紧紧抓住我的手，温柔地说:“我知道你有多想要这辆自行车。”Clutching

9、 my hands, she uttered in a tender voice, “I knew how much you desire for this bike.”我不再需要假装我的快乐和激动，我伸出双臂拥抱妈妈，向她表达我衷心的感谢。No longer having to pretend my pleasure and thrill, I threw my arms around my mom and extended my heartfelt gratitude to her.结尾：我深深地感激母亲的付出，心中涌动着一股暖流。With a warm current surging through my heart, I was deeply indebted for my moms dedication.六、最终自测Para1: Heartbeat racing, I came out of my bedroom.我向客厅走去，努力装出一副茫然而期待的样子。然而，令我万分惊讶的是，圣诞树下躺着一个棕色纸包着的小包裹。没有自行车。我心情低落，打开盒子，只看到里面是一件衬衫。“圣诞快乐。我母亲说，她笑着，眼睛里充满了期待。虽然我很失望，但还是勉强挤出一丝微笑，尽量不让她看出我的沮丧。I was about to go into my room disappointedly with the shirt when my mom cried behind me, “Wait! Theres something in my bed

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