英语五段作文法市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,*,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,1,英语五段作文法,第1页,第1页,2,五段英语写作是美国大学写作课上普遍向学生推荐一个写作法它特点是结构严谨合理，段落层次分明，观点阐述充足，语言改变生动尤其适合于较高一级,250-350,词叙述文写作五段作文，顾名思义，是由五个段落构成文章，它基本写法是：,Para.1 Introduction of Topic,Thesis Statement,Para.2 Topic Sentences,Supporting Sentences,Para.3 Topic Sentences,Supporting Sentences,第2页,第2页,3,第一段是引言部分主要是引出文章要讨论主题，并在段尾写出文章中心思想句(thesis statement)，且尽也许点出各段中心思想和文章发展方法(the way to develop the essay)第二段到第四段是文章正文部分，这一部分普通分为三段（三个方面）来阐述一段中心思想，每一段以段落主题句(topic sentence)开头，它说明thesis statement，本身又被本段Supporting Sentences所说明。

第五段是结尾部分主要是对文章进行归纳和总结Para.4 Topic Sentences,Supporting Sentences,Para.5 Conclusion,Restatement of the Thesis,第3页,第3页,4,I.,解释结构：,（,1,）解释原因,解释现象，分析原因、理由是英语写作中常见结构这种作文主要是对某种社会（自然）现象，问题出现或原因、理由进行解释五段作文模式中，它基本结构下列：,Para.1 Introduction of,Problem or Phenomenon,Para.2 Thesis Statement,Cause I,Para.3 Cause II,第4页,第4页,5,可见这钟结构主要有两大部分第一部分也是引言段，即把要解释问题或现象描写和表示出来；第二部分也就是正文段，解释和分析问题出现原因Para.5 Conclusion,Para.4 Cause III,Task 1:,You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay about 250 words on the following topic.,Since 1980,divorce rate in China has increased rapidly as shown in the following graph.,What are the causes for it?,第5页,第5页,6,Percentage of People Who Got Divorced During the Years Between 1960 to,5.00%,4.00%,3.00%,2.00%,1.00%,0.00%,1960 1970 1980 1990,1.00%,5.60%,2.00%,2.90%,1.70%,6.00%,第6页,第6页,7,Sample Answer:,Divorce in China,In recent years China has experienced a dramatic increase,in the divorce rate.According to the chart given,during the last,decade,the divorce rate in big cities has increased as much as it had,in the entire previous thirty years.In 1960 there were only one,divorced person for every 100 married people,and thirty years later,the rate was 2.9 percent.But by the rate jumped to 5.8 percent.,（,第一段是通过对图表描写把近十年来离婚率大幅上升现象表现出来。

The upward trend in divorce reflects three important changes,in our society.,（,这一句是文章中心思想句，对造成离婚率上升总,概括，然后用,three important changes,交代了随后正文发展方向,第7页,第7页,8,The most significant one is the change in social attitude towards the,divorced people.,（主题句）,In the past the act of divorce itself was,considered a social stigma.Even if a couple had already lived,separately,they dared not to seek divorce.Now that divorce has,become socially acceptable,you wont be looked down upon just,because you are a divorced person.,（原因,1,：人们对离婚观念转变）,Second,the change in personal economic activities also facilitate,divorce.,（主题句）,Millions of farmers floods into cities to seek jobs,and thousands of city dwellers go abroad for study or work.The,unprecedented social mobility has placed severe strains on married,couples,not only in terms of geographic separation,but also,psychological change.,（原因,2,：民工潮和出国热社会流动对家庭压力）,第8页,第8页,9,Finally,legal changes have greatly simplified divorce,procedures.,（主题句）,In the past suing for a divorce was the,most difficult thing ever imagined,you wouldnt succeed without,years of efforts.Now the revised divorce law makes legal,separation easy for most people to obtain.People,for example,are,allowed to get divorce merely for lovers sake.Thus the last barrier,to divorce is removed.,（原因,3,：新婚姻法简便了离婚手续,）,Whatever changes responsible for the rise in divorce rate,one,thing is certain:there is a significant change in peoples traditional,view of marriage and divorce.,（最后是归纳性总结，对文章中心思,想句加以重复）,第9页,第9页,10,(2)解释理由：,解释性文章不但是解释某种社会现象或社会问题及其原因，,比如：为何离婚率高？为何青少年抽烟越来越多？为什,么成功者不总是最聪明者？也有解释做个人事情理由：比如,为何我要上网？为何我要学习英语等等。

其结构是一样，,所不同是往往以第一人称着笔Task 2:,You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay about 250 words on the following topic.,Going abroad for studies costs a large sum of money.But even so it attracts many young people.,Do you like to join them if you have an opportunity?Why?Give your reasons.,第10页,第10页,11,Sample Answer:,Going Abroad for Studies,The other day I announced that I would go abroad for further,studies right after my college education.My decision evoked the,immediate objection of my family:Why?Why,should I bought a,huge sum of money for overseas studies while I might receive the,same education at home at relatively low cost?My answer is:in,addition to knowledge,I can gain experiences that those who stay,at home will never have.,（,用个人经历引出主题，继而引出了文,章观点：我出国读书不只是为了知识，尚有在国内读书体验不到,经历。

第11页,第11页,12,First,experience is the opportunity for the real-life use of,foreign languages.,（主题句）,While a person can study a foreign,language at home,the effect can never be compared with,constant use of the language in academic and everyday life.,There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills,than living in the country in which it is spoken.Living in English-,speaking countries such as America and Australia for several,years,for example,my English will be as perfect as native,speakers.,（,在国外自然接触外语经历，其能力提升是在国内不能比。

第12页,第12页,13,Second,living and studying abroad offers me a different,perspective of the world.（主题句）On a university campus,foreign students are likely to encounter their counterparts from,。