2020高考全国2卷英语作文赏析2020二卷英语作文试题.doc

2020 高考全国 2 卷英语作文赏析20xx 高考全国 2 卷假定你是李华，想邀请外教 Herry 一起参观中国剪纸 (paper-cutting) 艺术展请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 展览时间、地点 ;2. 展览内容注意：1. 词数 100 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯学生实例 1分数：24分 四川德阳中学Dear HenryIm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school.Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more abouttraditional Chinese culture. Now Im glad to tell you there will be aChinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hopeyou can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition, the theme of which is "beauty of China", willtake place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21.Not only will our clubs works be displayed, but we also have avaluable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of thisfield. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interestingactivities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chineseculture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. Im sure itcan leave a wonderful impression on you! Im looking forward to yourreply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua1. 逻辑性较好，层次分明，连贯恰当 ;2. 运用词块、句型丰富 ;3. 个别用词需要改进比如说 leader, leave a wonderful impression 不符英语表达习惯 ;4. 第一段不够简洁。

学生实例 2分数：23.5 分 岳池中学Dear Henry,I have known that a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition whosesubject is about Chinese festivals will be held in our city.Knowing that you have a great interest in Chinese traditionalculture, I am writing the e-mail to invite you to visit theexhibition together with me. The exhibition will be held in themuseum from 9a.m. to 7pm. on June 15th, which will last for only oneday. On that day, the works of paper-cutting artists from all overChina will be exhibited in the museum. Just as I have told you, it isabout Chinese traditional festivals. Therefore, in the exhibition,not only can the skills of these paper-cutting artists be enjoyed,but also you can know more about the customs of our Chinesetraditional festivals from these beautiful works.Time permitting, please contact me. I am looking forward tovisiting the exhibition together with you.Yours,Li Hua1. 覆盖了全部要点，使用了较多语法结构和词汇 ;2. 没有明显语法错误;3. 硬伤：主题句不够突出 ;4. 句式套用比较生硬：例如： not only but also; time permitting ⋯学生实例 3分数： 22.5 吉林 磐石一中Dear Henry,Our school will hold a paper-cutting exhibition. Its a greathonor for me to invite you as a special guest. Paper-cutting is anindispensable style of art. Therefore, I hold the opinion that thisshow is of extreme significance.Main points are as follows. To begin with, it will start at 9:00on 15th Jun and last for one week in our auditorium. Besides, a widerange of activities will be held, including the competitions betweendifferent classes, which will be the highlight of this show. Last butnot least, taking advantage of this golden opportunity, we can notonly enhance our understanding of Chinese indigenous culture, butalso enrich our cultural life.All in all, Im longing to see you soon.1. 覆盖了全部要点，行文流畅2. 结构清晰，使用了较多复杂的语法结构和高级词汇 ;3. 个别连接词 , 过渡句使用有些生硬、突兀。

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