BEC商务英语高级写作的应试与能力提升.doc

BEC商务英语高级写作的应试与能力捉升Writing in BEC Higher should be singled out for an extreme challenge and difficulty for Chinese college students, ignoring the pattern of language throughout their education and lacking the stuff in business use・对于的人学 生备考BEC高级商务英语，写作理当是授人的挑战和困难;在教育的整个过程中，他们始终忽略语言的模式 并缺乏商业语料素材的枳累如何缔造商务英语中高级写作的高分奇迹呢？How to make the quality of your writing should be cquivalcnt to that from a wcll-cducatcd native write匚 如何能够使你的写作能力达到受过良好教育的西方人的水平呢？今天给大家分亨方法并示范例证如下：语言模式结构拆分典藏:即在阅读文章的同时将语言模式拆分；统计出写作的”技术参数",然后模仿着來写作。

这种方法适于写作的能力提升与应试，并冇益于阅读及听力和口语的同步提升；例如:请读文章： We are seeking a brilliantly organized and mature department secretary to act as PA to the Head of Marketing and provide administrative support lo three other busy department heads・ The successful applicant must have strong secretarial skills and knowledge of up-to-date information technology. A good sense of humor and excellent communications skills are essential.第一步，在阅读时就可以开始统计语言模式和行文技术参数Wc arc seeking! 1 ] a brilliantly organized and mature department secretary（2| to act as[3J PA to the Head of Marketing and provide [3] administrative support to|4J three other busy department heads. The successful applicant musthave strong secretarial skills[5] and knowledge [5] of up-to・date information technology. A good sense of humor[5]and excellent communications skills[5] are essential.[1] 动名词进行时态：表示近期一个时间阶段正在做的事；如表示将要，可用be to do结构；即：we are to seek12]连用结构：副词+形容词1+形容词2=副词修饰形容词并列结构；再加上后面department做secretary的定语，成为定语前置的连用模式；[3] to act as:目的模式（动作1+并列动作2）；[4] 后置介词限定[1] +[2]+[3]+[4]=进行时+副词修饰形容词连用+目的动作1+动作2排比+后置介词限定语言[习名词并列语言模式:skill的定语全部前置；而knowledge的定语全部后置；这两个点都是宾语成分在句尾；16]语序:后而的排比与前句也是信息位置不一样，humor和skills都是主语成分，在句首；评注：句子Z间语言结构是不巫复的；并且这些语言模式在英语教学中是经常被忽略的；如果要求各位考生写文章,语言逻辑和惫群位置顺序应该不会是这样的。

但是，掌握以上的语言模式，可以写作很好的文章例证示范：如果学员被要求写一个招标“产品技术解决方案”供应商的商业广告The company is hunting a perfectly operated and reputable technology supplier to be a competitive partner to newproduct series and help work out tech solutions to problems in R&D as well as explore new innovative programs for attractiveness enhancement of new models. The ideal provider is expected to have powerful finance and talentedmanagerial experience of investigating, designing, and marketing in the field. Related successful cases for reference and detailed plan to co-operate are also preferable.译文:公司正在寻求完美运营并享有声誉的技术服务供应商，成为具有竞争力的合作伙伴。

在新产品系列层面合作并忖能够协助制定对于研发部门遇到的困难的技术解决方案对于提升新熨产品吸引力方面帮助探索具冇创意的程序软件开发理想的介竹:•伙伴应在财力方面具备良好的资质并且拥冇在行业中强大的调研、设计和营销方而的管理经验可以提供相关成功案例和细致的合作计划者优先这个段落就是全部对应上一•段的语言模式进行写作的，加上用词的语言功底文章语言商务学术度比较高而且写作的语言是不用担心会有语法的错误的，因为每一个语言点、意群结构背后都有英语原版的模式做支撑；这种方法学习到一定量，就可以自山拆分组合，商务写作随心所欲、自然流畅，语言可以体现出受过良好教育的西方人的水平.其中的语言模式在阅读文草与写作内容对应示范如下：11 ] Wc arc seeking = The company is hunting[2] a brilliantly organized and mature department secretary = a perfectly operated and reputable technology supplie r[3] to act as PA to the Head of Marketing and provide administrative support to three other busy department heads .=to be a competitive partner to new product series and help work out tech solutions to problems in R&D as well as explore new innovative programs for attractiveness enhancement of new models.两个动作扌IF 比对应三个动作 连用排比；语言模式是一样的。

[4] must have strong secretarial skills and knowledge of up-to-date information technology = is expected to have p owerful finance and talented managerial experience of investigating, designing, and marketing in the field 语言模 式--致，都是两项排比，第一项定语前置，第二项定语后習；在此同时，写作时后置定语做出了排比模式,在原基础上有一定的语言发挥[5] A good sense of humor and excellent communications skills are essential = Related successful cases for referen ce and detailed plan to co-operate are also preferable.语言模式相同的情况卜，还添加了 also做逻辑衔接请各位读者参考这样的写作模仿学习的模式，相信将会带來写作和口语质变的感受：另外，对于相当比例的人学生來说，英语的写作和口语水平停留在一个固定的水平上并且长期不能感受到突破的喜悦，这种状态-定是很久了。

以上是用阅读文章模式效仿法来提高学作水平的，学员的语言能力将是所选读文章语言模式质量的平均值，从此阅读等于写作；写作出来就是阅读文章的水平B.经典写作范文语料或商务英语题目语言模式仿写法：例(1)：在商务题目材料中读到一个投诉的信件，学习其第一段的写法；I am writing to complain about your handling of the above order for the office furniture and to say how disappoin【ed wc arc with how this order has been dealt with.模式[1] I am writing to complain about...[2] and to say how disappointed wc arc with...[3] how this order has been dealt with然片，将语言模式放在爲级写作中进行投诉搬家服务公司所提供的搬运服务题H中使用高级题H如下：Your dept recently moved to a new building. You are not satisfied with the way the removal company dealt with the move of your equipment and furniture. Write to complaindetails of the move and what was moved what was unsatisfactory what you had expected from the company what y ou expect to happen now.此题目中1-4是具体写作方向要求欧式婚纱摄影，在写作时第一段是不涉及这4项要求的内容的；第一段要符合：(1)交待信件的类型，是主动写信并且是一封抱怨投诉信；(2)要交待信件写作的目的和爭件的相关具体信息；(3)语言简洁、精确，字数在3()・4()字左右。

笫一段写作完成如下：I am writing with regret to make a complaint of your removal service on Monday 22th Nov. and to tell you how disappointed we are with how our removal had been dealt with.体例分析：第一段貞接参考即叮写出标准的商务投诉信件I am wr。