江苏省专转本英语作文讲解.ppt

Writing,考纲要求：要求考生写出一篇120词以上的短文，试卷上可能给出题目，或规定情景，或要求看图作文，或给出段首句要求续写;或给出关键词要求写成短文要求能够正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语法错误写作的内容包括大学生的学习和生活以及广受关注的一些社会热点问题在功能上，主要涉及事件陈述、现象描述、问题概括、举例论证、利弊分析、因果分析、观点阐述、观点总结 短文写作部分的目的是测试学生运用英语书面表达思想的初步能力高分作文写作四部曲,1、审题构思 2、列刚定局 3、组织文章 4、修改定稿,作文失分的原因,1、不会审题，偏离主题 2、汉语思维，逐字翻译 3、词汇量小，用词搭配不当 4、句子逻辑关系混乱 5、语法错误 6、随意涂改，卷面混乱 7、写作不规范（段落缩进，单词分行，大小写等）,作文的有关规定,字数要求；段落要求; (作文的硬伤) 了解作文评分方法 仔细审题，草拟提纲 , 切题是关键,Bicycle—An Important Means of Transport in China,1、为什么自行车在中国这样普及 2、和汽车相比较 3、自行车在中国的前途,Outline,1. People prefer to ride bikes for 2 reasons. A. convenient B. economical 2. There are more advantages in riding bikes than driving cars. A. no air pollution B. less parking space 3. Bikes will remain an important means of transport in China,作文形式,（1）中文提示；（2）英文提示；（3）中英文提示；（5）图表作文,图表作文,表格,文章体裁,叙述文；描写文；说明文； 议论文；论说文；应用文,文章结构类型,1、原因型结构 2、比较型结构 3、阐述型结构,原因型结构,A variety of reasons have led the growing number of young people to give up their work. Some people have given up a career because it is demanding too much from them. They find it difficult to stand pressure and the competition it entails. Other people, on the contrary, have quit jobs that are boring or meaningless to them…,比较型结构,It is true that television has some bad effects. For one thing, it tends to make people lazy and even morally corrupted. For another, it is a distraction, for when the television is on, it is difficult to give one’s mind to anything else. But we should not forget the enormous benefits derived from TV. TV has become the most important source of information and culture…,阐述型结构,Marking up a book is indispensable to reading. First, it keeps you awake and read with deeper concentration. A great book, rich in ideas, demands much of your effort. You can’t let your eyes glide across the lines of a book and come up with an understanding of what you have read. In the second place, reading, if it is active, is thinking, and thinking tends to express itself in words, spoken or written. The marked book is usually the thought-through book.,论说文的构成,Introduction Body Conclusion,[1] 对立法 When asked about the biggest problem today, many people say that it is the serious energy crisis. 2. When asked what kind of career they will pursue upon graduation, most of college students respond that they would choose a job which will bring them a lot of money and a comfortable life.,写好引言段,3. When it comes to what makes the world go round, some people say it is love. 4. There is much discussion today about whether fast economic growth is desirable. 5. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college students’ doing a part-time job.,6. It is commonly believed that the rise in teenage smoking is the inevitable result of economic development. They argue that…7. It is widely felt that …8. It is generally agreed that …9. These days we often hear about… They say that…But it is true? Close examination doesn’t bear out the claim.,[2] 现象法 1. Recently, the problem of … has aroused public attention/ has been in the limelight. 2. In recent years, many people have been faced with the serious problem of …,3. One of the pressing problem facing our society today is…4. One of the hottest topics many people are talking about now is…5. Here and there, in city after city across the country, an increasing number of…,6. Now, in many big cities, an overwhelming majority of people have been aware that… What lies behind the phenomenon? 7. With the rapid development of society, 8. With the Internet playing an increasingly important role in our life, …,[3] 观点法 Nothing, we have been told theses years, is more important than doing …Nowhere has the great principle of equality been so thoroughly put in practice as in China. In spite of this, however, women in many places are still denied the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms and the right to equal opportunities for promotion.,3. Now people in growing numbers are coming to recognize the fact that …4. In recent years there has been an increasing awareness of the necessity to do …,构筑主体段,主体段的功能就是论证和说明文章在引言段中提出的中心思想。

第一步：写好主题句(TS) 中心思想句是整篇文章的灵魂，主题句是主题段的灵魂主题句的位置放在段首How to write TS,主题句的构成：文章的主题+作者的观点 写好主题句的方法 1、一个完整的句子； 2、内容要清楚； 3、内容要具体； 4、不能是描写细节的句子,Practice writing TS,Traveling Abroad 1、近十年来某城市越来越多的人选择出境旅游 2、出现这种现象的原因 3、这种现象可能产生的影响Reference,Para.1 In recent years, people in growing numbers in city X are seeking to travel abroad.接下来用数据说明这一趋势Para. 2 There are several reasons for the shocking rise.Para. 3 Beneficial as traveling abroad is, it may also bring about some negative effects.以下讲带来的负面影响,Why I Take CET-6,1、有人认为没有必要参加大学英语六级考试。

2、我参加六级考试的理由Reference,Some students think it unnecessary to take CET-6.A. Many reasons for taking CET-6 are the following.In short, taking CET-6 is good to both my study and my personal development.,How to Succeed in a Job Interview,1、面试在求职过程中的作用 2、取得面试成功的因素：仪表、谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是…,Nowadays, the interview has become indispensable in seeking a jobI think it necessary to follow the following steps.It is very necessary to have an interview.,。