高考英语全国Ⅰ卷书面表达题分析和解题指导.docx

高考英语全国Ⅰ卷书面表达题分析和解题指导 齐永波高考英语书面表达题侧重考查学生根据试题提供的情景和特定的要求進行书面表达的能力，包括遣词造句等语言表达能力、逻辑思维能力和想象能力2017年全国高考英语卷书面表达题，分值25分（广东实际为251.125=28.125分）笔者参加了评卷工作，现结合广东考生在书面表达题中出现的一些问题，对该题的答题情况进行简要分析，并对2017年英语全国I卷书面表达题提出解题指导一、2017年高考英语全国？玉卷书面表达题及特点假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划内容包括：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯这道题的设置紧贴生活实际，写信内容自然融入中国文化，与大纲吻合，体现了对考生学科素养的考查同时邮件主体是中国与英国学生的交际行为，涉及跨文化交流，有益于培养学生的文化底蕴 题中第三个写作要点为写作提供了开放空间，考生可以根据自己的知识储备进行发挥，同时也考查学生如何表达观点和态度等，符合《普通高中英语新课程标准（2003版）》目标的要求。

二、答题情况笔者在评卷过程中发现，绝大多数考生对作文题的审题较准确，基本能写出四个内容要点，结构较为完整，开头语、正文、结尾部分基本符合书信体规范，对于唐诗和唐朝文化都能够进行一定程度的介绍但语言表达句型不够丰富，连贯词僵硬死板；部分考生审题不够细致，致使作文与题目无关，或关联性不强；有的考生甚至用背诵默写或直接抄袭试卷中的其他内容来完成作文总体来看，今年的考生篇章意识较往年有所增强三、主要失分点分析1. 审题不清有考生弄错了写信人与收信人之间的关系，不是以Leslie的朋友身份进行写信，即没有假定Lihua是Leslie的朋友2. 内容要点表达不确切或抄袭一些考生没有明确写出授课的时间和地点，也没有明确学习的内容是唐诗，把对唐朝历史的了解写成了对中国历史的了解还有考生全篇都写了完全与主题无关的内容，或者一字不改地全盘照抄试卷中的其他内容，这类作文得零分有的考生直接抄一部分无关内容夹杂在自己作文中，企图蒙混过关，对这类作文，评卷老师一般只根据与主题有关的内容来给分3. 单词误用①Because the library is very quite. （quite和quiet混用）②I like Chinese poems， who wrote lots of poets.（poet是诗人，poem才是诗）4. 大小写不分①The time of our next class is friday. （应把friday改为Friday）②Tang poems are very famous in old china.（应把china改为China）5. 词性混用①You can prepare these plans to improve your study effective. （改为efficiency）②I think you like the Chinese cultural. （改为culture）③If necessarily， I would change my plan.（改为necessary）④I feel delight to write to you.（改为delighted）⑤Its honor for me to tell you the next lesson.（改为honorable）⑥You can learn Chinese fastly.（改为fast）⑦Its difficulty to learn it well.（改为difficult）6. 拼写错误① Ill give you some suggestions as you good friend.（把you改为your ）②The next Chinese lessen will be set at my home.（把lessen改为lesson）③I thing we will have a comfortable class.（把thing改为think）④I believe you will fall in love with Chinese poens.（把pones改为poems）⑤If you arent free， I will change my plant. （把plant改为plan）⑥I will teache you Tang poems. （把teache改为teach）7. 可数名词和不可数名词分不清①I think you will make a great progress.（去掉a）②Ill give you some informations.（把informations改为information）③I have a good news to tell you.（去掉a）④I have many time this weekend.（把many改为much）endprint8. 错用介词①We will learn Tang poems in next lesson.（去掉 in）②The next lesson is arranged on next weekend.（去掉on）③The next class is on my home.（把on改成at）④Lets meet in the gate of our school.（把in改成at）⑤Please trust in yourself， you can learn Chinese well.（去掉in）⑥I will teach you about Tang Poems.（去掉about）9. 谓语错误①I will waiting for your reply.（改为wait for）②I am intend to teach you Chinese.（改为am intended to）③I writing to tell you the time of next lesson.（改为am wrting）④ Do you interesting in Tang poems？（改为Are you interested in...？）⑤I suggest that you can do...（去掉can或把can改为should）⑥Our lesson will be started at 8：00 a.m.（改为will start或starts）10. 中式英语①Please dont forget the next lesson begin time.②I know you very like Chinese culture.③In order to you can better to study Chinese， I suggest that you learn the history of Tang Dynasty in advance.11. 标点符号错误①The plan is as follows：（将冒号改为句号）②Only in this way， can you learn Chinese well. （去掉逗号）③《A Tranquil Night》， one of my favorite poems ， was written by Libai.（去掉书名号）12. 卷面和字数问题卷面不整洁，书写潦草，字体过大或过小，间距太密或太疏等，都会影响评卷老师给分。

字数不够也会扣分，但太多的话（只要没有超过给出的18行），今年评卷都没有给予扣分13. 语言不得体With my help， you must learn Chinese well.14. 分段不对部分考生只写一段，也有考生隔行写或每句写一段，这些都是不可取的15. 其他误用①Youd better to understand the history to Tang Dynasty.（情态动词没有掌握好）②Im writing to tell you the next times plan.（错用名词所有格）③You need to ready something for Tang poems.（ready和prepare不分）④I will teach you Tangshi.（用中文拼音來表述）⑤I like JingYeshi wrote by Libai.（非谓语动词掌握不牢）⑥This summer holiday I have a 3 months vacation.（数词表达不准确）四、解题指导1. 如何写开头高考英语全国卷书面表达题多为书信类写作，此类文章通常要求开篇写明写信目的。

常用的句型是Im writing to do sth.今年的书面表达题开头部分可以这样写：①I am writing to tell you the arrangement of the next class.②Im writing to tell you my plan for our next Chinese class and remind you to do some preparations for the class.③Im writing to inform you of the plan of the next class.④Had you completely understand what I taught you yesterday？ Im writing to inform you the plan of your next Chinese lesson.2. 如何写好中间段（1）尽量使用高中词汇①I would like to give you some suggestions.（替代advice）②I will be available after class. （替代free）③You are supposed to do some preparations. （替代should）endprint④The lesson is scheduled to be held on Jan 9th in Guangzhou Library.（2）用短语比用单词好①The most significant thing you should bear in mind is that you had better come to my home on time.（替代remember）②The next lesson falls on this Sunday morning， which will begin at 9：00 am and end 11：00 am.（替代begins或starts）（3）巧用形容词和副词①Im looking forward to your timely reply.②At last， Im firmly/ fully convinced that with our combined efforts， you are bound to make great progress in studying Chinese.③To satis。