最新外研版8年级英语上册7-12模块写作提升.pdf

Module 7 A famous story 写作提分点分析借鉴【剖析】本模块的话题是“故事”该话题常见的命题方向是描述自己或他人的经历通常要按时间顺序来展开 时态通常要以一般过去时为主，采用第一或第三人称叙述过程中要尽量使语言形象、生动，以吸引读者此类话题作文吸引阅卷人眼球的亮点表达有：(1) One day, I/he/sh e.(2) I/he/she felt very(3) After I/he/she(4) In the end, I/he/she【典例】昨天你读了一个关于小女孩安(Ann)的故事请根据下面的提示写一篇不少于70 词的英语短文，向大家讲述一下这个故事提示：一天，安正在房子外面玩，突然，她看见一只长着圆脸和四条短腿的鹿(deer)经过她想知道它要去哪儿 安跟随着鹿去了一个新的世界那里有许多奇怪的动物，所有的动物和植物都会说话安感到很兴奋但最后，安发现这是一个梦模板】开始故事 - One day, she was playing alone. Suddenly讲述故事展开故事 - She followed it into a new world. There Ann saw结束故事 - But in the end【满分范文】Ann was a little girl. One day, she was playing outside her house alone. Suddenly, she saw a deer with a round face and four short legs. It ran by .Ann wanted to know where it was going. She followed it into a new world. There Ann saw many strange animals. All the animals and plants could speak, and she could also understand them. They were friendly. They gave Ann a warm welcome. She felt very excited. But in the end, she found it was just a dream. 借鉴提升学习本文灵活使用过去进行时( was playing) 、 短语 give sb a warm welcome及 in the end ，使文章描述更加生动。

学习此句灵活运用介词短语作后置定语的形象的语言描述，使读者仿佛身临其境Ann wanted to know where it was going.此句为主从复合句，包含了where 引导的宾语从句，为文章增色不少易错提醒动笔的时候一定要小心，千万别踩到下面这颗地雷哦! 表达“感到非常兴奋”时应用形容词excited ， 而不能用exciting ， excited 表示“感到兴奋的”，修饰人 ;而 exciting 表示“令人兴奋的”，修饰物Module 8 Accidents 写作提分点分析借鉴【剖析】本模块以“事故”为话题，在命题过程中，命题人通常设置一个事故场景让考生来描述写这类文章时， 多用第一人称和第三人称，时态主要为一般过去时和过去进行时，行文中注意交代清楚事故发生的时间、地点、 原因、伤亡等情况此类话题作文吸引阅卷人眼球的亮点表达有 : (1)An accident happened on. (2)A car/truck.hit. (3)Luckily. (4). should be careful 【典例】假如你是学校英语周刊的小记者你在上学的路上目睹了一起交通事故请你根据下面的提示，以“ A traffic accident happened”为题写一篇 70 词左右的英语短文，向同学们报道一下这次事故，并提醒大家注意交通安全。

提示 : 1.时间 :星期四早晨七点半2.地点 :云南路3. 事件 :一名女学生骑自行车过马路时被一辆汽车撞了，当时司机正在用打，没有看到这名女学生4. 结果 :这名女学生伤得很严重,有人报了警并帮忙把她送到了附近的医院模板】事故发生的时间与地点- A traffic accident happened at交通事故事故发生的过程- A girl student was crossing the road事故给大家的启示- Students should be careful【满分范文】A traffic accident happened A traffic accident happened at half past seven on Thursday morning on Yunnan Road. A girl student was crossing the road on her bike when a car hit her. The driver was talking on his mobile phone at that time.He didnt see the girl student crossing the road. She was hurt badly. Someone called the police and helped to take her to the nearby hospital. The traffic accidents like this are very common in our daily life. However, life only comes around once, so we should protect ourselves from injury, Students should be careful on their way home or to school. Do look left and right before crossing the road.借鉴提升此句描述了事故发生的时间和地点，简洁明了。

运用过去进行时描述事故发生的情景，显得真实生动对学生在上学或回家路上如何避免交通事故提出了自己的建议易错提醒动笔的时候一定要小心，千万别踩到下面这颗地雷哦! morning/ afternoon/ evening前面有修饰语或者表示具体某一天的上午/下午 /晚上时，用介词 on,不能用 in. Module 9 Population 写作提分点分析借鉴【剖析】本模块以“人口”为话题，介绍了人口的增长情况，以及人口增长所带来的各种问题，如水资源短缺、交通拥挤、空气污染、住房困难等在本模块话题作文的命题过程中，命题人通常会要求考生就此类问题分析原因并提出解决措施写这种解决问题类的作文时，多用第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时此类话题作文吸引阅卷人眼球的亮点表达有(1)It has been a big problem. (2)Everyone knows that. (3)It is facing many problems, such as. (4）There are not enough. (5)We are short of. (6)It becomes difficult for people to. (7)I think. (8)We must work much harder to protect. 【典例】对你所在的城市做一个调查，以“City problems ”为题，写一篇 80 词左右的调查报告。

谈论城市面临哪些问题，分析问题的根源，并提出解决办法City problems 【模板】提出问题- I live in 城市 . Like big cities ，it is facing many problems ，such as. 城市事故分析问题 - It was a过去的情况 . More and more people came to the city目的.So 人口of the city 增长 very fast 提出建议 - I think当地政府should. 作为市民， lets. 【满分范文】City problems I live in a small city. Like big cities, it is facing many problems, such as population and Pollution. It was a very small city twenty years ago. More and more people came to the city to find jobs. So the population of the city increased very fast.It has about one million people now. There are not enough schools and hospitals. Too many people make too much rubbish everyday. Too much traffic brings air pollution. It becomes difficult for people to get enough clean water. I think the local government should work hard to solve all the problems. As citizens, let s do what we can to reduce the pollution, such as walking or riding a bike more, using the cars less and saving water in our daily life. 借鉴提升提出城市面临的主要问题，简洁明了，为下文做铺垫。

more and more、 too many 、 too much等短语的使用使论述有理有据连词 so 运用得当，揭示了城市人口増长这一必然结果从当地政府和市民两个角度提出整治城市问题的建议，很全面，也很具体易错提醒动笔的时候一定要小心，千万别踩到下面这颗地雷哦! too many 后接可数名词复数，too much后接不可数名词Module 10 The weather 写作提分点分析借鉴【剖析】本模块以“天气”为话题，主要根据季节介绍天气状况命题人通常设置的话题作文是描述某地的天气状况及气候变化，并给予出行建议写这种说明文时，多用第三人称，时态主要为一般现在时， 行文中要注意用准确的语言客观地描述天气状况此类话题作文吸引阅卷人眼球的亮点表达有: (1)There are four seasons in. (2)Its sunny/warm/cold.in spring/summer/autumn/winter. (3)Sometimes It. (4)The best time to visit.is in. 【典例】假如你叫李明，你的美国笔友Mark 想到你的家乡旅游请根据所给提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你家乡的天气状况，并告诉他来旅游的最佳时间。

提示 : 春季 :多风，干燥，有时会有沙尘暴( sandstorm) 夏季 :天气炎热，经常下雨秋季 :天气凉爽冬季：又干又冷，有时会下雪【模板】开头部分- Dear Mark，问候语 .介绍天气正文部分 - In季节， its usually 描述天气的形容词. 结尾部分 - Best wishes !Li Ming 【满分范文】Dear Mark, How are you? I am very glad to hear that o want to visit my h。