2023年第课时　七年级上册 StarterModule高频话题写作 2.doc

高频话题写作个人信息【命题探索】本学段中的高频写作话题是“个人信息”写作内容主要涉及人物的性格、外貌、爱好、经历、变化及自己对此人的看法和评价等此类作文通常以要点提示、表格提示等方式来考查，且文体为记叙文写作积累】★话题词汇积累1．基本信息： name, age, be born on/in, come from, phone/telephone number...2．描述外貌： fat, thin, young, old, tall, short, be of medium height, look like...3．兴趣爱好： hobby, interest, enjoy, prefer, be interested in, be good at/do well in...4．其他相关： get on well with, help sb. with sth., make friends with, be different from, be the same as...★重点句型仿写1．你和你姐姐一样友好吗？ Are you as friendly as your sister? 句式仿写： 音乐和运动一样流行。

Music is sports. 2．汤姆比萨姆聪明吗？ Is Tom smarter than Sam? 句式仿写： 他比我外向些He is me. 3．我很害羞，对我来说交朋友不容易I'm shy. It's not easy for me to make friends. 句式仿写： 对我来说，保守朋友的秘密非常重要It's important me .【典例剖析】关于朋友，你不在乎是相同还是不同请根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友吉姆的相同之处和不同之处不少于80个词★审题谋篇(1)时态：使用一般现在时(2)人称：使用第三人称和第一人称(3)模板： ★高分范文My Best FriendI don't really care if my friends are the same as me or different. I think that a true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. My best friend is Jim. We both like to listen to music. And we are both friendly to others. He works as hard as me. Jim is shorter than me, but he can run faster than me. He is more outgoing and speaks more loudly than me. Jim is funnier than me and he is better at basketball. I'm more serious than Jim. And I like to stay at home and read books. I'm better at maths and Chinese than Jim. I think I'm smarter than Jim. I feel happy to have such a good friend. 【写作练兵】(2019·湖北咸宁中考)“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士，是央视王牌节目《开讲啦》开播以来最年长的演讲者。

上周五下午，全校师生观看完该视频后，都眼含热泪为了学习英雄的先进事迹，请你根据提示内容，以“Huang Xuhua—the Father of China's Nukes”为题，写一篇人物介绍 要点包括：(1)他出生于富裕家庭，但为了祖国强盛，放弃了成为一名医生的机会，学习建造核潜艇；(2)在当时条件艰苦的环境下，他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造；(3)为了保护国家安全，他曾隐姓埋名工作，30年不为人所知，现虽年过90仍奋斗不止；(4)他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民的热爱 要求：(1)文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名；(2)文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，必要时可作适当发挥；(3)80词以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇：核潜艇nuke；国家安全national security；隐姓埋名conceal one's identityHuang Xuhua—the Father of China's NukesLast Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua—the Father of China's Nukes. We were all inspired by his heroic deeds.参考答案【高频话题写作】写作积累1．as popular as　2.more outgoing than3．for; to keep friends' secrets写作练兵Huang Xuhua—the Father of China's NukesLast Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua—the Father of China's Nukes.He was born in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. Although the conditions were very hard at that time, he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/building the nukes.To protect the national security, he used to conceal his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown for others. And now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old.His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and the country.We were all inspired by his heroic deeds.第 页。