八年级英语上册 Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation（第7课时）同步作文指导课件 （新版）人教新目标版.ppt

Unit 1　Where did you go on vacation?八年级英语上册（浙江地区）第七课时　单元同步作文指导本单元以“谈论节假日活动”为话题展开，要求学生们会运用一般过去时写一篇自己的旅行日记日记属于典型的记叙文，首先要注意其格式，其次在写作时要注意时间、地点、人物、经过、结果等同时要注意主次分明，详略得当，在结尾处最好表达出自己的感受教材中出现的相关句型：①I went to Guizhou with my family.我和我的家人去了贵州②We took quite a few photos there.我们在那里拍了不少照片③It was my first time there，so everything was really interesting.这是我第一次到那儿，所以一切都非常有趣④I bought something for my parents.我给我的父母买了一些东西⑤It was sunny and hot.天气晴朗并且炎热⑥It was so wonderful/exciting.那太精彩了/太激动人心了⑦I felt...我感到……拓展常用句型：①The food there was delicious and the people there were very friendly.那里的食物很美味，那里的人很友好。

②We/I had a good time there.我们/我在那里玩得很开心上个月(8月)4号，周五，天气晴朗，你和父母去北京旅游，参观了以下几个地方，玩得非常开心要求：1.写一篇英语日记，注意格式；2.词数不少于70Friday，August 4thSunnyThe weather was sunny but it wasn't hot.I went to Beijing with my parents on vacation.It was my first time there， so everything was really interesting.①We visited three places and took quite a few photos.First we went to Tian'anmen Square.②It was beautiful.③Then we went to the Palace Museum，and we saw many old things there.④It was cool.⑤In the afternoon，we went to the Great Wall.⑥We saw many beautiful things from the top.It was great and exciting，I think.⑦We had a good time there.【名师点评】1.日记就是把自己当天经历的有意义的事以及见闻和感受记录下来，通常用第一人称来写，且时态为一般过去时。

2.注意日记的格式：正文上方自左起写上星期几、日期和天气情况，正文另起一行3.写作时，要注意必须按照时间顺序来描述当天的活动，这样会显得层次分明、有条理性如②④⑥处4.在写作过程中，不要忘记写出自己的真实感受，如①③⑤⑦处5.灵活运用各种所学句型，使文章显得更加生动假如你叫李鑫，上周你和家人一起去了三亚旅游请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语给你的美国笔友Rose写一封70词左右的电子邮件，介绍一下这次旅游的情况邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)One possible version：Dear Rose，How's it going？ Now let me tell you something about my __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours，Li XinLast_week,I_went_to_Sanya_with_my_parents.The_weather_was_sunny_and_hot，so_I_went_swimming_with_my_parents_first.After_that，we_went_boating.We_took_lots_of_photos_and_had_a_lot_of_fun.We_also_ate_some_sea_food.It_was_very_delicious.We_stayed_there_for_five_days.We_had_a_good_time.。