【新高考】Continuation--writing-读后续写-课件(4个).pptx

读后续写真题 2021新高考浙江卷-万圣节南瓜趣事1分析原文2构思布局3语言润色4范文赏析目录CONTENTS2021原文分析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析01Pumpkin(南瓜）carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober. Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantageIcarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.原文分析原文分析介介绍万圣万圣节的的传统：带最大的南瓜回最大的南瓜回家由competewith，thebiggest判断人物情感：人物情感：excitedThisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-old brother, Jason,wasthe winner. Unfortunately, we forgottoweigh thembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.ImunsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.原文分析原文分析讲述了比述了比赛的的过程。

程通通过这些些细节词可以得知我当可以得知我当时的情感的情感是是competitiveWiththepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(软木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.原文分析原文分析讲述了我述了我为了了证明我的南明我的南瓜大把瓜大把头伸伸进南瓜里面的南瓜里面的过程捕捉捕捉细节词，可以得知我的情感是，可以得知我的情感是excitedMyexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“Imgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Icant get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosedspace.原文分析原文分析故事的故事的转折折捕捉捕捉细节词，可以得知我的情感是，可以得知我的情感是panicked。

Paragraph1：Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger._Paragraph2：ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween._原文分析原文分析根据下面的推断，本段根据下面的推断，本段应该是我是我的的头被拔出来的被拔出来的过程表明上一段落我的表明上一段落我的头被卡在南瓜中的的被卡在南瓜中的的过程被拍下程被拍下了了视频侧面反映上一段我的面反映上一段我的头应该是从南瓜里弄是从南瓜里弄出来了最后一句的主旨升最后一句的主旨升华222021构思布局历年高考英语读后续写真题分析02Paragraph1Paragraph1：Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.I can not breath.My mother came to help me .She undo my rubber band to make more room for breath.Eventually I was rescued.Paragraph2Paragraph2：ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.The post gain too much shares and likes.I was embarrassed.He learn a lesson.look before you leap222021语言润色历年高考英语读后续写真题分析03句子润色1. 我还记得我是怎么获救的。

I still remembered how I got rescued. Be/get rescued句子润色2. 我在南瓜里面焦急的快不能呼吸了I cant breath in the pumpkin with anxiousness.The air inside the hollow vegetable was full of my anxious breath.The hollow vegetable句式升句式升级句子润色3. 当看到发生了什么，焦急又害怕，妈妈放下，向我走来When my mother see what happened, she laied down her phone, and walked towards me, anxiously and fearfully.Upon seeing what had happened, overwhelmed with anxiety and fear, mom laid down her phone and approached towards me in a flash. Upon seeing what had happenedlaid down her phone动词的替的替换句子润色4. “不要用尽你的氧气！“她喊道，把我的头进一步推进南瓜里，这样她就可以伸进去解开我头上的橡皮筋。

Dont use up all your oxygen!” she shouted, and push my head farther into the pumpkin so that she could reach in and undo my rubber band.“Dont use up all your oxygen!” she cried, pushing my head farther into the pumpkin so that she could reach in and undo my rubber band. Push ones head farther intoundo my rubber band非非谓语动词结构替构替换句子润色5. 只有当妈妈给我留出足够的空间时，我才成功地走出困境，尽管我的下巴和鼻子都很痛When mom spared enough space for me, I manage to get out of it successfully, though my chin and nose were full of pain.Only when mom spared enough space for me did I manage to get out of it successfully, though my chin and nose were full of pain. my chin and nose were full of painmanage to get out of倒装句替倒装句替换句子润色6. “我成功了！”我松了一口气。

我14岁的弟弟杰森站在我面前，我才意识到他一直在拍视频I made it!” I let out a cry of relief. My 14-year-old brother, Jason, standing in front of me, then I realized hed been filming the whole time.“I made it!” I let out a cry of relief. My 14-year-old brother, Jason, standing in front of me, it was only then that I realized hed been filming the whole time.I made itlet out a cry of relief强调句升句升级句子润色7. 令人惊讶的是，这段视频获得了数十万次的浏览量Surprisingly, the video gained hundreds of thousands of views.Surprisingly, it became a hit that the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. To ones surprise surpriselyhundreds of thousands of viewsstarted racking up句子润色8. 一开始，当我被认出是视频中的那个人时，我几乎无法控制自己的尴尬。

At the very beginning, I could hardly contain my embarrassment when I was recognized as the one in the video.At the very beginning, hardly could I contain my embarrassment when I was recognized as the one in the video. At the very beginningcontain my embarrassment倒装句的升倒装句的升级Hardlywhen; no sooner than句子润色9. 然而，随着时间的流逝，我的生活又回到了正轨However, with time trickling by, my life was back on track. with time trickling byBe back on track句子润色10. 尽管万圣节南瓜雕刻是一个家庭传统，但是第二年则是一个更加庄重的节日Though pumpkin carving at Halloween w。