高考英语作文祝贺信特训课件.pptx

2022/7/30Introduction 按西方国家习俗，亲友之间在重大节日要写祝贺信或赠礼物，如圣诞节、新年、婚礼、生日等当亲友晋升、考试成功、毕业、乔迁新居、获得工作、新业开张以及获奖等等，也要写祝贺信祝贺信要写的及时，得到喜讯后应立即动笔信中要提到具体喜事，表达写信人喜悦心情，并致以衷心的祝贺总的来说，这类书信只需寥寥数语，但用词须亲切有礼，表达出真诚的喜悦2022/7/30Dear Henry,I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduate.As your close friend,I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your admission.In my view,you work hard and besides that,you are a very intelligent person.This admission is a reward which you richly deserve.I am sure you will make greater progress in your study and obtain a bright future in your life.I wish you greater success in your school career and I am looking forward to good news from you soon.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua祝贺信“三步走”：观察思考：1.文章的体裁？2.写作目的？3.结构（几个层次？）4.时态？5.过渡词？1.写信的目的和表达听到喜讯的心情；2.对喜讯进行积极评价（包括肯定被祝贺人过去的努力和优点）；3.表达衷心的祝福及未来的祝福。

注意：语气要真诚、自然、亲切动人）2022/7/30Please accept our heartfelt congratulations on your请接受我们对你的衷心祝贺I would like to extend my warmest congratulations on your我向你表达我最热烈的祝贺你I write to congratulate you upon.我写信来祝贺你I offer you my warmest congratulations on your.对于你的我表示热烈的祝贺Paragraph 1 2022/7/30第一段：写信目的，表达听到喜讯的心情；祝贺你！听说你被选为学生会主席，我感到非常高兴对你来说，这是一个特殊的时刻、一个高兴的时刻，我为你的成就而感到骄傲Congratulations!I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the Chairman of our University Students Union.This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of your achievement.2022/7/30*被祝贺人过去的努力被祝贺人过去的努力1.I know that you would not have achieved this without industry or perseverance.：我知道，如果没有勤奋和毅力，你是不可能做到这一：我知道，如果没有勤奋和毅力，你是不可能做到这一点的。

点的2.As far as I am concerned,it is your utmost efforts to.that leads to your brilliant achievement.就我而言，你最大的努力是就我而言，你最大的努力是这就导致这就导致了你的辉煌成就了你的辉煌成就3.I know how talented you are and how hard youve worked to attain the goal.No one could have been more deserving.我知道你很有天赋，我知道你很有天赋，也知道你为了实现目标付出了多少努力没有人更值得了也知道你为了实现目标付出了多少努力没有人更值得了4.A man of your ability and intelligence is bound to be successful sooner or later.像你这样有能力有智慧的人迟早会成功的像你这样有能力有智慧的人迟早会成功的Paragraph 22022/7/30第二段：对喜讯进行积极评价（包括肯定被祝贺人过去的努力和优点）；我们都知道，你总是一个努力工作和有创造力的人，这是实现你工作目标的关键。

此外，你强烈的责任感使你赢得周围人的信任，从而为自己赢得各种机会As we all know,you are always a both hard working and creative person,which is essential to achieve your goals in work.Moreover,your strong sense of responsibility enables you to win trust from people around you and thus win yourself various opportunities.2022/7/30Paragraph 3 结尾常用句型：I wish you every success in your future career.预祝你在新的岗位上取得成功Best wishes for your continued success.预祝你取得更大的成功Congratulations,all of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements!祝贺你，我们都为您所取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。

2022/7/30Pease accept our sincerest congratulations and very best wishes for all the good future.Sending you our heartfelt best wishes for your future together.I wish you still further success!预祝你取得更大的成功2022/7/30 假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(Peking University)，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生请你给他写一封祝贺信要点如下：1.考上理想大学，父母骄傲2.努力学习将来为家乡服务3.对未来祝福注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯根据题目要求审题：1.文章的体裁？祝贺信2.写作目的？祝贺王强考上北京大学3.结构（几个层次？）3个 4.时态？一般现在时5.过渡词？实战演练：2022/7/30假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(Peking University)，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生请你给他写一封祝贺信要点如下：1.考上理想大学，父母骄傲。

2.努力学习将来为家乡服务3.对未来祝福注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯实战演练：根据题目要求审题并列出提纲：1.写信的目的和表达听到喜讯的心情2.对喜讯进行积极评价（包括被祝贺人过去的努力和优点）；3.表达衷心的祝福及未来的祝福注意：语气要真诚、自然、亲切动人）祝贺信“三步走”：写作：15分钟完成2022/7/30互评作文（2分钟）任务：1.看看别人如何表达你的疑难点；2.看看同学的作文里有哪些核心句型评判依据：1.字数:100词左右2.卷面是否整洁？3.内容是否齐全？4.句子结构是否完整？5.用了哪些核心句型？评分档次：第一档：21-25(优秀）内容齐全，错误很少；第二档:16-20（良好）内容齐全，错误较少；第三档:11-15（及格）内容基本齐全，错误较多；第四档:6-10（较差）内容不齐全，错误很多；第五档:1-5（差）只写了一两个相关词句2022/7/30Dear Wang Qiang,Congratulations!I would like to express my congratulations on your admission to Peking University,your ideal one!As your close friend,I just want you to know how happy I am to hear your success.This is a new start for you and its good for you to study with so many excellent students and learn from top professors.As for as Im concerned,you are intelligent.Besides,you have worked very hard in the past years,so Im really happy to know that you become the first college student of your village from the poor areas.I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you.I wish you greater success in the university and serve the hometown in the future.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua2022/7/302022/7/302022/7/302022/7/302022/7/302022/7/302022/7/302022/7/302022/7/30课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了获得了“汉语桥汉语桥”世世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。

你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：祝贺信，要点如下：1.天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功2.继续努力，有机会来中国留学继续努力，有机会来中国留学3.希望见面和交流希望见面和交流注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.开头语和结束语已为你写好开头语和结束语已为你写好参考词汇：参考词汇：“汉语桥汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛世界大学生中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest2022/7/30Dear Peter,I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of“Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest.I know that you were not good at Chinese at first.。