英语作文写作笔记(7页).docx

大作文段落分配：15=4 + （7~8） + 4 [40字+80字+40字】第一段（第一句）Describe/depic甘苗述画面（宏观总括）The picture above gives us a vivid description of ..（two disabled people此处不应t¥细描写）（第二句）just as （画面细节描述）（2）Just as we can see from the picture, ♦（第三句）just--g谚语举例，可省略）（第四句）aim at图片设计的目的（点题）Obviously/Undoubtely, the picture aims at reminding （/convincing us） of第二段（微观方面+宏观方面/个人+社会/正面论证+反面论证 阐述主 题的重要性或深刻含义）（第一大句）主题句（引言铺垫）is extremely important to us, especially to..The implied meaning of the drawing can be interpreted in terms of（从 方面）mutual help and coopration.（第二大句）第一层意思（1~2）/ （第二大句）第一层意思（1~3）正面 论证As is known to us all,..To begin with，…（第三大句）第二层意思（1~2）/ （第三大句）第二层意思（1~3）反面论证Beside,..（第四大句）第三层意思（1~2）/Last but not least,..（第五大句）收尾再次强调主题词（1）As a result, is essential to both and第三段（采取措施、提倡主题）（4）（第一句）Form all mentioned above,therefore,wecan come to a conclusion that we should put great emphasis o n （主题）In my view ,some necessary measures must be taken to make people realize that （主题）Therefore ,we should keep it in mind“名言”（第二句）（行动上怎么做）/ （微观总结）First of all,For one thing,..（第三句）（意识怎么做）/ （宏观总结）In addition,For another,（第四句）（号召或预测）Only in these ways ,can we （build up a society full of harmony）.Only by .,can ,and only in this way ,canAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA小作文（致歉信）段落分配：2+3+3+1第一段（第一句）自报家门（背景）I am Li Ming. •••. from who（第二句）写信目的（目的）Now ,I am writing.to（目的）for（由于）第二段（描述事件过程）（第一句）介绍事件背景During .., •••.（第二句）介绍事件发生过程（第三句）：略表歉意I feel quite sorry for this.第三段：（解决办法）（第一句）办法一（第二句）让步，办法二第四段：（诚挚歉意）Again, please forgive me for the convenience caused you.写作范例：Dear sir.I am and I intend to because I learned from the newspaper that the children have been deprived of the right to （背景 目的 原因）You need to make two factors into consideration when you are looking for such a candidate. on the one hand , .on the other hand . the girl student with outstanding academic achievements will be preferred .（要求）I intend to carry out my plan as follows: for one thing for another ,（行动）I am looking forward to .thank you in advance （致谢） 英语句法：句前状语+前置定语（主语）+后置定语+状语（谓语）+补 语+前置定语（宾语）+后置定语1） 主+动The price is increasingdue to •••.2） 主+动+宾In order to ensure good health,we should develop good living habits Enhancing the is ,in the long run, benefical to the stability of3） 主+动+主补（很少用）We are eager to turn our dreams into reality.4） 主+动+间宾+宜宾The social practice offers us multiple opportunities to apply what we have learn from books to the real practiceTraveling abroad offers us a good chance to have a better understanding of the western cultures , which is benefical to thefriendship between the and5） 主+动+宾+宾补The extensive use of internet has made our daily life more convenient and efficient than ever before .especially in the fields - of 经典句型：Were it left to me to make a choice between the two points , I would not hasitate for a moment to prefer the former.It is hard to imagine what our life would be klike without energy.We should launch a worldwide campaign to bring under control.主题句特点：不要太泛看，尽量规整，句子简洁，为下文做铺垫（数 量词运用）提纲列法：只列关键词学习是一件增长知识的工作，在茫茫的学海中，或许我们困苦过，在艰难的竞争中，或许我们疲劳过，在失败的阴影中，或许我们失望过。

但我们发现自己的知识在慢慢的增长，从哑哑学语 的婴儿到无所不能的青年时，这种奇妙而巨大的变化怎能不让我们感到骄傲而自豪呢？当我们在学习中遇到困难而艰难的战胜时，当我们在漫长的奋斗后成功时，那种无与伦比的感受又有谁 能表达出来呢？因此学习更是一件愉快的事情，只要我们用另一种心态去体会，就会发现有学习的日子真好！如果你热爱读书，那你就会从书籍中得到灵魂的慰藉；从书中找到生活的榜样；从书中找到自己生活的乐趣；并从中不断地发现自己，提升自己，从而超越自己明天会更好，相信自己没错的！ 我们一定要说积极向上的话只要持续使用非常积极的话语，就能积累起相关的重要信息，于是在不经意之间，我们就已经行动起来，并且逐渐把说过的话变成现实。