初三英语写作专题复习课课件.ppt

初三英语写作专题复习课初三英语写作专题复习课English writing 初三英语写作专题复习课如何写好一篇中考英语作文？如何写好一篇中考英语作文？•中考真题中考真题 三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，请写一篇短三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，请写一篇短文，介绍一下你的校园生活题目自拟文，介绍一下你的校园生活题目自拟 要求：要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 2.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名； 3.词数：词数：80词左右如何写好一篇中考英语作文？中考真题Step One 审审 题题1. 1. 确定确定内容内容 -- --具体并有内容可写具体并有内容可写 Step One 审 题What do you think of your school life? My school life is _________________.busy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantastic…boring/terrible/so-so…What things can we talk about ?activitiessubjectsclassmatesteachersexamsfriendsschool tripshobbiesWhat do you think of your scho审审 题题：：2. 2. 确定确定人称人称----参考写作内容参考写作内容 审 题：My best friend第二人称：第二人称：He/ SheMy best friend第二人称：He/ She审审 题题：： 3. 3. 确定确定时态时态 审 题：My best friend•一般现在时态；一般现在时态；•一般过去时态。

一般过去时态My best friend一般现在时态；Step Two•细化要点细化要点 -- --具体从那几个方面具体从那几个方面来写来写Step Two细化要点My best friend 1. 1.外表（外表（appearanceappearance）） 2. 2.性格（性格（personalitypersonality）） 3. 3.爱好（爱好（hobbieshobbies））My best friend 1.外表（appearanceStep Three•扩充要点扩充要点Try to enrich(丰富丰富) your sentence.Step Three扩充要点How to enrich(丰富丰富) your sentences?likes playing sports healthyhealthy1.My friend Li Hua is a boy.He is a ____________ boy.He is a __________ boy who___________________.do sports make friends go to parties…strong tall outgoing energetic friendly…How to enrich(丰富) your sentenc2. He likes music.He likes______________ that_______________.dance musiccan make him excitedpop music movies bookssports...happyrelaxed knowledgeablehealthy...2. He likes music.He likes____目的目的原因原因3.She always______________________ to ____________ because___________________.relaxlistens to some musicmusic is fantasticrelaxing interesting exciting fascinating…do sportsread booksdance go to parties…learn something keep healthy have funmake friends…目的原因3.She always______________He is going to have a trip to Cuihua Mountain with his friend. He will do some studies to improve his math because He is a little weak in it. It is necessary for him to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. How glad he is! He can do many things of his own. He is going to have a trip to Cuihua Mountain with his friend. He will also do some studies to improve his math because he is a little weak in it. Of course it is necessary for him to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. Isn’t his plan nice?beginningkey sentencelinking words连连词词endingHe is going to have a trip to  My hobbies ( Beginning ): I have many hobbies. ( Key sentence A):I like reading books. ________________. (Key sentence B ): ______________________. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programs on radio. Although I can’t sing English songs well, I like them a lot. (Ending) ________________________________.Can you add a beginning, two other key sentences, some linking words and an ending?Practice:  My hobbies ( Beginning ): I have many hobbies. ( Key sentence A):I like reading books. I often read in my free time. I read many kinds of books. And I like the stories that have good endings. (Key sentence B ): I am also a lover of music. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programs on radio. Although I can’t sing English songs well, I like them a lot. (Ending) In short, I enjoy my life in school Step Four: Make an outline(提纲提纲)Title: _____________ Beginning: Key sentence B: Key sentence A: Ending: Main part(正文正文): totogeneral总总specific分分specific分分general总总Step Four: Make an outline(提纲Make an outline for the following composition:三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。

三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活题目自拟题目自拟(80词左右词左右)Title: _____________ Beginning: Key sentence B: Key sentence A: Ending: Main part(正文正文): Make an outline for the followStep Five 根据提纲，写出文章，注意根据提纲，写出文章，注意使用使用好词好句和连接词好词好句和连接词Step Five 根据提纲，写出文章，注意使用好词好句和评价评价: 请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文A ( 13-15 分分 ) :包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚．贯，表达清楚．B ( 11-12 分分 ) :基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚．行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚．C ( 8-10分分 ) :内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意．尚能达意．D (6-7分分 ) : 要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达．．E (3-5 ) :只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云．只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云．F ( 0-2分分 ) :白卷或文不对题．白卷或文不对题．作者：作者：_______得分：得分：________评价人评价人:_______评价: 请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。

How to improve your writingTips :1.审题，确定人称，时态，内容；审题，确定人称，时态，内容；2.细化要点，列出提纲；细化要点，列出提纲；3.使用好词好句，丰富文章使用好词好句，丰富文章4.先打草稿，后抄写到答题纸上先打草稿，后抄写到答题纸上Sum upHow to improve your writHomework:￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿我市英我市英语教学网开教学网开设了了“中学生中学生论坛”， ，请你你结合自己的初中生活和真合自己的初中生活和真实感受，以感受，以A￿good￿A￿good￿teacher￿in￿my￿eyesteacher￿in￿my￿eyes为题写一篇写一篇8080词左右的短左右的短文￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿(You￿should￿make￿an￿outline￿first)(You￿should￿make￿an￿outline￿first)Homework: 我市英语教学网开设了“中学生论坛”Goodbye and good luck!。