高考英语写作要点.docx

高考英语写作要点上海卷写作部分评分标准档次内容语百组织结构A9~109T04~5B7~87~83C5~65~62D3~43~41E0~20~20一.评分标准：总分为25分，其中内容10分，语言10分，组织结构5分1 .内容部分：A.内容充实，主题突出，详略得当B.内容较充实，能表达出作文要求C.内容基本充实，尚能表达出作文要求D.漏掉或未能写清主要内容，有些内容与主题无关E.明显漏掉主要内容，严重离题2 . 语言部分A.有较好的语言表达能力，语法结构正确或有小错误，主要是使用了较复杂结构或词汇所致B.有较好的语言表达能力，语法结构和词汇的应用基本正确C.有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解D.语法结构与词汇的错误较多，影响了对内容的理解E.语法结构与词汇的错误很多，影响了对内容的理解3 .组织结构部分：A.自然地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文流畅结构紧凑，句子结构多样，词汇丰富B.能使用语句连接成分，全文流畅结构紧凑，句子结构多样，词汇较丰富C.能使用简单的语句连接成分，全文内容连贯句子结构有一定的变化，词汇使用得当D.尚能使用语句间的连接成分，语言连贯性较差句子结构单调，词汇较贫乏。

E.缺乏语句间的连接成分，语言不连贯词不达意二.作文的篇章结构：1 .引言段 2主题段 3结论段篇章结构最好为三段式第一段一定要开门见山地导入主题的揭示和表达，而不是要“下笔千言，离题 万里”第二段一般由几个段落构成，是整篇文章的重点要先给出主题句，点明段落主题，然后提供事例、事 实、数据等细节内容第三段一般总结所述，把讨论的问题或谈及的要点作一概括，点明主题，并使之 深化话题式议论文话题式议论文要求学生根据中文提示的话题写出一篇短文这类作文以说理为主，作者不仅要提出自己的观点，而且要充分论证自己观点的正确性例：(1)Nowadays, the money in children ’s pockets is getting more and more. Some people just consider this phenomenon to be a symbol of rising standard of living. But I tend to think it will spoil the children. Several reasons can account for this.For one thing, too much pocket money leads children to form a bad habit. They use money as they like, without thinking whether the things they will buy are useful or not.In addition, such heavy pockets just abstract them from their studies. They are just lost in the video games.It is true that it is not good to give children too much money. But if the issue is treated properly by parents and children, it can develop the children ’s ability in dealing with money matters at their age.(2)Nowadays, pocket money is a heated topic as most children have much more money than before. Some people think it harmful to children ’s growing up. But I ’m afraid I don ’t quite agree with it.First, money plays an important part in our life. Children also have their own lives. When they spend their pocket money on what they like, they will feel convenient and cheerful.Second, having adequate quantity of pocket money has its positive effect on children ’s all-round ability. How to use their pocket money may well become a challenge as well as happiness. During the process of spending money, their self-control ability and economic knowledge will be steadily improved.Frankly speaking, money can also lead children to vanity. But the way to solve the problem is not to avoid it but to face it straight. It is sensible to give children appropriate amount of pocket money and teach them to make good use of it independently.I suppose, through the use of pocket money, children will learn far more than the money itself.要点式议论文写好这类文章要注意必须认真研究提示，只有理解了提示的含义，才能抓住要点，明确主题，有效地组织与主题有关的素材。

例：As we all know, about 3/4 of the world is covered by water. So it is reasonable for some people to think that our fresh water is inexhaustible.But as a matter of fact, our fresh water is in rather short supply. There is a growing need for water with the increase of the population. Furthermore, our fresh water is polluted more and more seriously.Then, what shall we do? First, we should form a habit of saving water. In addition, it is necessary for us to protect our fresh water from being polluted. Of course, there are many other ways to help it get rid of shortage.In a ward, every individual has the responsibility to take care of our limited fresh water. Please remember: Water is to the world what blood is to a man.图画式议论文图画式议论文是英语高考试题常采用的一种书面表达形式。

其特点是通过观察和分析单幅或一组画，把图画内容转化成文字信息图画作文的结构一般如下：第一段描绘图画，一般不超过三分之一篇幅，第二段揭示画旨，第三段发表评论或提出建议，占主要篇幅例 :On a crowded bus, an old man was leaning against the seat. He was so tired that he even fell asleep. Instead of rising to offer a seat, a group of young people just made fun of the old man ’s being able to sleep while standing. This scene just leads to a serious social topic, that is, how to respect the old.Without doubt anyone will grow old. Making fun of old people ’s possible inconvenience not only shows people’ s ignorance of the objective law of nature, but also reflects their lack of love for others. Actually, we should take some practical measures to respect and take care of the elderly. We are supposed to give seats to old people on buses. We ought to try our best to help them enjoy the beauty of life. In a word, we need to take care of them with patience to children, respect them with the love for our own parents, and comfort them with our confidence for the future.We share the same ideal as our forefathers, that is, to fight for a thriving and prosperous future. We ’d better never forget the respect for the old people is simply vital to the happiness of the whole society.书信式议论文同样是表达个人的观点，书信式议论问的写作与一般议论式议论文的措辞略有不同。

书信中可融进少 量口语体的句子(如祈使句、感叹句) 表达陈述看法时可用 I believe / think / guess / suppose ..that + 表述内容提出劝告、建议时可用 It would / could be fine to You might as well……等 提出请求、讯问意向时可用： I would ( very much ) like to •••. Could you ; Would you I waswondering if ;I 。