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10年 6月一、商务信函说明:假设你是一个医疗设备公司的经理你收到一家代理公司的经理 Peter Smith 先生的 信他想了解你公司的情况,你写信向他介绍并表示希望他能作为你公司的代理公司简介:’公司名称:广安医疗设备有限公司成立年份:1980年公司总部地址:中国神州市主要产品:医疗测试设备雇员人数:1000名,其中 120人从事研究与开发销售市场:大部分产品销往东南亚和南美Words for reference:medical testing equipment 医疗测试设备 headquarters 总部engage in 从事 Southeast Asia 东南亚 agent 代理Dear Mr. Smith,Thanks a lot for your letter, and it's my pleasure to give you some information about our company.Guang An Medical Equipment Company Limited was set up in 1980, with the headquarters in Shenzhou City, China. We have 1,000 employees, and 120 of them are engaging in R & D work. We manufacture medical testing equipment, and most of our products are sold to Southeast Asia and South America.We are planning to enter the European market, and since you are interested in our products, would you please consider being our European agent? If you have any ideas; please don't hesitate to let us know.Hope to receive your reply soon.Sincerely yours,WendyManager of Guang An Medical Equipment Company Limited 难点分析商务书信要求语言得体、正确,内容全面、完整。

写作本作文时,应紧扣题目要求,把题目 所述的各个要点表达完整书售开头处先交待必要的背景内容第二段顺便介绍公司情况,注意不可遗漏题目中各要点第三段落实到对对方的期望上,表明希望对方做代理的愿望最后是寒喧语套话总是免不了的,关键是要用得得体恰当10年 12 月说明:假设你是某公司的员工 Susan Waters,根据下列内容给公司人事部经理 Ms . Bush 写一封辞职信写信日期:2010年 12月 19日内容:1.表示要辞职 ,2.解释辞职的原因 (自拟 ; ·3.告知离职的时间 (一个月后 ;4.对于在工作期间所得到的指导和帮助表示感谢注意信函格式 !Words for reference:辞职 resign v. / resignation n.Part V WritingDecember, 19th, 2010 Dear Ms. Bush,I am writing to inform you of my intention of resigning from my current position in the company, effectiveJan. 19, 2011.The past several years at the company have been rewarding as I worked my way up. I will always remember my years here with affection. My parents and I will move to another city where we will set up our own business and begin our new life.Sorry for my leaving. Thank you for your guidance and help during my association with the company.Yours sincerelySusan Waters 难点分析辞职信要求语言正式。

本篇作文的关键是把每一个要点都交代清楚, 语言不能模棱两可 开头明确表示辞职的意愿,并且交代了确切的离职时间第二段对自己在这个公司的经历做一个简单的总结,最重要的是交代清楚辞职原因本 文要求考生自己拟一个辞职原因,要注意:辞职原因最好是双方都比较容易接受的客观原 因,尽量不要流露出对公司的不满第三段对公司的培养和帮助表示感谢, 要不卑不亢, 自然收尾, 显示个人的礼貌和修养 09年 12月说明:根据下面中文信息写一封询问信发信人:Mark Zhang收信人:Mr . Smith发信日期:2009年 12月 22日内容:1. Mark 在最近的广交会上认识了 Smith 先生;2. Mark 对 Smith 先生所在公司展出的新款很感兴趣;3.询问产品的详细信息,包括产品的规格、颜色、价格和功能等;4.说明该款市场销售前景看好;5.希望和对方建立长远的商务关系words for references:广交会 Guangzhou Trade Fair规格 specificationsPart V Writing (参考范文December 22, 2009Dear Mr. Smith,It's so nice to have known you at the Guangzhou Trade Fair last month!I am really impressed by the new type of mobile phone you displayed in the fair. I wonder if you can tell me the details of this product, such as its specifications, colors, price and functions. I'm quite sure that this type of mobile phone will sell well in our market, so I am really interested in establishing a long-term business relationship with you.Your early reply will be_highly appreciated.Sincerely yours,Mark Zhang难点分析应用文写作要特别注意写作发生的具体情境 (写给谁 ? 写信的目的是什么 ? ,设身处 地,详加考虑,就可以做到“简洁、牢 L 貌、完整” (concise, courteous, complete 。

写好 A 级作文,最重要的是格式正确,内容不遗漏,语言没有错误,不必有许多自 由发挥用简明的英语句子把提纲要求的内容表达清楚,予以合理组织,就可以了 这封信可以分三段来写:第 1条是第 1段,属于“套近乎”联络感情的内容;第 2、 3条是第 2段,是询问信的主体;第 4、 5条可以在第 3段合起来写,说明自己的希望至于信件本身的格式,套用即可09年 6月说明:假设你是某公司人事部职员王林, 为安排一次职工的假期旅行, 向某旅行社写信询 问有关事宜内容:1.询问旅游信息 (如:线路、价格、折扣等 ;2.告诉对方参加旅游的人数和时间安排;3.索要相关的资料,特别是行程安排;4.告之联系方式Words for reference:Travel Agency 旅行社注意信函格式!Part V Writing (参考范文June 21st, 2009 Dear Sir or Madam,We are arranging a tourist trip for all our staff members next month, and I am writing to inquire about the tourist packages you can offer.We have 30 people and can have a S-day trip starting from 15th. We hope to go to some famous scenic spots, hopefully in Yunnan. Will you please tell me what tourist routes you have? And what is the price for each person? Can you give us a discount?It is highly appreciated if you can send us brochures about the tour arrangement you offer. Please contact me at telephone number , or fax number .Sincerely yours, Wang LinHuman Resources Department of ABC Company 难点分析本题要求写一封商务信函。

因为这是向旅行社询问有关旅游资讯, 可以看作是两个企业 之间的初次联系,所以文体比较正式本题难点在于按题目要求把有关咨询的内容表达充分、 完整, 而且还要连贯自然 语言 上比较正式, 但不必过于老套, 可以简洁一点 注意掌握常用的索要产品目录时需要的表达 方式,如:It is highly appreciated if you can send us...; I wound appreciate it ff you could send.. 等08年 12月说明:请以王华的名义向商店经理写一封投诉信内容如下:投诉人:王华投诉对象:第一百货公司投诉商品:SQ200投诉原因:不能拍照,不能收发短信,„„等等 .投诉要求:退货或更换提出希望:及早回复 ·写信日期:2008年 12月 21日注意信函格式 !Part V Writing (参考范文December 21st, 2008 Dear Manager of the First Department Store,Last month, I bought a SQ200 mobile phone in your department store. After I used it for several days, I found there is something wrong with this mobile phone. It could not be used to take photos or send messages. Now, it's function is limited to receiving calls, which does not worth the 。