雅思小作文完美比较和对比.doc

雅思小作文完美比较和对比小作文题目要求中必定有一句 make comparison where relevant，在相关联处进行对比如果只会比划 more 或者 less 是没法得到理想分数的，你需要掌握不同的比较和对比方法商品名称 规格等级单位 本期价格( 元)比上期价格涨跌(元) 涨跌幅 (%花生油 压榨一级 升 27.39 0.06 0.2大豆油 5L 桶装 升 10.03 -0.03 -0.3菜籽油 一级散装 升 13.34 -0.01 -0.1一、句子间的比较1. In contrast， by contrast, on the contraryThe most expensive oil among the three items was made from peanuts(27.39 yuan per litre), with a marginal rise of 0.2%. In contrast, the lowest price was in soybean oil(10.03 yuan), decreasing slightly by 0.3%.2.In comparisonPeanut oil price rose modestly by 0.06 yuan to 27.39 yuan/litre. In comparison, the price of colza and soybean oil went down marginally by 0.01 and 0.03 yuan to 13.34 and 10.03 yuan/litre respectively.3. HoweverThe price of two items, namely colza and soybean oil, dropped slightly by 0.01 and 0.03 yuan to 13.34 and 10.03 yuan/litre respectively. The figure of peanut oil, however, climbed modestly by 0.06 yuan to 27.39 yuan/litre. 注：注意逗号的使用。

通常来说 however 很少放在句首二、句子里的对比在同一个句子中对比两个信息 1. whileWhile there was a slight rise in peanut oil price to 27.39 yuan/litre, there were marginal downward trends in the prices of colza oil and soybean oil, falling to 13.34 and 10.03 yuan/litre respectively.也可以写成There was a slight rise in peanut oil price to 27.39 yuan/litre while there were marginal downward trends in the prices of colza oil and soybean oil, falling to 13.34 and 10.03 yuan/litre respectively. 2. whereasWhereas the majority of oil items experienced a slight price decrease, peanut oil was exceptional with a marginal increase in its unit price.也可以写成The majority of oil items experienced a slight price decrease whereas peanut oil was exceptional with a marginal increase in its unit price.3. more or less/fewer 的比较ThanThe price of peanut oil was 27.39 yuan/litre, which was 17.36 yuan more than soybean oil.Fewer/less不可数名词用 less, 可数名词用 fewer:Colza oil's price was 14. 05 yuan less than peanut oil's.4. 用 much/far/slightly 或数值来细化比较和对比在使用 less/more/fewer 的同时， 用副词来细化，但是如描述到重点细节时，用数值更好。

Much lower price was for soybean oil than for peanut oil.([表达的细节还是有限)17.36 yuan lower price was for soybean oil than for peanut oil. (既有比较还有细节）5. 用 most 或者 least/fewest 来比较当描述细节时，极值总是重要的，同时描述极值也是比较的一种方式The most expensive price was in peanut oil--27.39 yuan/liter.The lowest price (10.03 yuan/liter) among these three items was in soybean oil.6. 用 similar 、 same /as…..as 进行比较Similar (to)The downward percentage of colza and soybean oil were very similar (0.1% and 0.3% respectively).Similar decreases occured in soybean oil(0.03yuan) and colza oil(0.01yuan).The price for colza oil was very similar to the price for soybean oil.Same as …asThe percentage of the price decrease in colza oil was almost exactly the same as in soybean oil.7. differ/different/differenceThe prices of colza and soybean oil differed by approximate 3 yuan.There was a difference of just over 17 yuan between the prices of peanut and soybean oil.The prices were slightly different between the colza and soybean oil--the former was merely 3.09 yuan more than the latter. 8.用倍数来比较half, twice，triple（three times, three folds)，quadruple(four times, four folds) Quadruple as many femal students choose to study in Foreign Languages College as male students in Guangxi Teachers College.Half the number of mobile phones saled in China were foreign brands.The revenue of MDF comany was half as much as NBY company.Hello，我是赵老师，擅长雅思托福以及成人青少年口语的培训；我是因材施教的老师，还持有英国文化委员会、剑桥大学雅思培训证书哦；最关键的在于我是从雅思低分爬到高分的人，是从被中国老师耻笑发音为rubbish 到两周后让 “歪果仁”认为英语是在国外学的人，是知道从英语屌丝到成功者过程中的每一处难点会在哪里的人，是知道如何超越这些看似无法逾越的困难的人。

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