2015年英语中考作文(教育精品).doc

2015年英语中考作文预测评分原则： 1.本题总分为15分，按五个档次给分评分时，先根据文章写作要点、应用词汇、语法结构 的准确性及上下文的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后根据拼写、书写和词数等情况调整 档次，最后给分单词拼写英、美用法均可，书写要规范，严重影响交际的，将分数降低一个档次词数少于80的，从总分中减去2分第一档:（15〜13分）能写出全部要点，表达清楚，内容完整丰富使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通 顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性允许有个别语言错误第二档:（12〜10分）能写出全部要点，表达基本清楚，内容较完整语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要语 言基本通顺，语意基本连贯有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解第三档：（9〜7分）能写出大部分要点，语法结构和词汇错误较多，但尚能达意第四档：（6〜4分)与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达出基本要点只是简单拼凑，未达到写作要求 第五档：（3〜0分）只写出一、二个句子，语言错误多 0分 只字未写J (2013 ·内蒙古包头) 初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束，你的老师陪伴你度过了三年的校园生活回顾其中的许多点点滴滴，久久不能忘记请你用英文给你的某一位教师写一封信，和他（她）说说感激的心里话。

要点提示： 教师表现1. 工作努力，认真；2.教学耐心，待人友好留存记忆1.严格要求也关爱学生；2.师生相处和睦；3.给予学习上和生活上的帮助；4.学生学业取得了进步要求：1.内容包括所有提示的要点，意思完整，语言规范 2.可适当发挥，增加细节，使语句连贯通畅 3.文中不要出现你的真实姓名及校名 4.80—100词左右，信的首尾已写好，不计入总词数Dear my teacher. Leaving you—lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say. Thank you again for what you’ve done for us! All the best to you!Yours,×××参考答案：Dear my teacher. Leaving you—lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say. Since you became my English teacher three years ago, you’ve always been working hard. I won’t forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. You’re strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had-trouble in life, you told me to be brave.Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.Thank you again for what you’ve done for us! All the best to you!一、书面表达（本题满分15分）假设某中学生英文报开展关于高中生活的征文活动，请你根据下表所提示的要点，以My ideal senior high school 为题，用英语为该报写一篇短文，简述理想中的高中生活情形，以及你对高中学习生活的展望。

理想高中校园环境优美老师耐心教导同学乐于分享学习轻松有趣课外活动丰富我的展望（请考生结合自身实际，自拟至少两点内容）注意：1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译2. 词数90左右开头已经写好，不计入总词数3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名My ideal senior high schoolWe will be senior high school students soon. In my ideal senior high school, 参考答案My ideal senior high schoolWe will be senior high school students soon. In my ideal senior high school, there are many green trees and beautiful flowers. The teachers there are patient enough to explain difficult problems to us, while the students are willing to share their joy and worries with each other. We have fewer subjects and less homework. After school we can take part in all kinds of activities. In this way, our new school life will be full of fun.I hope to make any friends and enjoy my school life in senior high school. I also hope I can make great progress in my study.E (2013 ·安徽) 今天是父亲节。

假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子要点如下： 表达你与父亲间的情感； 为父亲制作一张卡片；帮助父亲做点事； 陪父亲散步等注意： 1. 词数80---100； 2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数Dear John, It’s Father’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it？_________________________________________________________________________________________ What’s your plan for Father’s Day? I’m looking forward to hear from you. Yours, Dear John,It’s Father’s day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?I think we should do something to show our love for our father on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook this favorite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I’m sure he’ll be very happy.What’s your plan for Father’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,Li Hua二 ,书面表达（共1题，计15分）父爱如山！假设父亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给你父亲写封信，和他谈谈心里话。

写作要点： 1.父亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育，过上更好的生活； 2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时，他鼓励我不放弃；遇到困难时，父亲鼓励我笑对生活；表达对父亲的感谢和祝福温馨提示：1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言流畅，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；2. 短文字数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名Dear father,Father’s Day is coming, I’d like to say something to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Li Hua参考答案：Dear father,Father’s Day is coming. I，d like to say something to you.You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I。