高二英语看图作文讲评.ppt

看图作文讲评8江苏省石庄高级中学 秦建华•为迎接高考，你常常复习功课到深夜请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记注意：1、日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使日记连贯2、词数：120以上3、日期已给出Sunday，October 13，2003 Fine•1、审、审 题题①体裁：日记文体②主要时态：一般过去时，描述 我 一天上午的经历③人称：第一人称④要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过⑤注意日记的格式•2、简译•为迎接高考，“我”常常复习功课到深夜•I often stay up late to go over my lessons for college entrance examination．．I woke up at nine o’clock this morning .I got dressed.I rushed into the living room .Mother was preparing breakfast there .I got on my bike .When I got to the school,I found the schoolgate was closed•3、衔接•将图中和图与图之间隐藏的要点挖掘出来。

•对第一幅图所反应的内容我们要交待其原因：如：昨天晚上直到12点才睡觉•Last night I didn’t go to bed until 12 O’ clock．．•对第二幅图我们要根据常识补出：对第二幅图我们要根据常识补出：（起（起来后）要洗漱：来后）要洗漱：•I brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.•对于第二和第三幅图之间我们也应该根据常识补出下列要点：•图中的母亲有没有讲什么？（因为时间紧张，母亲没有来得及讲什么）•我去上学肯定要拿什么？（书包）•Before she could say anything，，I got my school-bag…•对于第三幅图，我们可以相象一下：“我”骑车往学校赶的路上的心情•害怕迟到受处罚，而拼命地骑车•I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of be late so I rode as fast as I could.•对于第四幅图我们可以推测：因为车骑得快，因而心理感到好象没过几分钟就到了学校．•It seemed only a few minutes before l got to the school.•4、成文•加上过渡词语、改变一些句式，整理成文。

•Sunday，October 13，2003 Fine•I often stay up late to go over my lessons •or college entrance examination．．It was• not until 12 o’clock last night that I went• to bed.When I woke up this morning,I •found it was already 9 o’clock.I got •dressed,brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.•Then I rushed into the living-room，，where •Mother was preparing breakfast．．Before• she could say anything，，I got my school-•bag，，ran out and got on my bike．．I was• afraid that I would be punished by the• teacher because of be late so I rode as fast •as I could.It seemed only a few minutes •before I got to the school ．．To my •surprise，，I found the schoolgate was •closed．．I t was then that I realized it was Sunday．．•See you later!•Post card:226531。