
安徽专版八年级英语上册Module7Afamousstory写作素养提升练课件新版外研版.ppt
15页写作素养提升练,,Module 7 A famous story,在英语书面表达中,有时要求根据所给材料,描述过去,某个时间发生的故事或某个人的经历主要以,叙述,故事的过程为中心内容在写此类短文时,要,根据要点,提示简明扼要地叙述,适当展开联想;最后,简要阐明,自己对这件事的看法,此,类短文既然是谈论过去的经历,那么写作时,应以,一般过去时和过去进行时为主另外要注意,在同,一时段,中的动作、状态应该用同一种时态,这样前后呼应安徽外研,版八年级,上,从前,有个小女孩,名叫小花,她没有家人,,所以整天,都很伤心但她有一只可爱的,(lovely),猫,这只猫,会唱歌,一个星期六的早晨,小花要去市场时,这只猫,唱了,一首名叫,《,十只小白兔,》,的歌曲有个人正好骑马路过,,听,了这首歌后,便买下了这只猫小花得到钱,为自己,买了,几本故事书,她高兴极了,脸上露出了笑容,(smile),要求,:,1.,词数,80~100,;,2.,必须包含以上提示内容,语句通顺,意思连贯,,可,适当发挥思路构建,】,Long long ago, there was a poor little girl,called Xiaohua,. She had no family and lived alone, so she,was very,sad all day. But she had a lovely cat. It could,sing a,few songs. One Saturday morning, while she,was going,to the market, the cat was singing a nice,song named,Ten Little White Rabbits,.,【,精彩范文,】,At that moment, a man was riding a horse,,and when,he went past, he heard the beautiful song.,He got,off his horse and bought the cat. After Xiaohua,got the,money, she bought some storybooks for herself,. She,was very happy and there was a big smile on,her face,.,1. while,当,……,的时候,2,. follow,跟随,3. fall,掉落;跌落,4,. hole,洞;穴,5. ground,地面,6,. twice,两次;两倍,7. suddenly,突然地,8,. field,牧场;田地,【,单词积累,】,【,短语积累,】,1. once upon a time,从前,2. all day,整天,3. on the way to…,在去,……,的路上,4. walk past,路过,5. at once,立刻;马上,6. after a while,过了一会,7. have to,不得不,8. look after,照顾,9. once or twice,偶尔;一两次,10. think about,考虑,1. While he was carrying…and…, …,他拿着,……,和,……,的时候,,……,2. Long long ago, there was…called…,很久以前有一个名叫,……,的,……,3. On one’s way to…, …saw/met…,在,……,去,……,的路上,,……,看见,/,遇到了,……,4. When I saw this, I,…,当,我看到这种情况,我,……,【,句型积累,】,昨天你读了小女孩安,(Ann),的故事。
请根据,下面的,提示,写一篇词数,80~100,的短文,向大家讲述,一下这个,故事,可在提示要点的基础上有所发挥提示:一天,安正在房子外面玩突然,她,看见一,只长着圆脸和四条长腿的鹿,(deer),在跑她想要,知道它,要去哪里安跟着鹿去了一个美妙的新世界那里,有许多,奇怪的动物,所有的动物和植物都会说话安,感到很,兴奋但是最后,安发现那只是一个梦,(dream),One,day, Ann, a,beautiful little,girl, was,playing outside her house alone. Suddenly,,,she saw a deer with a round face and four long legs. It was running slowly. Ann wanted to know where it was going and what it was going to do. So she followed it. After a long time,,,they went into a wonderful new world. There Ann saw many strange animals. All the animals and plants could speak.,They,____________________________________________________,____________________________________________________,____________________________________________________,____________________________________________________,____________________________________________________,____________________________________________________,____________________________________________________,could talk with each other in English and Chinese. And she could also understand them. All of them were very friendly. They were glad to make friends with Ann and they gave her lots of nice presents. Ann felt very excited.,But in the,end, Ann,found it was just a dream. How she wished it would come true!,。












