高考英语书面表达的高分策略3.docx

名师归纳总结 精品word资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -近几年的高考《考试说明》中 ,关于高考英语书面表达评分标准第五档 〔很好 〕中有这样一段话 :" 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 ;语法结构或词汇方面有些许 错误 ,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致； "这就是说 ,同学仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型 ,不能表达出较强的语言运用才能 ,即使表达无语法错 误,也不能得高分 ;相反有些错误 ,目的在有意识地使用复杂结构或较高级词汇 , 也不扣分 ,仍属于最高档次； 高考把写作要求提到了这样一个高度 ,有利于反映同学的水平层次 ,有利于指导教学； 原先 "要点完整 ,语言无误 ,行文连贯 ,表达清晰" 的标准就落后了；在平常的教学中 ,训练最多的 ,同学们也最习惯的是五种 基本句型 :①主语 +谓语 ;②主语 +谓语 +宾语 ;③主语 +谓语 +间接宾语 ;④主语 + 谓语 +间接宾语 +直接宾语 ;⑤主语 +谓语 +宾语 +补足语；用这些句型组织的句子单一、无愤怒 ,不能给人一种含金量高的审美享受；客观形势对我们提出了高难度的要求 ,我们怎样才能对书面表达进行科学的操作怎样才能掌握写作呢下面拟就这一课题进行探讨 ,期望能给同学们以启发 ,调动积极性 ,开拓思维 ,培育创新精神； 奇速英语近几年高考书面表以应用文，记叙文为主，有时显现说明文或谈论文．★★ .应试策略 :主题鲜明 ,文理通顺 ,语法正确 ,符合规律和英语的习惯表达 ,在才能答应的情形下 ,尽量使用复杂结构和高级词汇〔一〕使用高级词汇 ,增加文章的亮点1.合理使用动词 ,使之符合不同的语言风格 第 1 页，共 10 页 - - - - - - - - -名师归纳总结 精品word资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -试比较 :Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school.NowI ’dliketointroduce our schoolto you.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school. ur school.NowI ’dliketotell you somethingabout o２．合理使用动词使表达更生动试比较：At the foot of the mountain, there was a small river.At the foot of the mountain, there flowed a small river.3.变换动词使表达更地道试比较：My parents and I are very pleased to invite you to stay at our home. My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us.４．合理使用动词能增强表达的规律性试比较We may be one family and live under the same roof, but we don’ t g et much time to talk together.We may be one family and live under the same roof, but we don’ t s eem to get much time to talk together.5.奇妙使用动词短语增加表达的新奇性 第 2 页，共 10 页 - - - - - - - - -名师归纳总结 精品word资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -I used to like reading and writing poems at middle school.I used to take delight in reading and writing poems at middle school. 6.使用助动词增强文章的感染颜色I went there but I didn ’t see you.I did go there but I didn’ t see you.．适当使用替代词，同位语，介词短语，形容词短语，非谓语动词等，使语言更精练．试比较：1. So the missing money still must be in the other jacket, the jacket th at you were wearing yesterday.So the missing money still must be in the other jacket, the one that y ou were wearing yesterday.（０４年北京高考）2. Do you think you’d like it If you don’t like it, I can try and find another place for you.Do you think you’d like it If not, I can try and find another place fo r you. 〔2003NMET3. I’ ve found a place for you. It ’s a small flat of 25 square meters, which has a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.I’ ve found a place for you. It ’s a small flat of 25 square meters, wi th a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. 〔2003NMET〕4. We’ ll mostly stay at home in the evening and watch TV , play game s, and meet people.We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening , watching TV, playing gam 第 3 页，共 10 页 - - - - - - - - -名师归纳总结 精品word资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -es, and meeting people.（二）变换句式，使表达丰富多彩 １．用并列连词把意义相关的几个句子连起来，防止句子冗长累赘，松散无力，使句子凝炼，层次清晰1.I was walking along Park Road towards the east. At that time, an el derly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. 〔2000NMET〕2.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. It is not far from Jianxi n Chinese School.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, and it/which is not far fro m Jianxin Chinese School.2.试着转变句子的开头，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语， 最终加一个状语．要敏捷应用倒装句，强调句，主从复合句，分词状语等， 这样能增加文章的节奏和韵律美．ning.er.(1) We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morEarly in the morning we met at the school gate and went there togeth(2) Our brave Ah Fu had saved my little sister.It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.３．在整篇文章中 ,防止只使用一两个句型 ,要敏捷运用各种语法结构 ,使文章有声有色一、转变时态例:The bell is ringing now.〔 一般 〕 There goes the bell. 〔 高级〕 第 4 页，共 10 页 - - - - - - - - -名师归纳总结 精品word资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -二、转变语态例 :People suggest that the conference be put off.〔 一般 〕 It is suggested that the conference be put off. 〔高级 〕三、使用不定式例:He is so kind that he can help me.〔 一 般 〕 He is so kind as to help me.〔高级〕四、使用过去分词例:① She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.〔一般 〕 Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.〔高级 〕② Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten.〔 一 般 〕 Once seen, it can never be forgotten.〔 高级 〕五、使用 V-ing 形式例:① When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.〔 一 般〕 On arriving/his arrival, please give me an e-mail.〔 高 级 〕② If the weather permits, I'll come tomorrow.〔 一般 〕 I'll come tomorrow, weather permitting.〔 高级〕六、使用名词性从句 奇速英语 第 5 页，共 10 页 。