初三英语培优班作文指导.doc

初三英语培优班 作文指导Which Is the Best Way to TravelIt is said that taking a plane is the best way to travel. I don’t agree. In my opinion, it is far better to travel by train.Firstly, taking a train is cheaper than traveling by plane. Take the trip from Dalian to Hangzhou for example. A sleeping wagon in the train only costs about four hundred yuan but a plane ticket costs more than one thousand yuan.Secondly, it is more interesting to take a train. The train is just like a move party. As you may see, people can chat, walk around, make friends, play cards and enjoy the beautiful scenery outside. But on a plane, you can only sit on your seat and watch the clouds.All in all, I think the best way to travel is to make a train. It is a lot better than other ways.结构提炼It is said that … I don’t agree. In my opinion …Firstly … take … for exampleAll in all, I think …结构分析范文论点明确，论证有理有据，条理清晰。

首先作者引用一个普遍的观点 “It is said that taking a plane is the best way to travel.” 随后进行反驳，提出 “In my opinion, it is far better to travel by train.” 并列举两点理由进行对比论证在此作者用了举例子，列数字，对比等方法，使论证强劲有力最后以 “all in all, I think” 来总结观点写作指导针对社会某一现象表达自己的观点时，可以有下面的说法：表示同意： I agree with … I totally agree that … I think … is definitely right. I must admit that … It is widely accepted that等等表示不同意： I don’t agree with … I don’t agree that … I don’t think … It is said that … but in my opinion … 等等在议论文写作中，除了可以列举数字之外，还可以举众所周知的例子，用事实来论证。

本文还有一个很明显的特色就是用对比的手法来论证自己的观点就是从两个方面讲乘火车和乘飞机的区别，对比飞机，显出乘坐火车的优势：更便宜，有趣此外，大家还可以从文章中学到乘坐交通工具的不同说法比如乘火车可以说take a train, travel by train, travel on a train, have a train ride. 其他交通工具，如 take a bus/car/ship, by air/sea, on a bus/ship/plane, in a car, 此外还有on foot, take/have a walk 等等下面同学思考对已一下普通的英语字典和电子词典（E-dictionary），哪一个对学习英语更有利？请提出两点理由I think ______________ is better than ___________.Firstly , ________________________Secondly , ________________________实战练习大家都知道环境问题是人们一直以来无法解决的问题有人认为可以利用先进的科技制造出无污染的材料供人们使用，有人认为主要是提高人的环保意识；也有人认为环境问题归根结底是因为人口过多引起的。

那么，你认为怎样才能解决环境问题，保护好人类居住的地球呢？Which Is the Best Way to Protect the EnvironmentIt is said that ___________________. I don’t agree. In my opinion, ________________________________.Firstly, __________________________________________. Take _______________ for example. _____________________________.Secondly, ________________________________________. As you may see, ________________________________________________.All in all, I think _________________________________________________________.范文：It is said that the best way to protect the environment is to control the population in the world. I don’t agree. In my opinion, to help people know the importance of environment and what to protect it is the best and basic way to solve the problem.Firstly, it is easier to let people know the importance of environment. Take China for example. We cannot control the large population in China at once, but we can help people know how bad the environment is and do something for it in a short time. Secondly, it is more important to change people’s mind. As you may see, people who care about the environment put dustbins in the neighborhood, and some even plant trees by themselves.All in all, I think if everyone can realize the importance of protecting the environment, our world must be more beautiful.。