高考英语 四 题型二　微技能3　首尾完美照应 逐步推进秀续写.docx

温馨提示： 此套题为Word版，请按住Ctrl,滑动鼠标滚轴，调节合适的观看比例，答案解析附后关闭Word文档返回原板块 微技能3 首尾完美照应•逐步推进秀续写【真题研磨】【典例展示】 (2023·浙江1月高考)　　I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it.It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.　　With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.　　When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings.Still, she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?　　As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move.I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.　　Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face.For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight.　　During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering.She turned from person to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For a moment, all were speechless.Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”注意:续写词数应为 150个左右。

　　A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思维】第一步　根据续写第一段第一句推出首段续写“三要点”首句A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.梗概My thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird. I couldn’t help wondering how she was getting on now. 第二句As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from spider-webs.尾句Had she managed to find her way home, or was she still out there somewhere struggling to survive?第二步　根据续写第二段第一句推出第二段续写“两要点”。

首句I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.梗概I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air.尾句...I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.第三步　根据“情感线”和“情节线”列出写作关键句情感线I was in great comfort→I felt a surge of relief and awe情节线I went to the farm again→my thoughts drifted back to the past moment→I rushed to the deserted house→it was a great comfort→I wondered how she was getting on;I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared→it seemed that she was waiting for me→I climbed into my car and drove away第四步　谋篇成文,文字流畅秀续写。

考场作文续写高分亮点秀　　A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from spider-webs. ①I rushed back to the deserted house.It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. ②Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how she was getting on now. ③ Had she managed to find her way back home, or was she still out there somewhere struggling to survive?④I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ⑤A flash of movement caught my attention.I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air.It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, her beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. ⑥I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. ⑦①使用when引导定语从句。

②使用be nowhere to be done,语言准确、地道③句中包括动词-ing短语作状语;动词-ing形式作宾语及how引导的宾语从句④句中or并列连接两个疑问句⑤句中使用了句型“be about to do...when”,意思是“正要做……这时……”⑥使用了句型It seems that...⑦句是一个复杂的句式,第三个and并列连接了两个句子,其中后句是复合句,包括宾语、定语和状语三大从句形式考场技法】一、读后续写出彩开头6大设计技巧开头形式真题回放副词But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. 形容词短语Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to 。