大学英语作文字：SparetheLottery,SparetheLottery范文.docx

大学英语作文字：Spare the Lottery,Spare the Lottery范文大学英语作文字：SparetheLottery,SparetheLottery范文sparethelotterylottery,boomingallofasuddenallovertheworld,attractsallkindsofpeople.nearlyeverybody,oldoryoung,richorpoor,isrightnowtryinghisluckinlotteryoristhinkingofdoingso.despitemanydisputesthatlotteryisreceiving,istillassume,personally,thatlotterydoesmeregoodthanharm.theworsteffectcausedbylottery,asmanysocialistsindicate,isthatitproducesinpeopleanideaofgainwithoutpain.butatthesametime,theyneglectonepoint--itishumannaturethatpeopleallepecttoobtainmostwhileofferleast.thethoughtofgainwithoutpainisburiedineveryonesheartandisnotbredbylottery.consequently,lotteryisinnocentinthisway.buttherestillremainalargegroupofpeopleagainstlottery,amongwhomaresomelotteryaddicts.suchpeoplearefondoflotterybutunfortunatelyluckisneverfondofthem.finally,theyendupincomplainingaboutlottery,declaringthegreatharm,bothpsychologicallyandeconomicallylotteryhasdonetothem.inthiscase,theproblemliesintheattitudeofpeople,notlottery.sincethemajortwosortsofharmarenotlotterysfault,letshaveanobjectivelookonlottery.forthesociety,lotteryisthemostpracticalwaytoaccumulatefunds.forthosewhohappentowinalargefortune,ithinktheycantkisstheirlotteryenough.alsoforthosewhohavenotasinglechancetobeluckydogs,lotterycanmutelytellthemthetruthofnopains,nogains.sparethelottery!it,initselfcandomoregoodthanharm.简评孙燕同学的这篇作文虽然篇幅不长，但文笔老练轻松，挥洒自如，令人过目难忘，实在是一篇难得的精品。

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