高中英语读后续写公开课优质ppt课件(母爱).ppt

Continuation writing1• Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave.• The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?””•“Oh,yes...but I don’t have money on me,” she replied.•“That’s nothing. I'll treat you today,” said the man.•“Come in.”•The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.•“What is it?” asked the man kindly.•“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!”said Jenny. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” •Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”• Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered Mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”• On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.•Paragraph 1•Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.______________________________•Paragraph 2•A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._______________________________Task : a continuation(续写) of the storyReadRead what happened ____in__ the story WriteWrite what happened ______ the storyParagraph 1Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________after2Step￿1￿Reading3Task 1 Read for information content contentwhowho whenwhen wherewhere whatwhat whywhyJennymothersellerthat afternoonthe house, in the streetran out of the househad a quarrel with her mother4Task 2 Read for plot ParaEvent (动词)Jenny's Feeling(形容形容)Para1Para2-9The seller ____Jenny ____________,and Jenny ______ the seller a lot.The seller ____ her how many times her mother _____ for her and if she _______ her mother.Para10-11She ___ there,________Mother's familiar face and weathered hands. Realizing her mistakes, she _____________ to go home to ________________ her mother.Jenny _____________ her mother, ____home and a few hours later,felt a little _________. quarreled withlefthungrybrought a bowl of noodlesthankedaskedcooked thankedsatremenberingmade up her mindmake an apology toangry, weep~~ sadtouched~~thankful/ gratefulmerciless~~complain~~misunderstandingregretful, ashamed,guilty5reading--------------------------continuationRead for plot Paragraph 1Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.quarrel, ran out oftreat Jenny noodlesdecided to apologizeashamed, regretfulangry, sadthankful, touchedParagraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.beginningrising developmentClimaxEnding6Step￿2￿Writing7Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.ü The 2nd beginning and a positive ending infers the content of Para 2ü Two given sentences infers the content of Para 1 Infer the content——two given beginningsTips两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量8Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.Task 3 Outline possible plot（para.1）feelingactionscenedialogueReasonable动作，心理，情感，环境动作，心理，情感，环境/情景情景1）___________________________________ , she found her mother was not in.2) _____________________________ , she wondered, ______________________________3) Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind._________________________________________________________________________________________4)______________________________________, she failed to control her tears.9•Paragraph 1:•Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she pushed the door open and entered the house, she found her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sank down onto the sofa.“Where could my mother be?” she wondered.“Was she still angry with me?”Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks.10Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.Task 3 Outline possible plot（para.2）feelingactionscenedialogueReasonable动作，心理动作，心理/对话，情感，环境对话，情感，环境11 Paragraph 2:•A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother.“Here you come! I’ve been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldn’t help throwing herself into her mother's arms.“Mum, I'm so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently. With a bright light streaming through the window, flooding the opening and spreading in a wide circle on the ceiling, they hugged together and too thrilled to say anything.12 Song of the Parting SonFrom the threads a mother's hands weaves,A gown for parting son is made.Sewn stitch by stitch before he leaves,For fear his return be delayed.Such kindness as young grass receives,From the warm sun can't be repaid. 游子吟慈母手中线，游子身上衣。

临行密密缝，意恐迟迟归谁言寸草心，报得三春晖Step 3 : Enjoy a famous Chinese poem13 Heaven and earth are generous, parents are generous. ---天地宽大，父母恩大 Thank you for your listening!14。