公开课如何写建议信.ppt

writing Dear Mr. Wang, Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some advice. What we need most are popular science books. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours sincerely, Li Yue建议信Ending express your hopeBeginning state your purposeBody give advice & reasons1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on…2. I am writing to express my views concerning…3. Knowing that…, I’d like to give some suggestions. A. state your A. state your purpose purpose sentence patterns B. give your advice B. give your advice 1. It’s helpful/ important to…2. It would be a good idea to…3. I would like to suggest that… C. express your hopeC. express your hope1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.3. I'm sure if you take my advice, you will …表达愿望：表达愿望：5 5、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和保持健康。

得更加苗条和保持健康The use of sentence patterns表明意图：表明意图：1. 1. 你给你给Jane 回回信就如何减肥提建议信就如何减肥提建议 提出建议：提出建议：2 2、健康饮食、健康饮食3 3、多锻炼、多锻炼4 4、喝足够多的水、喝足够多的水Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, I’d like to give some suggestions. It is important to have a healthy diet. It is helpful to do more exercise. It would be a good idea to drink enough water. I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. 假设你叫李华，你的好朋友假设你叫李华，你的好朋友JaneJane最近发现自己最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。

在发胖，很苦恼她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100100左右 1 1、健康饮食、健康饮食 2 2、多锻炼、多锻炼 3 3、喝足够多的水、喝足够多的水 It is helpful to do more exercise. It would be a good idea to drink enough water.It is important to have a healthy diet.Dear Jane, Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, I’d like to give some suggestions. First, it is important to have a healthy diet.In addition, it would be a good idea to drink enough water.Besides, it is helpful to do more exercise. I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and fruits.The more exercise you take, the more fat you will burn off, and you will be thinner. Because water can support our body and activities, and help us lose weight.Dear Jane, Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, I’d like to give some suggestions. First, it is important to have a healthy diet. In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and fruits. Besides, it also helps if you take more exercise. The more exercise you take, the more fat you will burn off, and you will be thinner. In addition, it should be a good idea to drink enough water, because water can support our body and activities, and help us lose weight. I'm sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。

请你根据下列要点写回信 1. 参加中文学习班； 2. 看中文书刊、电视； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友引出话题，表明写作意图1. 参加中文学习班；2. 看中文书刊、电视；3. 学唱中文歌曲；4. 交中国朋友提出建议：总结，表达愿望连接词(多个建议+多个理由)评分标准1 1、是否覆盖所有内容要点、是否覆盖所有内容要点2 2、是否恰当使用语法结构、是否恰当使用语法结构 3 3、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇4 4、是否使用连接词、是否使用连接词5 5、全文结构是否完整合理、全文结构是否完整合理Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes, Li Hua1. memorize the sentence patterns2. polish your writing常见连接词常见连接词——罗列观点罗列观点•Firstly,•First of all,•Above all,•To begin with, •In the first place,•For one thing, •Secondly, •Besides, •Moreover, •In addition,•What’s more, •Furthermore, •Worse still, •To make matters worse,•For another thing, •Finally, •At last, •In the end, •Last but not least,。