四级写作常见严重错误.ppt

四、六级写作常见严重错误,Serious Mistakes Common in CET-4& 6,一、修饰方面 I. Modification,1. Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has greatly improved.,一、修饰方面 I. Modification,1. Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has greatly improved. Since economic reforms have been carried out in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.,一、修饰方面 I. Modification,2. To improve one’s writing skill, regular practice is essential.,一、修饰方面 I. Modification,2. To improve one’s writing skill, regular practice is essential. To improve one’s writing skill, one must make a regular practice.,二、一致方面 II. Coherence,1. Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day. Whether we enjoy or resent,…,二、一致方面 II. Coherence,2. The eating habit of Chinese people have changed dramatically in the past decade. Have: has,二、一致方面 II. Coherence,3. One serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resources economically. Are: is,二、一致方面 II. Coherence,4. Study hard now so that we can cope with the changes and challenges of the twenty-first century. We: you,三、平行 III. Parallelism,1. While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased. While the number of vehicles is reduces,三、平行 III. Parallelism,2. The price of milk isn’t higher than grain. Than grain: than that of grain,四、语法 IV. Grammar,1. The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster. 2. Green trees can protect our air from polluting (being polluted). 3. Comparing (Compared) with other countries, China …,四、语法 IV. Grammar,4. The amount (number) of bicycles will decline in dozens of years. 5. In 1990 the consumption of grain has decreased (decreased) by 20%. 6. By comparison, nuclear power has some distinct advantages. Such as (For example, ) it is clean and cheap.,五、连词 V. Conjunction,1. One should improve his English, one should overcome difficulties in studies. If one wants to improve his English, he should overcome difficulties in studies.,五、连词 V. Conjunction,2. When people try to attain high speed by using cars and buses, and this creates new problems. When people try to attain high speed by using cars and buses, new problems arise.,六、搭配 VI. Collocation,1. ×crowded traffic√ heavy traffic 2. ×fast (quick, slow) speed√high (low, good, surprising) speed 3. ×expensive (cheap) price√high (low, original, reduced) price,六、搭配 VI. Collocation,4. ×study (learn) knowledge√acquire (pursue, pick up, deepen) knowledge 5. ×economical (节约的) issues√ economic(经济的) issues 6. ×every day (每天) activities√everyday (日常的) activities,。