2023年Module Section Ⅴ Writing——如何描写动物.doc

Section Ⅴ Writing——如何描写动物[写作技法指导][文体指导]本模块写作任务为描写动物，属于说明文的范畴1．此类文章以“说明”为主要表达方式，用来介绍动物的类属、生活习性、生存状态、外貌特征等，可对描述的对象作总体概括介绍，给人以直观的总体认识，然后进行具体说明，目的在于让人了解此种动物2．此类文章多用一般现在时文章应合理安排结构，注意行文的条理清晰，在动笔之前要想好描述顺序，句与句之间怎样衔接，段与段之间怎样联系[亮点句式]1．Many trees are being cut down and more and more forests are lost，making animals lose their homes .2．The giant panda is an animal that/which lives in the mountains.3．The giant panda feeds/lives on bamboo.4．As forests are being cut down，its habitat is becoming smaller and smaller.5．To protect pandas，measures should be taken to set up some nature reserves.6．If we don't protect them，they'll probably die out soon.7．Finally，we should let people know the importance of protecting endangered animals.8．Many fields are being turned into desert，which makes the animals living there have no place to find food to eat.9．Many animals are being killed so that some of them are in danger of dying out.10．In a word，we must take some measures to prevent rare animals from extinction.[满分佳作构建][写作任务]请根据下面的表格，写一篇介绍华南虎的100个词左右的文章。

动物华南虎(South China Tiger)特征非常凶猛，雄性体重190千克左右，雌性体重110千克左右，尾部有黑斑栖息地中国的华南、华北和华中，但野外很稀少食物主要捕食野猪(wild boar)、水鹿(sambar)等濒危的原因栖息地的减少，人类的捕杀现有的数目还有不到70只圈养华南虎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[审题谋篇]体裁说明文时态一般现在时主题描述动物人称第三人称结构第一段：引出有关华南虎的话题第二段：简单描述华南虎第三段：华南虎的处境及应对措施[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接模块词汇1．endangered　　　　　　 濒危的2．habitat 栖息地3．spot 斑点4．feed_on (动物)以……为食5．reserve 保护区；保护圈6．protect 保护7．be_tough_with 对……采取强硬措施8．poacher 盗猎者；偷猎者Ⅱ. 巧用模块句式、语法(一) 完成句子1．华南虎是一种濒危动物。

South China Tiger is an_endangered_animal．2．华南虎的栖息地在中国South China Tiger's habitat_is in China.3．他们主要靠捕食野猪、水鹿为生They feed_mainly_on wild boars and sambars.4．栖息地的减少和人类的捕杀使之处于危险之中The reduction of their habitats and people's hunting have left them in_danger．5．因此，我们应该教育人们保护它们并对偷猎者采取强硬措施As a result，we should educate_people_to_protect_them__and_be_tough_with those poachers.6．只有用这种方式它们的数量才会增长Their population can increase only_in_this_way．(二)句式升级7．用定语从句合并句1和句2South China Tiger is an endangered animal，whose_habitat__is_in_China. 【导学号：71812060】8．用部分倒装改写句6Only_in_this_way_can__its_population_increase.[妙笔成篇]________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】South China Tiger is an endangered animal，whose habitat is in China，exactly speaking，in Southern China，Central China and Eastern China.South China Tiger is large and fierce.The male tiger can weigh about 190 kilograms and the female tiger about 110 kilograms.One of its main features is that its tail has black spots.They feed mainly on wild boars and sambars.Now，there are less than 70 South China Tigers in the reserve and few live in the wild.The reduction of their habitats and people's hunting have left them in danger.As a result，we should educate people to protect them and be tough with those poachers.Besides，man mustn't destroy their habitats.Only in this way can their population increase.第 页。