高考英语三轮写作复习--应用文写作：和美国留学生一起过中秋.docx

高考英语三轮写作复习■■应用文写作：和美国留学生一起过中秋原题上周六晚你邀请你们班新来的美国留学生George到你家一起欢度中秋，请你为班级英 语角写一篇短文提供这段美好时光注意：写作词数应为80词左右写作注意问题1 .审文体：事件介绍（类似报道）开头简单介绍什么时间什么地点发生了什么事情；第二 局部依据题目要求介绍事情开展的经过、方式、具体活动内容等；第三局部是一个根据主题 升华的评价或总结2 .审人称：we, George审时态：过去时态（活动）；一般现在/现在完成/一般将来（评价/ 总结）3 .审要点：分段要明确P1交代背景（简明扼要概括题干背景信息）P2交代活动内容（思 路拓展：饮食/赏月/看节目/交流节日起源/••.）活动多样化、符合中秋节情境！描述具体但 不啰嗦！活动之间有衔接！（我们做月饼了，还做了一些小月饼，还做了点心，你们吃了一晚 上甜食吗？ //他跟我学了中文，我向他讨教了英语，你俩还过节不？切记切记：写作文要 句句跟主题相关！）P3 总结活动（George的感受/我的思考.・・可适当丰富内容）写作语言问题1. Sit-sat-sat-sitting2.嫦娥 Chang' e; 西安 Xi' an; 天安|' J Tian' anmen square3. 上周六晚上 on the evening of last Saturday; last Saturday evening4. Share: share sth. with sb. I' d like to share with you how we celebrated the festival. 5.团圆的象征 a symbol of family reunion6.对家庭团聚 的向往 one, s desire/ eagerness for family- reunion7. 赏月 admire/appreciate the bright full moon8. 看中 秋晚会 watch the Mid-autumn Festival Gala9.招待他一顿丰富的晚餐 treat him to a fancy dinnerlO.介 绍节日起源 introduce the origin of the festival to sb.写作句子升级1 .Let me share with you something about the festival.（具体化）Let me share with you some enjoyable moments about the festival.2 .We talked things about school life with each other.（具体化）We shared some interesting school experiences with each other.3 .On that day, the most important thing is to pay a new year visit and give your blessings to the ones you love.（利用从句-同义替换）On that day,what is the most important is to/ what matters most is to...It is... that matters/ counts.4 .All these things left a deep impression on both of us.What we experienced that day has left a deep impression on both of us.同学们的好句子5 .Last Saturday, I invited a new exchange student, George, who comes from America to my home to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival together with my family.6 .Last Saturday was Mid-Autumn Festival, which is the symbol of unity in Chinese culture. George, a new exchange student from America, had never observed the festival before, so I invited him to join us and celebrate it.7 .After a nice meal, we sat in the open air, admiring the beautiful moon, which was at its roundest and brightest of the year.8 .At dinnertime, the homemade dishes filled the table, giving off inviting smell. George fell in love with the food the moment he had his first bite. We sat around the table, enjoying the meal and talking about the origin of the festival. After the meal, we admired the full moon while enjoying the fairly delicious mooncakes.9 .This experience has not only strengthened our friendship but also left us a sweet memory. More importantly, both of us gained a deep insight into our traditional culture.10 George told me that this unforgettable experience enabled him to have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture and he began to love the people, the culture here.As a Chinese, Km so proud of my motherland and its culture. It was really the best Mid-autumnFestival ever!参考范文Last Saturday evening, I invited my classmate George who is from America to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with my family.It was his first time that he had enjoyed the Mid-autumn Festival in China so he was pretty interested and thrilled. I introduced the origin of the festival to him and my parents prepared a fancy dinner. After dinner, we ate some fruits and different kinds of mooncakes while watching the Mid-Autumn Festival Gala on TV.We did have a wonderful time and he had a better understanding of the Mid-Autumn Festival as well as Chinese culture.。