英语六级写作讲义综合语法逻辑改错.doc

综 合 改 错（Errors Correction）：一、语法错误二、词汇错误三、逻辑错误四、多词少词Example:Television is rapidly becoming the literature of our periods. Many of the arguments 1.time/times/agehaving used for the study for literature as a 2. / school subject are valid for ∧ study of television. 3. the 一、 语法错误1、平行结构(not only...but also\both...and\either...or\and)1) A professors salary is higher than a secretary.[secretarys] 2) One of these is informative, interesting, and is easy to understand.[去掉]3) Defining a problem is easier than to provide a solution.[providing]2、连词错误1) Candle will later be replaced by lamp, that could burn longer and lighter. [which]2) The children attended a small elementary school (often of just one room) to that they had to walk every day, possibly for a few miles. [which，that前只能有except和in。

except that除此以外；in that因为，体现在]3) It will be interesting to discover how many young people go to universities without any idea of that they are going to do afterward. [what，what相当于the thing that]4) It appears that we all find company in sound, if we demand a little quiet from time to time. [but或yet] 转折，所以不能用if 5) They are likely to travel more and to want more education. Nevertheless, many more jobs are available in these services. [Therefore或So] 因果3、分词错误1) Polices records show a surprised link between changes in the seasons and crime patterns. [surprising]2) Even the quiet of our careful protected wilderness areas can be invaded at any moment by a passed jet. [passing]3) So a sportsmans individual way of walking with raised shoulders is imitated by an admired fan. [admiring]4、指代错误 1) A break in their employment, or a decision to work part time, will slow its raises and promotions-as it would for men. [their] 2) Clearly some risks are worth taking, especially when the rewards are high: a man surrounded by flames and smoke generally considers that jumping out of a second-floor window is an acceptable risk to save its life. [his] 3) The modern light-house also identifies it in a code known to all ships. [itself] 主语宾语相重叠用反身代词5、形容词、副词（略）6、谓语错误（主谓一致、时态、语态）1) Business today whether it is running a little gas-station or a big factory take good management.[takes]2) Advances in technology has also changed peoples lives. [have]3) But if 98 percent of us doesnt need to work, what are we going to do with ourselves? [dont]复数 4) Whether women who have started a career will attain pay equality with men rest on at least two factors. [rests]句子做主语为单数 5) In some places all the trees have cut down. [have been]二、词汇错误(搭配错误、用词错误)三、逻辑错误（肯定否定乱用）1) Blood pressure drugs definitely help some people live after a heart attack, but these same drugs may be both necessary and harmful for those with only mild blood pressure problems. [unnecessary]2) In every case, the influential person may consciously notice the imitation but he will feel comfortable in its presence. [unconsciously]四、多词少词（少介词、冠词、形式宾语；多介词和副词）1) When two Americans meet for first time, it is normal for them to call each other by their given name immediately. [the first]2）In fact, until recently seawater has almost be considered to be useless and no value. [of no]。