2023年专题五 第一节 三.docx

三、添加细节的5年夜战略在英语书面表白中，添加细节内容的描画是必弗成少的在信息提要类写作中，考生必定不克不及复杂地翻译或许仅仅实现所给条目标指定内容；在看图作文中更不克不及只是轻描淡写图片内容，否那么特不有能够形成内容不空虚、字数请求不达标或许结构不衔接恰当添加细节内容，能够使习作流利、饱满，抵达应有的表白后果微技艺(一)　罗列具体的实例停顿弥补说明1.咱们青青年应尽咱们所能保护情况、援救地球Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.→Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample，wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags，refusetousesingle-useproducts，plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.2.我要花一些时辰跟怙恃待在一同I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.3.我想寻一个像我一样喜欢游览的笔友。

I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.→I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible，wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.4.我是一个充溢生机的健康男孩，我特不喜欢体育活动I’mahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch.→Iamahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch，especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime，I’llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.题组过关1　按照括号内提醒实现句子1.TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.Wecannotonlyreadnewsfromhomeandabroad(咱们不只能浏览国际外的旧事)，butalsogetinformation，sendemailsandattendonlineschools.2.LauraisastandardAmericanstyle.ShespeaksperfectAmericanEnglish(她说一口完满的美式英语)，andthat’swhyIamcrazyabouther.3.However，itseemspeopleareunawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample，manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontoface-to-facecommunication(比方，特不多人开始越来越不注重背靠背的交换).4.However，everycoinhastwosides，sodoestheInternet.Forexample，beinglostintheInternetmayaffectourstudyandwork(比方，沉沦于因特网兴许会阻碍咱们的进修跟任务).微技艺(二)　增加与所写信息相干的情态、举措、心思描述以及配景衬着等外容1.我偶然去村西的小河泅水。

Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverwasveryclear.(配景衬着)→Weatherpermitting，Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相干配景)2.我觉察了一些不良行动Ifoundsomebadbehavior.→Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall；somepeopleplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.(相干行动描画)3.晚饭后，这位男士走向了卧房Aftersupper，themanwenttohisbedroom.→Afterarichmeal，thefatmanslowlymadehiswaytohisbedroom.(情态、举措)题组过关2　按照括号内提醒实现句子5.Consideringtheactivityisofgreatvalue/ismeaningful(思索到这项活动特不有意思)，weintendtodesignauniformsuitedtoourownclass.6.I’lltrymybesttomakeyourunclehappyhere.Iameagerlylookingforwardtohisvisittoourcity(我热切地期盼着他来咱们都会不雅赏).7.Manyteenagersdon’tpayanyattentiontotheirhealth，especiallyduringtheholiday.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV(他们破费太多的时辰看电视)，playinggamesandchattingontheInternetallnight.8.LookingbacktomystayinBritain，Ifeltveryhappyandsatisfied(我觉得特不欢乐跟满意).9.Inthesummervacation，Iamlongingtoget/haveapart-timejob(我盼望失掉一份兼职任务).微技艺(三)　添加相干信息的时辰、所在等外容1.我要跟怙恃一同去超市购物。

I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.→I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwon’tbebackuntilabout5∶00intheafternoon.(添加时辰)2.我曾经带来了你让我出借的这两本书Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.→IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(添加所在)题组过关3　按照括号内提醒实现句子10.YaoMing，whowasborninShanghaionSeptember12,1980(1980年9月12日诞生于上海)，startedplayingfortheShanghaiSharksasateenager.11.TheChineseSilkRoad，whichstartsfromtoday’sxi’anandfinallyfinishesattheeastcoastof(来源于明天的西安，并最初抵达……的东海岸)theMediterranean，iswell-knowntotheworld.12.TodayIpaidavisittooneofthegreatestcitiesinAsia，BeijinginChina(在亚洲，中国的北京).13.Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthecitythemoment/immediately/assoonas/directly(一……就……)Iarrivedhereat6o’clockinthemorningbyplane.微技艺(四)　恰当添加与所给信息相干的缘故、后果、前提、退让、手腕、目标、所在等外容1.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最迩来信询征询你高考后的寒假布置。

请按照上面要点写一封复书，说明你的方案，并简述来由1.苏息；2.念书；3.参与社会活动1)Ineedagoodrest.I’lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse，I’lldosomereadingforfun，andforknowledgeaswell.(因果关联)(2)I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.→IfIhavefreetime，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(前提状语)→Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(前提状语)→Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(后果状语)2.Tracy来：咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)会晤撤消Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehadsomethingimportanttodo.(缘故状语)3.协助街坊的小孩们补习英语。

IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.→IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy，theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增加后果)题组过关4　按照括号内提醒实现句子14.TombSweepingDay，oneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals(传统的中国节日之一)，usuallyfallsaroundApril5everyyeartohonorthedeadandsatisfytheirancestors.15.Withtheglobalclimatebecomingwarmerandwarmer(随同着寰球气象变得越来越平跟)，ourearthisfacedwithgreatthreat.16.Situated/Locatedinnortheast(坐落在西南部)，Beijingiswell-knownforitsculturalrelicswhichhavebeenthereforalonghistory.17.Duringthisperiod，peoplewillgotocleanthegravesandpayrespecttotheirancestors，carryingfoodandfru。