2019年英语新同步外研选修六讲义：module 2 section ⅴ writing— 如何写科幻故事 word版含答案.doc

Section_ⅤWriting—_如何写科幻故事　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　科幻故事是开放式作文的一种，一般给出一段材料，要求我们充分发挥想象力来拓展原材料内容，运用逻辑推理的方法，沿着材料的纵横方向延伸，给故事添加开头、结尾或中间过程想象必须合理而且内容丰富，要抓住主题，运用恰当的词汇、句型与语句间的连接成分写出连贯的表达，语言要流畅、具有美感一、写作流程写科幻故事需要遵循以下步骤：1．仔细审题，确定文章结构科幻故事的写作一般可分为三部分：第一部分为故事的开始；第二部分为故事发展的过程及结果；最后一部分提出故事的教育意义2．根据需要确定时态科幻故事通常是发生在过去，因此应以一般过去时为主3．筛选词汇科幻故事一般为虚构的故事，要求语言比较夸张，为了吸引读者，故事的语言要生动、富于虚幻性二、增分佳句(一)科幻故事的开端1．Once upon a time, there lived a king.很久以前，有一位国王2．With science and technology developing, our lives have changed a lot in the 21st century.随着科技的发展，21世纪我们的生活发生了很大改变。

二)科幻故事的发展和高潮1．The ring suddenly began to speak, which made the brave young man very amazed.戒指突然开始说话了，这使得这位勇敢的年轻人很惊异2．No one liked to talk to Wilbur, a weak pig, except a spider named Charlotte, who treated Wilbur as her good friend. 除了蜘蛛夏绿蒂，没有人喜欢和身体虚弱的小猪韦尔伯说话，夏绿蒂把韦尔伯当作她的好朋友3．In 2146, we are flying in the air, conveying signals through our minds.在2146年，我们在空中飞翔，用意识传递信息三)科幻故事的结局They finally defeated the evil witch, living a happy life.他们最终战胜了邪恶的女巫，过上了幸福的生活[题目要求]某英文报社正在举行英文科幻故事大赛，请你根据所给出的故事的开头(不计入总词数)，续写一篇100词左右的科幻小故事参赛。

Once upon a time, a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood, wondering and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put on me and I will help you.” 第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：科幻故事属记叙文范畴；2．确定人称：主体为第三人称；3．确定时态：以一般过去时为主。

二、构思第一部分为故事的开始第二部分为故事发展的过程最后一部分提出故事的结果第二步：核心词汇想周全1．hesitate_to_do_...　　　　　犹豫做……2．put_...on 把……戴上3．invisible 看不见的4．head_for 向……走去5．approach 接近，靠近6．put_a_spell_on 用咒符镇住7．with_the_help_of_... 在……的帮助下8．remove 使消失9．together_with 和……一起10．defeat 打败第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．年轻人没有犹豫，戴上了这枚戒指简单句)The_young_man_didn't_hesitate_and_put_the_ring_on_his_finger.2．他吃惊地发现自己消失了，其他人都看不见他that宾语从句)Surprisingly,_he_discovered_that_he_disappeared_and_was_invisible_to_other_people.3．他感到更有自信了，向前面的城堡走去简单句)He_felt_more_confident_and_headed_for_the_castle_ahead.4．一靠近城堡，他就戴上了戒指，进入了城堡。

as soon as)As_soon_as_he_approached_the_castle,_he_put_on_the_ring_and_entered_the_castle.5．最终他找到了那个女孩，她被女巫施了魔咒介词＋关系代词”定语从句)Eventually,_he_found_the_girl,_on_whom_the_witch_had_put_a_spell.6．他了解到除非有人将女巫的魔棒(magical club)毁掉，否则女孩永远不能动unless条件状语从句)He_learned_that,_unless_someone_destroyed_the_witch's_magical_club,_the_girl_couldn't_move_forever.7．在戒指的帮助下，他在一个金盒中找到了魔棒并成功地将其毁掉，解除了女巫对女孩施的魔咒and连接多个并列动词)With_the_help_of_the_ring,_he_found_the_magical_club_in_a_golden_box,_destroyed_it_successfully,_and_removed_the_spell_put_on_the_girl_by_the_witch.8．这个年轻人和女孩一起打败了女巫，他们幸福地生活在一起。

简单句)The_young_man,_together_with_the_girl,_defeated_the_witch,_and_they_lived_a_happy_life_together.第四步：句式升级造亮点1．将句1和句2合并成用动词­ing形式作状语的句子The_young_man_didn't_hesitate_to_put_the_ring_on_his_finger,_surprisingly_discovering_that_he_disappeared,_invisible_to_other_people.2．用on＋动词­ing形式改写句4On_approaching_the_castle,_he_put_on_the_ring,_and_entered_the_castle.3．用动词­ing形式作状语改写句7With_the_help_of_the_ring,_he_found_the_magical_club_in_a_golden_box,_and_destroyed_it_successfully,_thus_removing_the_spell_put_on_the_girl_by_the_witch.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Once upon a time, a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood, wondering and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put on me and I will help you.”The_young_man_didn't_hesitate_to_put_the_ring_on_his_finger,_surprisingly_discovering_that_he_disappeared,_invisible_to_other_people._He_felt_more_confident_and_headed_for_the_castle_ahead._On_approaching_the_castle,_he_put_on_the_ring,_and_entered_the_castle._Eventually,_he_found_the_girl,_on_whom_the_witch_had_put_a_spell._He_learned_that,_unless_someone_destroyed_the_witch's_magical_club,_the_girl_couldn't_move_forever._With_the_help_of_the_ring,_he_found_the_magical_club_in_a_golden_box,_and_destroyed_it_successfully,_thus_removing_the_spell_put_on_the_girl_by_the_witch.The_young_man,_together_with_the_girl,_defeated_the_witch,_and_they_lived_a_happy_life_together.。