unit7 writing.ppt

￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿Unit7￿￿￿Writing Erica ZhangNo.86 Junior High SchoolWhere￿is￿the￿girl￿from?Where￿is￿the￿cute￿monster￿from?LizGusCould you give me some verbs to describe the picture?Captain Troya strange noise; Captain Troy; bird-like people with wings; mother ship选择适当的动词和名词短语造句选择适当的动词和名词短语造句LizGusCaptain Troy￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿Suddenly￿,they￿heard￿a￿strange￿noise.￿They￿looked￿up￿into￿the￿sky.￿Some￿￿bird-like￿people￿￿with￿wings￿were￿flying￿in￿the￿air.￿Many￿of￿them￿landed￿near￿the￿mother￿ship.￿They￿were￿so￿surprised￿to￿see￿the￿aliens.Liz wanted to make friends with the people of Bird World. Discuss with your classmates how she might do this. Use the ideas from the box and the example below to help you.  No one knew what to do. Then Liz had a good idea. She started to sing as she wanted to show the people of Bird World that she was friendly. Liz had a beautiful voice. Because the people of Bird World liked her song, they started to sing too. They were happy.ideareasonresultDiscuss in your group ,choose a good idea and write it down on your paper.Time :4 minsIf we put the two parts together, what can we get? Liz and Gus finally reached the landing site and saw Captain Troy. “Liz! Gus! Welcome back!” said Captain Troy. “I’m very pleased to see you. Now let’s get on the mother ship and …” Suddenly they all heard a strange noise. They looked up into the sky. Some bird-like people with wings were flying in the air. Many of them landed near the mother ship. No one knew what to do. Then Liz had a good idea. She smiled at them and started to dance as she wanted to show the people of Bird World that she was friendly. She danced beautifully. Everybody from Bird World liked her dancing very much. They started dancing too. They were happy. And so the people from the Earth and Bird World became friends!A complete storyBeginningMiddleEnding故事写作指导:1.记叙文六大要素：2.语言形式要丰富讲故事多用3.注意写作角度,如果你是“参与者”的身份记叙，请用￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿；如果你是“观察者”身份叙事，请用￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿￿。

4.注意文章的连贯性和逻辑性时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果过去时态第一人称第三人称Write your own story with the name and the place.A surprising story!A surprising story!Characters: Place:One day,…..Time:8 minsActing￿and￿evaluating(表演与评价）:￿Group : PlotPerfectGoodOKTotal:Bodylanguage PerfectGoodOKThe way of speakingPerfectGoodOKThe Best Group goes to:SummaryRemember:1.When￿we￿write￿a￿story,￿we￿need￿to￿pay￿attention￿to￿the￿past￿tense.2.￿There￿must￿be￿six￿parts￿in￿the￿story:￿when,where,who,what,how￿and￿why.Homework￿1.Make￿your￿story￿more￿interesting.2.Practise￿the￿reading￿materials￿on￿your￿students’￿Learning￿Plan.。