作文用词及句型.ppt
57页作文用词及句型表示转折的连词ButWhile (多带有“但是”和“当”双重含义)yet (但,多带有惊讶和出乎意料之意)Whereas (而,多为强烈对比的表现) 表示转折的副词however (然而)Nevertheless (然而)Nonetheless (同 nevertheless)Yet (然而)Still (仍然,有不顾前文所述之意)表示转折性对比的副词和词组InsteadOn the contraryIn comparisonBy contrast (形成鲜明对比的是)In contrast with/to表示让步的连词和词组ThoughAlthoughEven ifEven thoughDespite the fact thatIn spite of the fact that 表示让步的介词DespiteIn spite of表示原因和结果的词表示原因的连词/词组BecauseSinceAsFor表示原因的介词/词组Due toOwing toThanks toOn account of (因为,基于)Because of表示结果的连词/词组SoSo thatSo…thatSuch…that表示结果副词/词组Therefore (那么)Hence (因此)ConsequentlyThus (从而,这样)As a result表示原因导致结果的动词/词组Lead to (导致)Contribute to (对…作出贡献)Account for (说明…的原因)Be responsible forResult inBring about (招致)表示结果源于原因的动词/词组Lie in (在于)Result fromBe attributed to (被归因于)Come from (来自于)Derive from (从…衍生而来)Originate from (源于,起源于) 表示“重要”的词 ?ImportantVitalCrucialNecessaryEssentialIndispensableUrgentImmediateSevereSeriousIrreversible (无法挽回的)Irreparable (无法挽回的)DisastrousCatastrophic优美句式的三个标准完整统一 连贯流畅精炼简洁完整统一 优美的句子必须表达统一的、完整的思想内容,而不是多个彼此无关的意义的堆彻。
As we were driving out in the country, we met a man riding a bicycle, and we passed a truck fully loaded with vegetables, and on our way we stopped at a grocer’s to get some fruit.应该改为三个句子并突出其关联性As we were driving out into the country, we met a man riding a bicycle. Later we passed a truck fully loaded with vegetables. On our way back, we stopped at a grocer’s to get some fruit. 连贯流畅具有连贯性亦是优秀句式的一个要素它要求句中相关联的词语词序正确,能将相互间的关系表达得清楚、明白It’s raining. I didn’t bring an umbrella with me. I was wet.It’s raining, but I didn’t bring an umbrella with me. So I was wet.表示因果的Therefore, consequently, thus, hence, as, for, because of, for this reason, due to, owing to, thanks to, on that account, in this way…表示递进的Furthermore, moreover, besides, also, too, likewise, what’s more, in addition表示转折的But, however, yet, unless, instead, unlike, regardless, except for, in contrast, on the other hand表示让步的Though, even so, even though, despite that表示强调的Indeed, certainly, naturally, obviously, clearly, actually, surely, of course, as a matter of fact, in this case, anyway, in any case, in particular表示比较关系的Like, similarly, likewise, despite, unlike, nevertheless, while, still, conversely, accordingly, meanwhile, on the contrary, equally important, at the same time表示列举的Namely, incidentally, for exle, to illustrate, a case in point表示时空关系的First, second, finally, before, later, meanwhile, next, eventually, since then, after a while, to begin with, at first, at last, beyond, farther, close to, in front of, in the centre of, opposite to 精炼简洁写作时要注意避免重复、累赘的用词,力求用精炼的语言把意思表达清楚。
She will come back home in the early part of May.She will come back home in early May.We must find some solution to solve the problem.We must find some solution to /for the problem.I think in my mind that I am in trouble now.I think I’m in trouble now.一 简单句变长句句型一:并列句1. 以and 为代表的(包括and, both…and, not only…but also…, neither…nor…等)2. 以 or为代表的(包括or, either…or等)表示选择的并列连词3. 以but为代表的(包括but, not…but, while, whereas, only, yet等)表示语义转折和对比的并列连词并列句是零散而又相互关联的句子的简单相加He was seriously ill.He has to have a lung transplant.He was seriously ill and has to have a lung transplant.安全系数高还有其他合并方法吗?Since the boy was seriously ill, he has to have a lung transplant. (原因状语句)Being seriously ill, the boy has to have a lung transplant. (非谓语状语句)It is because the serious illness that the boy has to have a lung transplant. (强调句)The boy, who was serious ill, has to have a lung transplant. (从句)The boy being seriously ill, has to have a lung transplant. (独立主格)句型二:附加句插入语同位语定语从句(略)财富可以带来什么?First of all, money can buy more things.Apart from that, wealth enables one to travel around the world.Last but not least, wealth can help people to have access to a better education.试试插入语:First of all, very obviously, money can buy more things.Apart from that, without and doubt, wealth enables one to travel around the world.Last but not least, as far as I am concerned, wealth can help people to have access to a better education.同位语Mr. Yu is very kind and hospitable.Mr. Yu, our principal of the high school, is very kind and hospitable.I asked three people to spend the birthday with me.I asked three people, intimate friends since childhood, to spend the birthday with me.二,多个短句合并为一个长句句型一:分词短语作状语I am singing. I’m dancing. I’m so happy.Singing and dancing, I am so happy.The young people are pressured by the competition in the domestic society. They also filled with the dream to know more about the world. So they struggle for the overseas diploma.Pressured by the competition in the domestic society and filled with the dream to know more about the world, the young people struggle for the overseas diploma.主语一致从山顶上看,这座城市十分漂亮。
Seeing from the top of the mountain, the city is very beautiful.Seeing from the top of the mountain, I find it is very beautiful.Seen from the top of the mountain, the city is very beautiful.考虑了这些因素,问题就可以解决了Considering these factors, the problem will be solved.All these factors considered, the problem will be solved. (独立主格) 句型二:非生命主语It is widely believed/thought/accepted that knowledge is power.It is universally acknowledged that language is power.It can not be denied that the cus life is increasingly expensive.It must be pointed out that time and tide wait for no man.It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard work.It can be seen from this case that there is no difficulty in the world we can not overcome.It has been proved that every substance, no matter what it is, made up of atoms.There be 句型There is a growing agreement/realization/awareness that money is not everything.There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any difficulties.There is no denying that … THINK OVER…If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior to cars.A careful comparison of bicycles with cars will show the superiority of the former to the latter.Rewrite the following sentences by using impersonal subjects.Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.More and more people agree that women should enjoy full equality with men.If we only apply book knowledge, we will not achieve success as soon as we always expect.If we can better understand the great pressure of population growth, we will have a correct attitude towards family planning.KEYIt is widely accepted that birth control is quite necessary in China.There is a growing agreement that women should enjoy full equality with men.The application of book knowledge alone will not bring us success as we always expect.A better understanding of the great pressure of population growth will bring us a correct attitude towards family planning.巧用语法难点被动语态倒装被动语态 我们要出台法律法规来禁止假冒伪劣产品的生产和流通。
Laws and regulations should be worked out to ban the manufacture and circulation of fake and shoddy goods.THINK OVER…We are making great efforts to improve our English.We know very little about the nature of human beings.’Because of social demands, there appear many evening schools.We may think more of the elderly who live apart from their children.keyGreat efforts should be made to improve our English.Little is known about the nature of human beings.Because of social demands, many evening schools are called into existence.More attention should be paid to the elderly who live apart from their children.倒装句Only through sheer luck did he manage to get some tickets.Not only did he complain about the food , he also refused to pay for it.亮点在最后我们绝不能袖手旁观。
On no account /by no means can we stand by and do nothing.只有这样才能防止考试作弊的发生Only in this way/by doing that can we prevent the examination cheating from happening.。





