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—)Fire Prevention onCampus1 •前段时间校园火灾频发， 造成生命和财产损失2 •分析火灾发生的原因3•作为学生，如何预防校园 火灾发生•审题概述•这是一分析火灾原因和如 何预防火灾为中心的文章， 撰写时重点即在于此开篇 综述校园火灾频发情形及 造成的生命和财产损失，然 后说明火灾原因，最后提出 可能的火灾预防措施第一 段，主要概述；第二段，说 明原因；第三段，详细论述 措施范文】Fire Prevention on CampusPeople are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported — houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking,"What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?55A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes・ For example, three of these fires were caused by the students9 use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In other cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second,double-check candles,heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.◊第一段思路点评:概述并 引入下文◊语言点提示：(1 )此句 What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?常可作为过渡 句，引出下文(2)注意描述有关火灾客 观事实，多使用被动语态， 女［1 are alarmed by， were reported， were burned down, were damaged, Faced witho◊第二段思路点评:论述火 灾的主要原因是使用电热 水器,还有造成火灾的次要 原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱 扔烟蒂◊语言点提示： electric water-heaters 电热 水器◊第三段思路点评:详述预 防火灾的三点措施,注意使 用连接词语first, second, lastly o◊语言点提示：take precautions 采取预防 措施fire extinguisher 灭火器（二）Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生2. 物品被盗的原因3. 学生如何加强防盗意识 •审题概述•这是一篇论述校园物品被 盗和加强防盗意识的文章。

第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃 案件发生的情况第二段， 主要分析校园物品被盗的 原因第三段，主要阐述学 生怎样增强防盗意识范文】Enhance Awareness toGuard against CampusThefts"If you don't want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, yoifd better put them on in sleep/5 goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important ・ For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they511 also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call・ These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the lightmonsters ・In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended ・ Take them wherever you go. In addition, if s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms ・ ◊第一段思路点评：陈述校 园盗窃案件发生的情况 ◊ 语言点提示：it seems that 此句型表示一种可能性 ◊第二段思路点评:说明被 盗原因◊语言点提示：(1) What makes students the easy targets?jt匕句弓丨出 下文(2) anti-theft alertness 防 盗意识(3) lack of alertness 缺乏 警惕(4) light-fingered 小偷小 摸的、惯行扒窃的◊第三段思路点评：阐述如 何加强防盗意识◊语言点提示:注意关联词 语 in the first place， Besides, In addition 的使用 可使行文更富逻辑性。

三) How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?1.网络提供给了人们丰富 多彩和便捷的生活2 •很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行3 •你对网络依赖症的看法 •审题概述・本文是一篇论述你对网络 与人们生活关系的文章第 一段，侧重简述网络给人们 生活的多彩、便利第二段， 详述网络与人们生活的紧 密度第三段，论述对网络 依赖的观点范文一】How Will Our Life Go onwithout Internet?If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20 th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modem people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwiderecognitio n. Politicalcampaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they5 d seek internationalcooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on th。