中考人教版英语写作-话题11-经历与感受课件.ppt

返回目录,话题11 经历与感受,,,,*,*,,*,,,,,,,,,,,,,返回目录,话题,1,人物介绍,,,,*,*,,*,,分析河南近10年中招真题书面表达可知，“经历与感受”这一话题主要考查：①自己的经历与感受，如2017年“I did it！”， 2016年“The biggest personal change I,’,ve ever made”；②他人的经历对自己的影响，如2011年通过刘伟的故事得到什么样的启示命题探索,分析河南近10年中招真题书面表达可知，“经历,,教材链接,教材链接,(2017河南)我们每天都要做很多事情，有些还很棘手请以“,I did it！,”为题并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，,,,描述一件你完成的棘手事情,典例剖析,审,标,题：,棘手的事情我做到了,审,文体：,记叙,文,审人称：第一人称,审时态：一般过去时,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,(2017河南)我们每天都要做很多事情，有些还很棘手请以“,1.,要求：,1),你做了什么事情；,2),你是如何做那件事情的；,3),你,做完那件事情后的感受,。

2. 要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；,2)词数80左右审时态：一般现在时,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,1.要求：1)你做了什么事情；审时态：一般现在时一二,,1. Two years ago, I didn,’,t,have the courage to,answer questions in class.,2.,It was that time that,I decided to help more people in need.,3. My father told me a story,on my way home,and he helped me to plan my time properly.,1,角度,介绍经历,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,好 句 记 背,1角度介绍经历一二好 句 记 背,,4. She,encouraged me,to be kind to others and learn to,communicate with others.,5. The young man next to our table,spoke,and laughed,loudly,.,6. I,was about to,take a shower when the phone rang last night.,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,4. She encouraged me to be ki,,1. 三年前，我没有勇气承认自己的错误。

2. 就是在那个时候我决定努力学习3. 在回家的路上，我发现地上有一个钱包Three years ago, I didn,’,t have the courage to admit my mistakes.,It was that time that I decided to study hard.,On my way home, I found a wallet on the ground.,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,句 子 仿 写,,Three years ago, I didn’t hav,,4. 我的老师鼓励我积极参加课外活动5. 坐在我旁边的女孩大声说话很长时间6. 我正准备打扫教室的时候我的好朋友进来了My teacher encouraged me to take an active part in after­class activities.,The girl next to me spoke loudly for a long time.,I was about to clean the classroom when my best friend came in.,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,My teacher encouraged me to ta,,1. She lost her favorite notebook.,→She lost her favorite notebook. How upset she was!,2. I could hardly think clearly after that terrible earthquake.,→I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that terrible earthquake. [八(下)Unit 5 P38],2,角度,介绍感受,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,好 句 记 背,2角度介绍感受一二好 句 记 背,3. I have no idea on how to remember new words quickly.,→I often feel stressed because I have no idea on how to remember new words quickly.,4. I won the first prize in the reading competition.,→I won the first prize in the reading competition. I was really happy that day.,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,3. I have no idea on how to re,,1. I got a better result in the monthly exam. (扩写感受),_______________________________________________________,2. He didn,’,t know what to say. (扩写感受),_______________________________________________________,3. I don,’,t want to speak in front of so many people.(扩写感受),_______________________________________________________,______________________________________,_________________,I got a better result in the monthly exam. How excited I was！,He was so nervous that he didn,’,t know what to say.,I feel so worried and afraid because I don,’,t want to speak in,front of so many people.,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,句 子 扩 写,,I got a better result in the,,4. They said there were no tickets left.(扩写感受),____________________________________________________,5. I talked back to my parents yesterday. (扩写感受),____________________________________________________,They said there were no tickets left. I was unhappy that day.,I talked back to my parents yesterday. I feel regretful now.,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,They said there were no ticke,,1. His story,taught me not to,give up my dream and work hard to make it come true.,2.,From his experience,, I realized that helping others can make the world more beautiful and can let others respect us at the same time.,3. His words touched my heart,and I would remember,them forever.,3,角度,他人经历对自己的影响,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,好 句 记 背,3角度他人经历对自己的影响一二好 句 记 背,,1. 这次经历教会我不要小瞧别人。

2. 从她的经历中，我意识到了微笑在日常生活中的重要性3. 他温暖的话给了我勇气和自信，我会永远记住他的支持This experience taught me not to look down upon others.,From her experience, I realized the importance of smiling in daily life.,His warm words gave me courage and confidence and I would remember his support forever.,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,句 子 仿 写,,This experience taught me not,,Last year, I met a difficult situation. I ①___,______________,_________________________________________________,(棘手的事情). I didn,’,t know what I should do at first. And I felt,②_,___________________________,_(对事情的感受)．Then I ③__________________,__________________________________,(应对的办法).,failed the exam/ couldn’t understand what the teacher said in class/...,asked the teacher for help/ reviewed the lessons carefully/...,disappointed/ stressed/...,经历及感受,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,练语段,语段练习,1,Last year, I met a difficult,Finally, I ④_______,_________,________,_________________,____,____________,(最后的结果). I ⑤_,____,_,__,____,__,______________,(对结果的感受)．,was so satisfied/ was excited/...,got a high score in the final exam/ made progress in English/...,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,Finally, I ④__________________,⑥___________,_______________________________________________________________________________,______,_________________________________________,___,_,(简单描述励志的经历). As a student, I,’,ve learned a lot from his/her story.,Liu Wei lost his left arm by accident but he didn’t give up his dream of being a pianist/ She/ He failed many times to do the research, but she/ he didn’t give up/...,他人经历对自己的影响,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,语段练习,2,⑥_____________________________,We may meet a lot of difficulties in our life, but we should ⑦____,_______________________________________,__________,______________________________,(影响1). No matter how hard life is, ⑧______,_______________,______________,_______,_______________________,(影响2),believe that our dream will come true by working hard/ never lose confidence in ourselves/...,we won’t fail unless we give up our hope/ we should keep on going/...,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,We may meet a lot of difficul,I did it!,How nervous I was,when I was told to give a speech in front of my classs! It was my first speech and I didn’t know what to do.,My teacher,encouraged me,and gave me some useful advice. After I chose a topic I liked best, I watched videos about how to be a good speaker and I learnt a lot of skills. Then I,practiced and practiced,. Finally, the big day came.,I did it! Everyone loved my speech. I,was so proud of,myself.,一,阶,,审,好,题,,三,阶,,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,,二,阶,,写,好,句,成篇章,I did it!一二成篇章,,写作练兵,,写作练兵,,人生中有很多第一次做的事，如第一次游泳，第一次赢得比赛……你记忆最深的是什么呢？请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。

1. 要点：1)这件事情是什么；,2)这件事情发生的过程；,3)你的感受2. 要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；,2)词数,10,0左右2020,新变化,写作练兵写作练兵,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,,写作练兵,As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I climbed the mountain.,Three years ago, all students in my class were asked to climb a mountain. It was my first time to do things like this. I felt very excited at first. We set off at 8 a．m. in the morning and I supposed it might be an easy journey. However, as time went by, someone wanted to give up.,______________________________,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,,写作练兵,The teacher encouraged us to reach the top of the mountain. Although in the end we were tired, we were really attracted by the scenery at the top and our feelings can’t be expressed by words.,From that time, I learned not to give up when facing difficulties. Only when I keep doing it and finish it can I have a sense of achievement.,______________________________,,当不定式(短语)、动名词(短语)或从句在某个句子中作宾语时，为保持句子结构平衡，避免句式结构的混乱，常用it作形式宾语，而将真正的宾语放在句尾，此时it仍只起先行引导作用，本身无词义。

巧,用,it,作,形,式,主,语,和,形,式,宾语,当不定式(短语)、动名词(短语)或从句在某个句子中作宾语时,教材链接,1. it作形式主语：We should learn English well. It’s important.,,It,is important for us,to learn,English well.,2. it作形式宾语：We must finish the task on time. We find it hard.,We find,it,hard,to finish,the task on time.,,,,巧,用,it,作,形,式,主,语,和,形,式,宾语,句式连接范例,,教材链接1. it作形式主语：We should learn,教材链接,1. 我们做决定的时候到了2. 这个问题太难以至于不能解决3. 我发现通过这种方式学习很容易It is time for us to make decisions.,The question is too difficult to solve.,小试牛刀,,,I find it easy to learn in this way.,,巧,用,it,作,形,式,主,语,和,形,式,宾语,教材链接1. 我们做决定的时候到了。

It is time f,教材链接,4. We should take action from now on. It,’,s important.(用it作形式主语),_______________________________________________________,5. Is it necessary to wait in line? What do you think？(用it作形式宾语),_______________________________________________________,It’s important for us to take action from now on.,Do you think it necessary to wait in line?,,巧,用,it,作,形,式,主,语,和,形,式,宾语,教材链接4. We should take action f,。